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HaReoO — My world without me
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Published: 2008-12-04 00:59:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 1038; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 0
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...How would this world be without me? every place where I stay every word that I say ... the lost can be found. I will cover my ways you won`t see me again ...
Bea.R.r. 08
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your picture reminded so much of this poem i wrote - i just had to share it....
tracing back the steps of my youth
cycling along what was the old tram route
and now is a park
into the city I grew up in
the coffe shop we used to hang out in
to pass the time till school was officially over
the tree we met at and climbed
the stream we lay down next to
the street corner we were busted on by cops
so long ago
and though I arrive in the present at some point
- visiting an exhibition,
spending too much time in the museum's shop,
buying postcards, looking at books -
I feel I'm walking with a ghost today
there is so much to remind me here
and although I have never really liked this town
I get all melancholic
and take a little detour
to once again see the deserted swimming pool in winter
and to my absolute surprise
there is an open door! !
but apart from that
everything is just like it used to be
way back when we weren't ghosts
but alive & kicking
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I suppose that it is a photo that can have several interpretations. But yes, your poem can have relation with the photo. To live near to something, and suddenly to return, and to feel so strange; as that already you not belong to this place anymore... It is this strange sensation of melancholy.
thank you for passing and to share your poem, I liked it
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i am glad that you like it.
the feeling you describr is more or less what i wanted to express in it.
a world gone on without me.
things change, but you are not part of it anymore ...
i had a look at some of your photos and they all have this
deep sadness to them. hope you are doing fine
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