Comments: 22
DiSmith [2019-01-03 10:30:10 +0000 UTC]
Really reallly really really good
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Revan005 [2018-12-27 16:51:04 +0000 UTC]
Cool, but sad.
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hontor In reply to Revan005 [2018-12-27 18:43:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. Fortunately, then this story had a happy ending.
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Revan005 In reply to hontor [2018-12-28 13:48:06 +0000 UTC]
YW! This good.
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Shadona369 [2018-09-18 15:50:41 +0000 UTC]
In this cold world, all lights will eventually be snuffed...
But that does not mean it never existed to begin with.
Fur, feathers or skin, immortality is an idea ever bluffed.
A beautiful lie, a hopeful whisper, but it is all myth...
We bloom beautifully, and wither far too fast...
Just like a flower, we are frail and small...
What we wish, will it be in our grasp at last?
No, never, our lights will always fade...
But we etched our tales into the stone of time
And that will never, ever become greyed.
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hontor In reply to Shadona369 [2018-12-27 18:37:32 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. It is sad and beautiful, and it is very consistent. Unfortunately, I can not fully appreciate the syllable of the poem, it is not my native language. But it is very strong, if we take the message and the meaning.
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Shadona369 In reply to hontor [2018-12-28 20:02:46 +0000 UTC]
It's not supposed to make much sense. You did your job as the reader, and found your own meaning to it. It's supposed to be different for everyone, including myself. Thank you for reading my work, I really appreciate it.
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reioma In reply to Shadona369 [2018-10-17 18:59:01 +0000 UTC]
Very poetic. I like it
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Shadona369 In reply to reioma [2018-10-17 19:17:44 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, I tried. <3
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Shadona369 In reply to Shadona369 [2018-09-18 15:51:34 +0000 UTC]
H a h
This one sucks I know, but I tried...
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Foxes-of-the-void [2018-09-18 08:25:50 +0000 UTC]
This is absolutely amazing! I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT! Explicit job!
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Foxofwonders [2018-09-18 07:28:36 +0000 UTC]
It's hard for me to tell what the symbolism is, but good gracious is this incredibly well-made and impactful!
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hontor In reply to Foxofwonders [2018-12-27 18:42:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the response!
I understand that creating a picture when I live this story and watch it is completely different, that to see it from afar, but for me this is the case when I have to draw. And the audience still feel something, even without knowing the background...
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Dreamer1326 [2018-09-18 04:27:02 +0000 UTC]
WOW!! This is absolutely awe inspiring!!
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Withertoad [2018-09-18 04:24:16 +0000 UTC]
My eyes see one side of the crime, not the others.
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hontor In reply to Withertoad [2018-09-18 05:26:40 +0000 UTC]
Yes, many see only one side and one truth. It is more comfortable.
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RavenHeart1984 [2018-09-18 04:19:05 +0000 UTC]
bloody hell,good job
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