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Published: 2009-05-03 11:27:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 3245; Favourites: 332; Downloads: 0
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More waterdrop photo's to come!
I took alot yesterday.

Equipment:
Canon eos 350D
Sigma 70-300 F4-5,6 DG APO Macro
Tripod
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Comments: 23

DMGuntrip [2009-05-03 16:55:01 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


At first you may think, "Ah. Just another water droplet on flower show". However, if you spend a bit of time observing this well composed shot, you will be thinking the complete opposite.

The first thing that grasped my eye was the perspective of the flower which the water droplets rest upon. The partially focused petals conjured up an image of an old person’s hand; being thin, bony, and frail.

Another view I took on this photo is the resemblance to an eyelash. The water droplets could represent tears in this situation, which weigh down the lashes. Not tears of sorrow; tears of joy. This can be shown by the beautiful colours of the backdrop and the petals.

The depth of field is almost perfect in my opinion. However, I am sometimes drawn towards the out of focus large water droplet positioned towards centre of the photo when I can see the main point of focus is suppose to be the three droplets on the middle petal.

The brightness, contrast, and saturation are just right. If the contrast or saturation were increased any more, the photo would appear slightly on the surreal side.

Sharpness also appears correct. There are no sudden changes between mid-tones and highlights or shadows which is a result of too much sharpening.

There is no problem with noise either.

Overall, I think this is a well composed photo with minimal improvements to be made. It’s a pleasure to look at.

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Healzo In reply to DMGuntrip [2009-05-03 17:31:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much
I agree with you on the big drop that are out of focus! I should've had a smaller or no drop there.

I really appriciate you taking the time to write this long critique!

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DMGuntrip In reply to Healzo [2009-05-03 18:04:23 +0000 UTC]

It's my pleasure, and thank you for accepting the critique.

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aureeeeelia [2016-06-05 11:45:14 +0000 UTC]

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moijoie [2009-11-21 00:48:37 +0000 UTC]

featured: [link]

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Aimelle [2009-05-18 07:50:06 +0000 UTC]

ohh this one is my favorite.. I prefer this framing... beautiful contrasting colors and details

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Healzo In reply to Aimelle [2009-05-18 11:16:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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brad-macd [2009-05-03 21:00:27 +0000 UTC]

ugh, you win. so much.
XD

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Healzo In reply to brad-macd [2009-05-03 21:10:50 +0000 UTC]

haha

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zhyrapha [2009-05-03 20:07:01 +0000 UTC]

Great shot

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Lethifold [2009-05-03 20:05:55 +0000 UTC]

Good One

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zsezse711 [2009-05-03 18:58:58 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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DragonHeart524 In reply to zsezse711 [2009-05-03 19:05:16 +0000 UTC]

What the heck, dude. This has nothing to do with this piece of art. Please Don't spam like this! It's rude and a waste of space

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ph34r-t3h-cut3-on3s [2009-05-03 18:55:08 +0000 UTC]

Love the colors!

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Tabooot580 [2009-05-03 18:40:34 +0000 UTC]

WoWw! I really really like this. Awesome job!

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PotatoBeenz [2009-05-03 18:16:01 +0000 UTC]

such a beautiful balance between surreal and reality
love the tones and DOF
fantastic shot, Joakim!

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Healzo In reply to PotatoBeenz [2009-05-03 19:35:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Tayler

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PotatoBeenz In reply to Healzo [2009-05-03 20:30:46 +0000 UTC]

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xTive [2009-05-03 17:32:23 +0000 UTC]

I love it !

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Paulaart18 [2009-05-03 16:55:52 +0000 UTC]

lovely

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queenofjealoushearts [2009-05-03 11:53:33 +0000 UTC]

Ooo, love this one. The colours give it an underwater kind of look. ^.^=

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Everyberry [2009-05-03 11:43:28 +0000 UTC]

It`s amazing how this actually reminds me of the movie Life Aquatic. It`s... the colors, maybe? Anyways,

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bluegras [2009-05-03 11:32:55 +0000 UTC]

wow... I like the raindrops !

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c-h-e-r-r-y [2009-05-03 11:29:33 +0000 UTC]

really nice. ;d
i like sharpness and contrast between yellow and blue^^

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