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Gojira012 [2013-05-20 04:50:05 +0000 UTC]
A little harsh to the dragons ain't it
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Gojira012 In reply to GreenSonic21 [2013-05-20 04:53:31 +0000 UTC]
Especially since I made up concepts where there was a reason for their behavior
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HedgehogNinja94 [2013-04-15 00:39:29 +0000 UTC]
Hey, just came up with a cool idea.
I think the song "Rules of Nature" from Metal Gear Rising would fit perfectly with the scene where Silver and the others fight the teen dragons.
Heck, even one of the lyrics is "Being tracked by a starving beast. Looking for it's daily feast.".
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GreenSonic21 In reply to HedgehogNinja94 [2013-04-15 00:49:48 +0000 UTC]
Yeah... Yes, that will do nicely. It'll definitely make a nice addition to the scene. Be another nice little nod to Silver's English voice actor being the same as Raiden's. And maybe I could use it for the real battle later...
I'm a little busy right now, but I'll make the change in a bit, okay?
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Cartoonguy133 [2012-12-16 02:44:10 +0000 UTC]
Have you thought of a level for Sonic Colors yet? I'm hoping for either Starlight Carnival or Aquatic Park? Also, I hope Vinyl Scratch and Octavia make an appearance.
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GreenSonic21 In reply to Cartoonguy133 [2012-12-16 03:58:00 +0000 UTC]
I've been thinking of all the "Sonic Colors" levels since I've started writing this story, save for Tropical Resort, Planet Wisp, and Terminal Velocity. Starlight Carnival has recently reappeared in "Sonic & All-Stars Racing Transformed" and Dragon Road kind of inspired Aquatic Park... I think I've made up my mind, but...
Ah, two fan favorites. Well, keep an eye out. They may just come "shooting" into the story at some point.
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Cartoonguy133 In reply to GreenSonic21 [2012-12-18 17:27:17 +0000 UTC]
So, has that narrowed it down to Asteroid Coaster? Have you decided on what Wisps you're going to use? That is if you are using them.
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GreenSonic21 In reply to Cartoonguy133 [2012-12-18 17:51:19 +0000 UTC]
I am planning to use the Wisps, and it's narrowed down to either Sweet Mountain or Asteroid Coaster.
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FerrumFlos1st [2012-11-25 14:03:14 +0000 UTC]
Will Mephiles be making any further appearances or his part was a one-shot?
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The-Only-Nyx-Sparkle In reply to GreenSonic21 [2012-11-25 19:00:28 +0000 UTC]
Which stage from Sonic Unleashed are you planning to use in the next chapter?
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The-Only-Nyx-Sparkle In reply to GreenSonic21 [2012-11-25 23:02:25 +0000 UTC]
I'd see them in Arid Sands, dunno what you think about it, but it could make a good scenario out there with some thinking, don't you think?
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GreenSonic21 In reply to The-Only-Nyx-Sparkle [2012-11-25 23:19:06 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, it could. But it could also be sweltering if you went to a place like that and were improperly dressed for it.
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GreenSonic21 In reply to The-Only-Nyx-Sparkle [2012-11-25 23:30:01 +0000 UTC]
It has to do with what I'm planning for the next chapter. I see a mare in the next chapter. A masked mare...
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The-Only-Nyx-Sparkle In reply to GreenSonic21 [2012-11-25 23:57:47 +0000 UTC]
Yeah from the hing you gave, I think it'll be Trixie disguised as Mare Do Well.
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sonicandmario826 [2012-11-23 02:22:17 +0000 UTC]
for the singing you can have references to other sonic and mlp songs in it
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GreenSonic21 In reply to sonicandmario826 [2012-11-23 02:42:30 +0000 UTC]
Er... I'm really not a good songwriter. Or poet. I was thinking of maybe having several characters sing a real song. One that fits the situation at hand/hoof.
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sonicandmario826 In reply to GreenSonic21 [2012-11-23 03:41:58 +0000 UTC]
thats fine writing a song is tuff i couldn't write one to save my life
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sonicandmario826 [2012-11-20 23:56:06 +0000 UTC]
i have an idea if dragon road is chosen you can reference sonic and chips food eating contest but instead have it between sonic and pinkie pie
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GreenSonic21 In reply to sonicandmario826 [2012-11-21 00:52:49 +0000 UTC]
That's an idea I haven't thought about. Thanks for the suggestion!
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Rexaura888 [2012-11-18 22:54:47 +0000 UTC]
Liking the story so far. Also wanted to point out that you forgot to credit the Sonic OVA reference that Applejack made, and yes: very interesting theory about the Sol Dimension and the future from Sonic 06, not too different from my own it seems aside from the fact that in my theory, the Sol Dimension and the future are one in the same.
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GreenSonic21 In reply to Rexaura888 [2012-11-18 23:05:23 +0000 UTC]
Heh... yeah, I guess I forgot to point that out. Typically, I point out the more subtle things I put in my work and sometimes forget to mention things that aren't so subtle.
Hm... That or maybe the Ifrit's dimension is the same dimension as the Sol Dimension, seeing as the Chaotic Inferno Zone resembles Crisis City.
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sonicandmario826 [2012-11-18 15:18:39 +0000 UTC]
That was great are we going to see mephilis again if thats him im having doubts after they mentioned the mismatched shadow and i think singing would be interesting since no one ever did it with a fanfic having all these characters before. And for an unleashed level i liked dragon road better than the city
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GreenSonic21 In reply to sonicandmario826 [2012-11-18 20:40:03 +0000 UTC]
Whoever it was will be making an appearance later on. What he did to Silver is a hint as to who he is...
Glad to hear it. I'm going to try to make it interesting with the singing.
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hypershadic247 [2012-11-18 15:07:33 +0000 UTC]
you are a true brony and sonic fan this story is so good you are really great writer. Only if I was as good as you in writing my stories
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DarkAeroMirage [2012-11-18 10:05:09 +0000 UTC]
I really love the references made in this story, it is just so funny.
BTW, I'm going to be commenting here on deviantART, because it is easier that way... also, good choice in music.
As for the Unleashed Stage... I'd say try out Dragon Road.
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GreenSonic21 In reply to DarkAeroMirage [2012-11-18 20:41:24 +0000 UTC]
Glad to hear you think there are parts that are funny. Sometimes, I think I'm trying to be funny when I'm really not.
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dragonwar23 [2012-11-18 03:58:37 +0000 UTC]
The wait was so worth it!
--
In the brightest day and in the darkest night,
No evil force shall escape our might,
When darkness falls and hope is lost,
Beware the power of Harmony's Light!
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HedgehogNinja94 [2012-11-18 00:20:35 +0000 UTC]
Very good chapter. Nice twist with Blaze near the end with the reference to my comic.
You three dragons better consider yourselves lucky I didn't get my hands on you.
My vote for the Unleashed stage is Dragon Road.
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stargazerdragon [2012-11-17 20:11:43 +0000 UTC]
Nice one trying to copy sonic ova XD
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