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Helsaabi — After Pinkie pride

Published: 2014-02-05 17:33:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 12044; Favourites: 142; Downloads: 20
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Description ...but I have only 4000 bits... 



  Oh you don't have pay to me?


Yippe! let run! 



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Comments: 98

AppleEevee [2014-03-29 21:41:09 +0000 UTC]

*gasp* 








The bill is done wrong! It shouldn't be "Lots cakes". It should be "Lot of cakes"! *faints*

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Badgaldinger In reply to AppleEevee [2015-07-31 01:24:39 +0000 UTC]

Of all the worst things that could happen, this is THE. WORST. POSSIBLE. THING!

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AppleEevee In reply to Badgaldinger [2015-08-02 15:36:28 +0000 UTC]

Well that sure is a year ago

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jwilliams08 [2014-03-22 15:08:22 +0000 UTC]

I thought of this scene from Spongebob when reading this.
: Everything was perfect. Until I got the bill!

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Helsaabi In reply to jwilliams08 [2014-03-27 19:37:50 +0000 UTC]

You don't have money....

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jwilliams08 In reply to Helsaabi [2014-03-27 22:16:38 +0000 UTC]

$25 Dollars for a hamburger?!?!

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Helsaabi In reply to jwilliams08 [2014-03-30 19:46:04 +0000 UTC]

Eeyup,there no meat on a hamburger. 

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jwilliams08 In reply to Helsaabi [2014-03-30 23:09:10 +0000 UTC]

At lease not in the lands where ponies live in the land of dragons they have meat.

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Gab1231 [2014-03-02 20:56:46 +0000 UTC]

 

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D-Molish [2014-02-23 02:43:59 +0000 UTC]

I was wondering how she afforded all these parties... good comic!

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Helsaabi In reply to D-Molish [2014-02-27 18:34:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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cg1995 [2014-02-19 22:33:11 +0000 UTC]

poor rd

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Segathi [2014-02-11 18:17:50 +0000 UTC]

Kreatywne

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Helsaabi In reply to Segathi [2014-02-13 20:45:47 +0000 UTC]

Hm? 0w0

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ClassroomDoodlers [2014-02-10 02:05:17 +0000 UTC]

Okay that's funny

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Helsaabi In reply to ClassroomDoodlers [2014-02-13 20:45:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks X3

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Xemnas-sama In reply to Helsaabi [2014-02-14 16:42:37 +0000 UTC]

That's least you can do Dash! Making Pinkie cry was beyond horrible.

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Helsaabi In reply to Xemnas-sama [2014-02-17 23:41:38 +0000 UTC]

0w0

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labba94 [2014-02-09 18:15:37 +0000 UTC]

Haha! Very nice comic, I had fun in reading it It's rare for me to see comics that indeed work when I look at things posted on dA... especially because most of them have flaws in the script such as the excessive number of useless panels. A comic based on comedy should never bore the reader and if it's long then one has to find a good number of jokes that justify the unusual height of the strip. Here we have just a simple joke, and for this reason we have a simple four-panels strip (even three panels I'd say, since the first one is silent and just estabilishes the setting): but this enriches the joke in itself, since the reader is not distracted by anything else or bored by tons of panels in which nothing happens. And this is of course a good thing ^_^ Plus, the joke is even nicer since it's a "realistic" thing: one could indeed wonder how they paid all that stuff.

As for the artstyle... I think it's improving The first picture I saw made by you was that drawing of the Tree of Harmony months ago when I happened to look at it, but the difference is evident and the outline here is even more varied, with a noticeable difference between thick lines and thin lines. Of course there are still some things to adjust (like anatomy: Rainbow Dash's back legs in panel three are wrong), and proportions are not entirely accurate. But I like their expressions, and the style is generally cheerful and pleasant to look at.

So... a comic I indeed liked! ^^

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Helsaabi In reply to labba94 [2014-02-09 21:55:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I agree with your opinion is very strong. Sound like your critics? I don't think find joke four panel or more panel. I could draw my sketch is storyboard  before new strip comic. To be honest I'm not good about height panel the strip comic. Anyway next new strip comic about 7 or 8 panel. 


Oh you mean "Coming soon Season 4"? Well,I think it's my favorite artwork. Oh I didn't notice Anatomy: Rainbow Dash's back legs.Your right point my anatomy not well. 


Thank you about reading my strip comic. (your comment is my favorite)

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labba94 In reply to Helsaabi [2014-02-09 22:03:12 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry, I didn't criticize it: I indeed liked this one And don't worry if the next strip is longer. If the jokes are jokes that can be told only in that number of panels and not in less panels, then it's fine

And aww, I'm glad you appreciated my comment ^_^

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Helsaabi In reply to labba94 [2014-02-11 23:18:15 +0000 UTC]

Well,To be honest I realize I'm distraction pay attention to read reddit.com. (I haven't heard word "distraction" before) tell me how use to stop distraction like addition to read reddit.com. =w=; I'm too much read comment on reddit.com

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labba94 In reply to Helsaabi [2014-02-11 23:26:02 +0000 UTC]

No, I wasn't saying that reddit distracts you, don't worry ^_^ I was just saying that if you use too many panels, the readers might get distracted by them. Here you used only four panels, so there was no peril: and therefore you obtained a very nice comic.

