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Published: 2012-04-02 22:31:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 506; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 6
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o.O wao! This is really really good! But everyone has their flaws..Like me...wait... I have more flaws than anyone! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/g/g… " width="17" height="15" alt="
VISION - I don't know wat this is LOL I'm too stoopid.
Originality - Don't worry! I know what originality is! LOL.. Yeah! I think it's original, but to be honest, I think the ground should be a lot more grassy! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Technique - Okay, To be honest, I think the umbrella should spread out, and look at the feet...Does she have two left/right feet?, I think the eyes should be a bit bigger, I think the rain and puddle is great!
Okay?
I will break down Shading and Burning..
Shading - There is 3 types of shading,
1. PILLOW SHADING
2. NEON SHADING
Pillow Shading - means you only put shadows in corner
Neon Shading - When you shade properly, but you can hardly see the color (I do this a lot with my artwork HAHA)
I think you did great with shading! So I give it 4/5
Burning -
Burning is really fun and makes the color lighter, but do not over use it! If you over use it, it wouldn't look appealing e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Anyway, I hope I didn't sound too cruel, And in the end I think this is great! 7 and a half out of ten! Awesome! Maybe you check my gallery and critique me? e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Love, ~100millionme
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Thanks so much for the critique it really helped! ^^
Also, thanks for explaining what I did wrong as well as giving the positive, the ratings were helpful and when you explained about the different shadings too!
Thanks a lot :3<3
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Very nice 
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I just saw the line art for this and I absolutely love the colour scheme you used for this picture, the light blues and pinks go really well together!
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This is really random, and pretty late.. but just to be sure, you know I did the line art right? XD
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Oh yeah XD Lol, I just realised it doesn't sound like I knew when you read the comment XD
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:L Ah okay, sorry 'bout that?
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well since i dont have a premium i will just critic here...
this is good!but i dont like the position of the feet...its very awkard.
i like the shading on the jacket though. But i wish you had moved the
pole of the umberla out of her face, her face is to pretty to cover ^^.
the background is a little bland maybe adding more detail in the background
would help. i like the clothes you chose for the girl. i dislike how you made her
coat blue and the background blue to(inless you wanted the picture to have a
lot of blue in it). i think the girl could use more shading in the face, i like how
you shaded around the area of the pole is in the way^^. (sorry for writing so much!
hope that helps ;D
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Thanks for the critique(:
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