AlexanderSteele [2009-02-09 05:43:43 +0000 UTC]
Ohmygosh this is awesome! It's so vivid and fun even though it's from a sad point of view, just the way it's written makes me smile. I can see exactly where it comes from and feel the emotion in it. The rhythm is a tad sparatic, but that may be intentional. The wording and style are dead on. Bravo.
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Hipcrit In reply to AlexanderSteele [2009-02-09 19:08:45 +0000 UTC]
Yay<3 I'm glad you like it. ^_^Where in particular do you think the rhythm is funky?
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