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Contest prize for *Kumiko-kawaii !! Hope you like it!2010 Haildawn
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i love the black and red! i like how yu did the face. sneaky
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I actaully very much like this. shading is good, and the face is awesome!
Somehow, the body seems a little unnatural looking to me... the front leg closest to us seems a bit too long, and I dont think the back legs would be able to do that on a real wolf...
But it is actually a really hard pose to nail, and I think you did vvery well considering how hard this pose is to pull off
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Thanks! And yeah I know, the anatomy in this is WAYYYY off. Oh well, I know where I went wrong now so I'll be ready for next time. ^^ Thanks for the crit!~
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Gah, I'm terribly sorry, but I really don't have the time to be doing requests. :c As much as I'd love to draw for you, I just can't find enough time for all the people that ask me to draw things for them all the time. I'm so sorry!
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Awh. It's okay :c
I understand.
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While I agree with the critique from the last guy(I was scrolling down to see if anyone mentioned the pose because it bothered me too), I wanted to applaud you for handling the rudeness so well. XD There are too few artists who can take blows like that. Anyway, I like your drawing style, and though the pose does seem contorted at second glance, you'll do better next time. I'm not sure how you construct your drawings, but try forming the body as a long box and shaping the rectangle in perspective, putting the limbs where they need to go, etc. That way the hind quarters won't seem disconnected from the torso as what seems to have happened here. Live and learn! I have trouble drawing quadropeds in general because of different perspectives, so props to you for challenging yourself!
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Haha thank you! That person was actually really helpful and told me a lot of things I could fix, so they did help me out in a great deal. 
BUT ANYWAY, thanks so much for the comment, I'll keep that in mind!
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No problem! And you're absolutely right, but those are the trolling type of critiques and deserve about as much attention as they paid to their grammar. 
Take care!
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That pose... is awkward.
No, really, it's awkward as fuck. The back end of the wolf suggests he's jumping or running away from us, but somewhere in the middle this wolf has snapped his spine and twisted around so that the front half of his body is coming towards us. That twist is unnatural and looks downright wrong.
The wolf also looks incredibly short in body length - there should be more of his stomach visible then what we see. Again, this is because of the twist and how wrong it is.
Perhaps next time you could try referencing some pictures of canines in general twisting in a similar fashion, because it looks like it would really help.
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Ok, thanks for the critique, I'll keep all of that in mind. You could have been a little nicer about it, but hey, thanks for the help.
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Apologies if you thought I was harsh. I'm generally just a blunt kind of person; I've never seen reason to sugar coat things. There was no rude intention behind it.
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That's okay, I get what you mean. 
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Thank you! This character belongs to
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Daaw I love teh pose an the face! Hehe very fluent motion and wonderful details, loving dis
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Very cool! ^w^ I like the pose and expression
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Np~
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Thanks! *Daesiy made it for me! <3
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You're welcome! 
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I love it! 
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looks like blueshinewolf's style...........................
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yeah, her style is a lot like hers. x3
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