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Grzegorz-Kawka — Autumn for my wife - damaged original by-nc-nd

Published: 2017-06-11 12:58:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 576; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 0
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Description Oil Pastels, on a laminate (cause of death...) sized 40cm x 30cm. Place - mixed memories from Wroclaw.

Thanks goes to jugglejoe for creative suggestions. Unfortunatelly improvements are only in limited range. Basic materials doesn't allowed for more. Pity. But now I think I'm kinda glad about the overall look.

Enjoy the final version.

P.S. I'm sorry but this one is no longer an existing traditional piece because of wrinkled surface all over. Very badly
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Comments: 12

Cozmia [2018-05-01 03:21:37 +0000 UTC]

Such a dreamy feel to this, beautiful work!

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Grzegorz-Kawka In reply to Cozmia [2018-05-01 14:32:51 +0000 UTC]

Right now only as a photo. :/

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fmr0 [2018-03-09 10:36:10 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful artwork!                

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Grzegorz-Kawka In reply to fmr0 [2018-03-10 11:47:40 +0000 UTC]

Unfortunately only a memory of this has left...
One of those works you put most of your heart in...
And it's ruined now beacuse of a stupid mistake.
This stupid situation + private problems got me grounded for a pretty long time with no painting.
...I can't pull myself together...
Thank you very much for your very kind words.

All best.

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fmr0 In reply to Grzegorz-Kawka [2018-03-10 21:39:05 +0000 UTC]

It is very sad, really.
But fortunately, at least you still have a digital copy of your artwork.

The choice of the substrate is very important.

It is better to choose a paper or a cardboard with a bit of tooth to hold the pigments.

Good luck and all the best!


             

    

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Grzegorz-Kawka In reply to fmr0 [2018-03-11 12:49:50 +0000 UTC]

Now I know what NOT to choose to create on next time.
Sadly...

Thanks for favs from other account.

Btw. Reksio rules.

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fmr0 In reply to Grzegorz-Kawka [2018-03-12 12:02:15 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome! 

I love dogs.       

And yes, Reksio rules! 

   
   

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jugglejoe [2017-06-13 01:10:34 +0000 UTC]

great job! I really like the leaves in the foreground and the fall colors. The background might be a touch too blended. and it might need something in the mid ground. But then again, it might be perfect as is. It reminds me of Monet's Rushes at Argenteuil.
www.wikiart.org/en/claude-mone…

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Grzegorz-Kawka In reply to jugglejoe [2017-06-13 06:47:18 +0000 UTC]

Mistakes at basics:

1. Blending in background is an effect of using too many layers of oil pastels without a fixative. So it's blending after touching just anything.
 
I've already treat it with fixative but it was too late. Fixative at this point over painted with oil pastels is rolling and it's taking off from the ground.

2. And there is another case. Canvas. Or a laminate I've use for this pic.
It's nice for blending but it's not so good with absorbing pigments.

After a while, I will try my best to make some improvements. But I think I need to simply find another base materials for another piece.

Thank you very much for such an essential comment. Really helpful. Confirms all my thoughts.

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GersifGalsana [2017-06-12 04:31:09 +0000 UTC]

I like it .

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Grzegorz-Kawka In reply to GersifGalsana [2017-06-12 04:56:50 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad.  

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GersifGalsana In reply to Grzegorz-Kawka [2017-06-12 06:13:33 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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