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HaMeDicaL — No pain, No gain

Published: 2006-01-17 09:33:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 1210; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 86
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That day
I decided to look out for hope
Roaming around in town
Searching for an outdoor beauty
Lying within a child smile
Or between two lovers bouncing hearts
I stare at the places
Where everyone suppose to exist
I couldn’t find a single gesture
Or a hint that signify the moment
Where did they disappear?
Why every single road looked pretty clear?
Was it a straight forward public abandonment?
Or my hanging out didn’t have a prior notice
I guess I picked the worst time of the day
But still couldn’t find an answer
Can anyone give me a frank signal?
Something to relate directly to
I screamed out loud with echoes replying back
That was so much of a desperate call
I decided to give up and lay the shield aside
When I suddenly realized someone heavily crying
Crying so hard without apparent sound
I got soaked up in whole
By then the reality struck back
It was a day of a lifetime
I still recall its bits in details
It’s the day when I
totall gave up on the rain.

[HaMeDi©aL 2006]
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Comments: 82

HaMeDicaL In reply to ??? [2006-11-20 20:52:40 +0000 UTC]

Someone was digging around old dust

Glad you liked it, I missed that phase I used to have more space to write in.

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Delyteful In reply to HaMeDicaL [2006-11-20 21:19:37 +0000 UTC]

hehe yup! and reading your past work inspired me to write a piece right now hehe

wat do u mean u used to have more space to write in?

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HaMeDicaL In reply to Delyteful [2006-11-21 15:33:34 +0000 UTC]

Good that I inspired you to write

well, by that time I have a plenty of hours to spend jotting down my thoughts and especially in writing poems. But nowadays its so hard to come up with a single line.

Hope this will resolve soon.

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Delyteful In reply to HaMeDicaL [2006-11-21 16:45:30 +0000 UTC]

I hope so too.. i wanna see more of ur work

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Droubi [2006-04-19 16:53:01 +0000 UTC]

i donno if i commented here or not! i was like staring on the title on some one's else front page! it was as her fav .. i got in love with it for a moment!! how meaningful Ttitle and enthralling words :dreaming + tierd:

Way to go bro.. ohh and the shot is sweet! for me bcuz of the hand there and the wetty floor! Good job

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dsevilla [2006-01-26 17:18:36 +0000 UTC]

Hamedical, I'm really amazed by your pictures. I followed some of yours in Flickr, and I realized you went into Deviant afterwards.

Would it be so much if I ask you more or less what kind of postproc do you make of the images? In some of them, the color seems to be overexposed, but even this way the pictures are really nicer than if they weren't with such effect. Also, the pictures are really crisp and sharp. I really like them. Congratulations, man, for your work.

diego.

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eagle81 [2006-01-23 03:57:50 +0000 UTC]

That day
I decided to look out for hope
Roaming around in town
Searching for an outdoor beauty
Lying within a child smile
Or between two lovers bouncing hearts

powerful words

so many meanings in a few lines...amazing shots and words..but it just needs those fall leafs..i love them!!! maybe cuz we only have two seasons and fall isnt one of them ...lovely

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Al-7ussaini [2006-01-20 02:14:30 +0000 UTC]

amazingly done my friend .. amazingly done.

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my-all [2006-01-19 22:30:44 +0000 UTC]

love the texture....
its so textile that i want to touch it...
very sharp
i love

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xUAEx [2006-01-19 18:12:10 +0000 UTC]

pretty interesting shot ..

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HaMeDicaL In reply to xUAEx [2006-01-19 18:15:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, glad u liked it

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In-spire-R [2006-01-18 18:55:56 +0000 UTC]

couldnt see it in original size... this ***** connection
but am ing it anyway

loved the cloudy atmosphere there...makes me feel the chill
maintain the color-full version Mr.RAINbow

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Ray-of-Amy [2006-01-18 04:26:12 +0000 UTC]

& no rain!
amazing writing, man!
i said it once, u should consider writing ur own book!
the pic z wnderful, but the writing z Waaaaaaay so Gr8!

Well Done

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HaMeDicaL In reply to Ray-of-Amy [2006-01-18 08:50:54 +0000 UTC]

Happy to hear that u liked it ma friend.

For the book as i replied earlier, I ll save it for a more digital one

Thanks again

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Ray-of-Amy In reply to HaMeDicaL [2006-01-18 22:52:30 +0000 UTC]

okay then, we'll b anticipating that!
good luck dear!

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MaDaMe-EviL [2006-01-17 22:11:01 +0000 UTC]

Luv the poem's tone and how it flows... and the shot is simply delightful!

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HaMeDicaL In reply to MaDaMe-EviL [2006-01-18 08:44:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Modmozille delighted by your reply

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rainbow-candy [2006-01-17 21:29:21 +0000 UTC]



the tones are so perfect..goes so well with your words
I believe that you should consider writing a book...and I'd love to get a signed copy plz

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HaMeDicaL In reply to rainbow-candy [2006-01-18 08:40:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks alot, glad u like it.

A book...mmmm...lets save it 4 a digital one and I can sign that blindly

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DeeMaaH [2006-01-17 18:46:32 +0000 UTC]

thats exceptional photo .. great tones & texture ... i can sense the cold & wet weather after it stopped raining .. the quietness .. which gave us the chance to hear the scream ..
I screamed out loud with echoes replying back
That was so much of a desperate call
I decided to give up and lay the shield aside
When I suddenly realized someone heavily crying
Crying so hard without apparent sound

thats truly an impressive piece !

