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Published: 2011-10-22 21:04:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 3101; Favourites: 85; Downloads: 15
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Description Volatilus winced, drawing James behind him as he shakily tried to get to his feet. Lien smiled, blood dripping from her white teeth and muzzle, reflecting the red hue in her eyes.

“Don’t you touch him!”

Landing square between the two dragons with a furious shriek, Temeraire immediately reared back on his hindquarters and hissed viciously at the white Celestial, his ink-black wings bursting up in a threatening fan. Lien shrunk back a step, snapping her jaws at him.

Laurence could feel his blood boil with anger as Temeraire swiped at Lien’s face – at her wicked, wicked snarl, at her jaws painted with Volly's blood. How dare she attack a defenseless courier!

Temeraire’s black tail whipped around like a serpentine entity, forcing her several more steps back, away from the injured Greyling. Laurence chanced a spare glance behind them; Volatilus bled profusely onto the sand, struggling to remain on his feet as he kept James hidden behind him.

“Come on Volly,” he could hear James coaxing gently as the Greyling collapsed onto the cold beach. “Come now, stay with me.”

Lien cackled - a cold, malicious sound.

Temeraire lunged.






I have no excuses.

Characters (C) Naomi Novik
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Comments: 22

EmilliaGryphon [2013-05-02 03:34:07 +0000 UTC]

Omg please tell me you will make this a longer fic...I need to know the ending! This is brilliant, I love Volly and James so much! I hope to see Volly have a really defining moment in Blood of Tyrants where James gets hurt or something and Volly really kicks some fierce butt! I love the shape of the dragons and the detail of this, great and origial idea! Please add to this little blurb!

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bubbles123karate [2012-01-01 12:44:47 +0000 UTC]

Holy DOOLY.

...

Is there more?

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Hayai-Akurei In reply to bubbles123karate [2012-01-02 08:24:26 +0000 UTC]

Not as of right now, no. But I may try to do a sequel pic and see what comes of it.

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ArchiCrash [2011-11-08 23:59:09 +0000 UTC]

Neat style of linework.

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0Confuzzled0 [2011-10-27 02:59:43 +0000 UTC]

VOLLLLLLYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Hayai-Akurei In reply to 0Confuzzled0 [2011-10-28 18:36:56 +0000 UTC]

*hands you a tissue*

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0Confuzzled0 In reply to Hayai-Akurei [2011-10-31 15:30:15 +0000 UTC]

*uses quite liberally*
Thank you. *sniff*

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shayrazor [2011-10-25 14:49:17 +0000 UTC]

Wow. The sketch is very good, but the mini-fic is excellent.

I would love to see it finished.

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Hayai-Akurei In reply to shayrazor [2011-10-28 18:40:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! I like coming up with small blurbs for art pieces. It kind of helps to clarify how the idea manifested in my brain in the first place.

The sketch was done on some crappy printer paper, actually, so inking it would be a pain in the butt. I'm not sure if I'll finish it to the color stage. We'll see.

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T-2238 [2011-10-24 13:43:42 +0000 UTC]

Poor Volatilus, I hope he'll be fine... and I look forward to see your next drawings or story about it, and to see or read Temeraire smashing that naughty Lien!

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Hayai-Akurei In reply to T-2238 [2011-10-28 18:41:07 +0000 UTC]

Temeraire vs. Lien

That's a battle that I'm currently working on in a different setting. But for this one, I just might do more.

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MdnghtShadow [2011-10-23 18:19:57 +0000 UTC]

I love the mini-fic, though the fact that Volly is hurt is just

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Hayai-Akurei In reply to MdnghtShadow [2011-10-23 21:28:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! If I ever get around to finishing the story, I'll post it. Or at least post more art for it. I just wanted to see Temeraire being a badass.

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10animallover10 [2011-10-23 11:16:31 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! It would be so cool if this happend in the series (but then with Volly making it ofcourse in the end) Is this for a fan-fic of you? I can't remember this happening in the series. anyway looks very cool and the describtion is awesome^^

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Hayai-Akurei In reply to 10animallover10 [2011-10-23 21:25:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Yup, a lot of my random artwork ends up getting a miniature storyline, and this one decided to go down the street marked ANGST.

You mess with Tem's friends, he will unleash the divine SMACKDOWN. Especially Volly, because he's... well, because he's Volly.

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10animallover10 In reply to Hayai-Akurei [2011-10-24 18:41:51 +0000 UTC]

true anyway, cool artwork and small story^^

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xxxDoortjexxx [2011-10-23 08:46:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh, what a story.. Poor Volly

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Hayai-Akurei In reply to xxxDoortjexxx [2011-10-23 21:22:11 +0000 UTC]

If I had the time and brainpower, I'd give it an actual plot and write the whole thing out. But I'm too lazy at the moment.

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Paulrevere1991 [2011-10-23 06:55:10 +0000 UTC]

what book is this from? i don't recall Volly getting hurt.

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Hayai-Akurei In reply to Paulrevere1991 [2011-10-23 07:53:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh, nowhere. Just my own brain.

The sketch started with just Temeraire, and then Lien and Volly followed suit. By the time I was done, I had already formulated a mini-fic for it.

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TheFuzzDragon [2011-10-22 23:29:46 +0000 UTC]

*Stille* Kann es nicht beschreiben!!! viel zu unglaublichen!!!!!

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Hayai-Akurei In reply to TheFuzzDragon [2011-10-23 06:34:46 +0000 UTC]

Vielen dank!

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