Comments: 36
rikuwolf [2012-10-11 20:06:44 +0000 UTC]
WOWW
this is amazing ~!!
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str00p [2011-11-08 04:41:20 +0000 UTC]
I think you did everything pretty badaz-y. ;D-b
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GreyeWolf In reply to str00p [2011-11-19 09:08:07 +0000 UTC]
X3 Thank you!
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Lunise [2011-11-07 01:52:23 +0000 UTC]
The lightning doesn't look half bad if I do say so myself! I also love how you did the colors so much. I'm glad that Raven ended up really liking it, too! It's clear that you spent a lot of effort working on this.
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Rockclanhawkstar [2011-11-06 23:49:36 +0000 UTC]
I am sorry to hear that u have a overdue trade
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Trinitite [2011-11-06 20:04:35 +0000 UTC]
Everything looks great except for the lightening... I have pretty easy way to make lightning if you want to hear it.
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Trinitite In reply to GreyeWolf [2011-11-07 23:12:09 +0000 UTC]
(Everything in this is really well done, I realize that my earlier comment could be veiwed negatively)
Lightning follows the path of least resistance through the air, coming up through the ground (though it's to fast for us to see). this means that there are no straight lines at all (which are in your lightning). Also, lightening often but not always follows a fractle pattern, meaning that it has repeating shapes that look the same as you zoom in. If you use your main body shape of the lightning to make the other branches it will look more natural. (it doesn't have to be cut and paste, but it's normally easiest)
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roney2011 [2011-11-06 18:41:46 +0000 UTC]
excellent drawing and very nice colors and details
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GreyeWolf In reply to roney2011 [2011-11-07 11:00:34 +0000 UTC]
^-^ Thank you so much!
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Meruseitai [2011-11-06 14:11:36 +0000 UTC]
very cool |D i can almost feel the electric atmosphere of the setting with this!
as for little crits *is commenting from canine improvement group :'D*~
my favorite part is the fur... it looks soft and has shape, especially around the head/neck area, without being overly detailed and staying with a more cartoon look c: when it comes to the anatomy, the front legs are a bit long and the body is a bit too short compared to the head. for grass... grass is a pain x'D it took me a long time to get used to it but its best to have all the grass moving in a consistent way, depending on the wind. it would also be consistent with the direction the character's fur is flowing. lightning is an interesting and challenging subject, too! it should be a little more squiggly and less straight. example: [link] it tends to have one main bright bolt and lots of dimmer bolts branching off of it.
i hope that helps! c:
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dragonrace [2011-11-06 05:52:10 +0000 UTC]
awesome one!
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DragonLover4Ever [2011-11-06 04:05:54 +0000 UTC]
I really like how you did the fur!!
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R0Z3H [2011-11-06 03:56:01 +0000 UTC]
ooh the grass looks really cool! I love the lighting<3
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R0Z3H In reply to GreyeWolf [2011-11-06 04:03:00 +0000 UTC]
No problem!^-^
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