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HaMeDicaL In reply to DeeMaaH [2006-01-17 18:50:01 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate the fact that you devour the piece with all of your senses.

Truly honoured by your review.

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Fawaghi [2006-01-17 17:23:15 +0000 UTC]

No pain, No gain
UUUUUUU

if the umbrella was held vertically so that we can see the inner side of it, i think it'll look much nicer, by the end of the day its my opinion

When I suddenly realized someone heavily crying
Crying so hard without apparent sound
I got soaked up in whole
loved this part

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HaMeDicaL In reply to Fawaghi [2006-01-17 17:50:41 +0000 UTC]

When someone said that the title is related to someone signature, I didnt realize it would be u..lol..what a coincidence, I must have read it at some stage in ur bottom line and kept it in mind without so much relation happy to abuse it at the end

I think your opinion makes a vivid sense. I cant manipulate it at the end, that was an instant shot no planning ahead. Inshallah when I make out something in the future I ll try to be flawless

Thanks for passing by.

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Fawaghi In reply to HaMeDicaL [2006-01-17 17:57:48 +0000 UTC]

haha yup its ME ME ME well i'm glad u used it to be a title for such beautiful words

mmm i believe you can simply manipulate it if u used the right tools my friend

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Tamsoo7a [2006-01-17 16:39:16 +0000 UTC]

great angle
lovely shot

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HaMeDicaL In reply to Tamsoo7a [2006-01-17 16:58:07 +0000 UTC]

Happy to know that u like it

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Fifty-seven [2006-01-17 14:42:37 +0000 UTC]

mashalla .. what can i say !!!
ur creative !!!

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HaMeDicaL In reply to Fifty-seven [2006-01-17 16:57:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks alot, I m just trying out my best in the field

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MeRanD [2006-01-17 14:31:37 +0000 UTC]

الصوره والوانها متطابقه .. تعكس صوره حيه عن الكلمات ..

عيبني ان المظله مش كامله وان الايد بس ظاهره .. كأنها صوره للامل اللى ماكتمل بوجود شي جميل في هذاك اليوم .. او الصرخه اللى رجع بس صداها ..

هممم بين فتره وفتره نحتاج نحس بهذا الشعور بالبحث عن السعاده او الحب ومانحصله عشان نقّدر اكثر لحظاتنا الحلوه ومشاعرنا الصادقه ...

عشان جيه حاول في يوم تطلع مره ثانيه اكيد بتحصل ابتسامة طفل ونبضة قلب على البحر _اعرف انها مجرد كلمات بس مايمنع انها تحمل جزء من شعورك _ سكتني لازم حد يسكتني

اسميني اكلت قلب

السموحه طولت عليك ^_^

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HaMeDicaL In reply to MeRanD [2006-01-17 16:57:00 +0000 UTC]

U dont have to keep it in short at all, the more you say the more I feel proud of what I present.

Thanks his sister for her attendance

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yaryooor [2006-01-17 14:21:46 +0000 UTC]

i miss those rainiy days .. beautiful pic.

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HaMeDicaL In reply to yaryooor [2006-01-17 16:56:02 +0000 UTC]

Who doesnt?

Happy to hear that out

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UaeQueen [2006-01-17 13:38:58 +0000 UTC]

Stunning Shot !!!!

The Words r So Lovely mashalla....

Well Done...

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HaMeDicaL In reply to UaeQueen [2006-01-17 16:55:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks million times, appreciate your reply

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fibonacci11235 [2006-01-17 13:13:51 +0000 UTC]

...

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HaMeDicaL In reply to fibonacci11235 [2006-01-17 16:55:02 +0000 UTC]

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s3ood [2006-01-17 13:09:31 +0000 UTC]

low el me'6aleh '6ahra kellha chan (Y)

good work

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HaMeDicaL In reply to s3ood [2006-01-17 16:54:48 +0000 UTC]

As u c it ma friend, you know how I have a thing for whatever cropped

Thanks man.

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Babelicious [2006-01-17 12:21:13 +0000 UTC]

No pain, No gain

True....amaziiiiing pic..n I truly love ur writings keep it up

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HaMeDicaL In reply to Babelicious [2006-01-17 16:54:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks babe, hi-5

Wait for more pieces of writing, I m inspired on a daily basis

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UAEBeauty [2006-01-17 12:18:50 +0000 UTC]

ya Salaam 3leeek..
Wonderful shot ^_^

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HaMeDicaL In reply to UAEBeauty [2006-01-17 16:53:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks on the cheerful note

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Devilish-Girl [2006-01-17 12:02:59 +0000 UTC]

elegant

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HaMeDicaL In reply to Devilish-Girl [2006-01-17 16:53:03 +0000 UTC]

Same as u r, thanks

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Bntuae [2006-01-17 11:57:13 +0000 UTC]

mashallah el-9ora fanan ,,, & the words are so awesoem ..love it ,,,

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HaMeDicaL In reply to Bntuae [2006-01-17 16:52:46 +0000 UTC]

Delighted by ur sweet comment

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al3nee [2006-01-17 11:56:37 +0000 UTC]

amazing


words + shot


really amazing

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HaMeDicaL In reply to al3nee [2006-01-17 16:52:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks alot happy to know that.

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DxBina [2006-01-17 11:49:36 +0000 UTC]

loved the shot

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HaMeDicaL In reply to DxBina [2006-01-17 16:51:59 +0000 UTC]

No loving the words or the tanning this time thanks for driving by

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