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Published: 2013-06-26 16:43:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 993; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 2
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Description A super recent short story I came up that I decided to draw out~~
thanks to my cintiq~ the process was much easier and faster~~

not a grandiose story, but a simple and cliche one~ but hey I like it so SUSH~!!


In this C.A.R.E AU, Rai is a freak of nature, a circus attraction titled "Child of the Bird."
Era, a regular farm girl gets to visit her uncle for a summer and got to attend the attraction. She loved all of the attraction, but the Child of the Bird most of all since it inspired her to draw a lot. Having always been inspired by birds and their graceful wings, she would come to see Rai as often as she can, sometimes tying to use him as a reference for her sketches.

Rai, since trapped in his cage and treated as an object most of his life, enjoyed in Era's presence. There were many who came to see him, but only Era seem to come regularly, always eager to see him. Though the relationship was one sided, Rai grew fond of her and he himself anticipated to see Era the next day.

However the end of Summer came and Era had to return back to her place and she bid her final good bye to Rai. Rai did not wanted Era to leave and that strong emotion coupled with his desired to leave triggered something inside of him.

The thing about Rai's wings is actually a protective guardian spirit of his mother in the form of a pair of wings. Whenever Rai dreaded his current situation or was in danger, the spirit will protect him by allowing him to flee from that situation. When Rai strongly felt "I need to get out here, I want to see Era," the Wings grew in an enormous size, breaking the cage and allowed Rai to escape the circus.

The Wings carried Rai nearby Era's family farm. When Rai arrived, the wings disintegrated and Rai became a normal boy (until he was in that tight/desperate situation again). Since Rai was now too far from the Circus, and pretty much had no where to return, Era and her family, allows Rai to stay with them.

....
and the Story is supposed to continue but for now this is all I have.

One Key concept of this story lies in Rai's Wings.
- it is only a defensive mechanism. When they sprout, that means Rai is distressed and dreads being where he is now.
- The formation of the wings closely tied to Rai's emotion and desire.
- Until he met Era, he mainly used the Wings to escape. The wings always symbolized Rai's distress
- Era was still very fond of Rai's wings, so just for her, he desired to have wings for the first time, not as an escape mechanism, but as a form of inspiration and symbol of hope for the sake of others.
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Comments: 13

bemewhenimgone [2013-06-27 18:51:06 +0000 UTC]

so cute omg you come up with such cute stories ;u; i hope you make more of this au!

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haeunee2 In reply to bemewhenimgone [2013-06-29 08:26:56 +0000 UTC]

Lol~ I need you once again~~ the only reason why I wanted to come up with this "AU" was because I wanted an inverse Idea;;; where something positive is negative and negative is postitive.

the inverse concept is this:
- usually a ghost/haunting is negative, but by making it a mom ghost, I made it a bit softer. Sort of like the movie "mama" the mom ghost does protect Rai, but still its her overprotectiveness that cause her to still linger with Rai in the form of wings

- The wings are supposed to be symbol of freedom and limitlessness, but in this case, it caused Rai to live a life as a freak and to Rai, it's a symbol of his greatest limit = he never tries to face his problems, he always tries to run away
- Again, whenever the wings form = it reveals the unhappy state of Rai

;;; and again;;; whenever I come up with a concept;;; I want to force it in a story some how;; lol

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bemewhenimgone In reply to haeunee2 [2013-07-13 08:17:24 +0000 UTC]

that's not such a bad thing though! and you've certainly got great ideas in here for a story i really like the inverses you put in there, it's not something one immediately thinks of so it's a bit unexpected but it works!

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haeunee2 In reply to bemewhenimgone [2013-07-13 10:00:26 +0000 UTC]

Yay~~ the ending in the end I decided to just make a cliche one~ heheheheheh

Era teaching Rai how to become independent lol
= later Rai will produce his own wings out of his own will and the mother spirit will leave him because she realizes that Rai is no longer a little baby anymore

yeah;; that sorta stuff~

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bemewhenimgone In reply to haeunee2 [2013-07-14 05:50:38 +0000 UTC]

meh cliche is no big deal if it's still good and sweet and this definitely is! (and there are plenty of successful stories that are built on cliches anyway )

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haeunee2 In reply to bemewhenimgone [2013-07-15 01:57:56 +0000 UTC]

I guess there are ppl who still love the classics~ lol

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VienaRyougi [2013-06-26 21:05:20 +0000 UTC]

how cute QwQ ~<3

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haeunee2 In reply to VienaRyougi [2013-06-26 23:38:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!^^

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21TheMaskedGentleman [2013-06-26 17:56:53 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!! ^^ I like how this story will turn out!

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haeunee2 In reply to 21TheMaskedGentleman [2013-06-26 23:38:45 +0000 UTC]

hehehe thanks~

coming from a writer like you~ its an honor~

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RandomnessArt213 [2013-06-26 16:43:30 +0000 UTC]

Cute

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haeunee2 In reply to RandomnessArt213 [2013-06-26 23:38:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks~^^

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RandomnessArt213 In reply to haeunee2 [2013-06-27 00:22:55 +0000 UTC]

Np~ C:

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