Perhaps your English has to be improved, but don't worry: I'll try to express myself more clearly the next time And I'm looking forward to your next works!

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Helsaabi In reply to labba94 [2014-02-13 23:26:23 +0000 UTC]

Ohh I see Hmm I could used only four panel? sound like good I agree with you. When new eposide I will see make new four panel on my idea. 


"Distracted" mean having the attention diverted. (I read dictionary about "distracted"  )XD



Well,I try practice sentence my English grammar,I'm pratice TOEFL I wish to apply Vanart college is famous like comic art or 2D animation. but my style like half cartoon and anime. But I realize my age is grow up sigh~



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karkovice1 [2014-02-08 14:09:30 +0000 UTC]

Pinkie Pie! You've shattered my image of you...

 

BTW, Cheese Sandwich can have his hippo back.

 

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Helsaabi In reply to karkovice1 [2014-02-08 18:56:16 +0000 UTC]

heh Rainbow dash probably work in Pinkie pie's home. He make a cupcakes. 

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Crydius [2014-02-07 13:50:52 +0000 UTC]

I know right ?! The first thing that went through my head when seeing Cheese organise the party was "How the Hell does he pay for all of this ?!"

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Helsaabi In reply to Crydius [2014-02-08 18:57:37 +0000 UTC]

big cheese = 1500 bits is really expensive bits! 

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Nyerguds [2014-02-07 12:31:20 +0000 UTC]

Hah. Yeah, nothing in life comes free, not even in Equestria

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Helsaabi In reply to Nyerguds [2014-02-08 18:58:06 +0000 UTC]

Eeyup,Rainbow dash  is shattered image

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DestinyDecade [2014-02-07 05:41:32 +0000 UTC]

*bursts out laughing* Reminds me of the of Ultimate Assist Me Episode 4... oh god. This is hilarious.

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Helsaabi In reply to DestinyDecade [2014-02-08 19:02:59 +0000 UTC]

I know..wait min I never heard "Ultimate Assist me" before...I search Google Philippines's tv drama series?

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DestinyDecade In reply to Helsaabi [2014-02-08 19:26:55 +0000 UTC]

With Max and Doctor Doom.

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Helsaabi In reply to DestinyDecade [2014-02-08 22:41:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh i see ^^

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DestinyDecade In reply to Helsaabi [2014-02-09 00:24:31 +0000 UTC]

yeah

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derrickmac1 [2014-02-07 03:49:43 +0000 UTC]

ITS OVER 9000!!!!!!!

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Helsaabi In reply to derrickmac1 [2014-02-08 19:03:30 +0000 UTC]

XD

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kukotte [2014-02-06 22:52:48 +0000 UTC]

Looool, that idea crossed my mine after I saw that ep

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Helsaabi In reply to kukotte [2014-02-08 19:03:38 +0000 UTC]

X3 heh

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BrutalityInc [2014-02-06 22:42:35 +0000 UTC]

Well, nothing's free.

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Helsaabi In reply to BrutalityInc [2014-02-08 19:05:24 +0000 UTC]

Eeyup.

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MasterChief01 [2014-02-06 20:57:07 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, I can't imagine Pinkie would charge like that, but it's still a cute concept.  That's quite the bill.

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Helsaabi In reply to MasterChief01 [2014-02-08 19:05:38 +0000 UTC]

Heh Thanks :3

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DeadlockAt [2014-02-06 06:16:57 +0000 UTC]

Hey dash maybe next time you should know what your planner was buying for the party and c if its not within you budget.

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Helsaabi In reply to DeadlockAt [2014-02-08 19:05:58 +0000 UTC]

Rainbow dash probably work Pinkie pie's home.

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Clyobate [2014-02-06 05:52:37 +0000 UTC]

I don't mean to be rude nor disrespect you, but you aren't the best at speaking English are you? Also, this is a nice comic. I give it... *drumroll* 7 out of 10!

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Helsaabi In reply to Clyobate [2014-02-08 19:06:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I know I'm not good speaking English...I'm so careful writing my English grammar.

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Clyobate In reply to Helsaabi [2014-02-09 01:41:34 +0000 UTC]

It's o problem, if it's no trouble I could help you out occasionally, and by that I mean I could tutor you a bit. And still, not being rude, but I see an error I your comment right there!

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Helsaabi In reply to Clyobate [2014-02-17 23:43:32 +0000 UTC]

Hm? you clould tutor me a bit? hmm sound like good. what about Skype or something?

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Clyobate In reply to Helsaabi [2014-02-18 10:53:00 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, but I was thinking through deviantart notes because I don't really have a Skype, and I'm also limited to certain times because my computer broke down, I can't afford a new one, and my work schedule is tight. So, that leaves me to around 9:00 pm central and later... Sorry.

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