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greeneyeswink — Wrists and Steel

Published: 2002-12-12 02:28:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 131; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 15
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Description Wrists and Steel


The world now cold
My soul is weary
This breath shall be my last.
The scars I have
From those selfish beings
They take their toll and fast.
Slits wrists and steel
Fill my visage
The blood so dark so thick.
These people harsh
Have driven me
To only think like this.
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Comments: 3

mooncougar [2002-12-12 06:15:32 +0000 UTC]

It is an expression of yourself, and therefore very personal. I often use my rawest emotions, fears and thoughts for poetry. They make it primal and textured, and in my opinion, honest poetry is best. I am disappointed that yours is so short. I should liked to have dwelt in your emotion a little longer. I like it though.

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nicetry-badluck [2002-12-12 03:16:20 +0000 UTC]

short suicidal poems own-
heheh- cheer up-

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ladyo [2002-12-12 02:32:28 +0000 UTC]

...Mary...what to do?.....it's a good poem...but it worries me.......

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