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Published: 2007-09-13 03:50:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 6174; Favourites: 50; Downloads: 144
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I re-read Chapter 79 and this was in one of the pages so i had to ink and colour the image. I had some fun with this, and i hope it looks half decent. ^_^ (I <3 BLEACH)RenRuk... is that what its called.. well whatever i want renji and rukia to get it on... (ok u can stop looking at me now)
Original (c) Kubo Tite
This version (c) me
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I have seen this illustration before. It was used in one of mangafox's banners in the past, but I had no idea that it was from Chapter 79 in the Bleach-manga. I thought that it was a simple fan art.
It's great! You did a fine colouring.
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Great job with the coloring and the picture.
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Thank you very much, no where near as amazing like you tho haha.
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I bet there will be a day when you will be better than me! Just practice and anything's possible!
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Two ways of looking at it:
"oh Rukia, for shame, for shame."
and
"poor, poor Rukia."
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nice coloring
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I love how you made the hair! Really nice pic, if you ask me!
(saw this link in NFF ^^)
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aww thanks lol i didnt think anyone on NFF even looked at it lol. thanks hehe. i apreciate it alot.
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Believe me, alot of people over there look at fanart... I don't think too many people missed this
No prob ^^ Keep up the great work!
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An easy way to fix the composition of this piece would be to crop the left side of it, so that the edge is near the back of the character's head. Also, coloring in the character's clothing (the shoulders) will help the head look like it's actually grounded in something, and take away the uncomfortable feeling that it's about to topple over.
Some interesting work with gradients and textures, but I feel as though the texture needs to extend to the skin and the cloth, if it's going to go through the hair.
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Here is the constructive critique you wanted:
Good line work but the coloring is a bit simplistic to me however that can be gotten away with with anime and other forms of cartooning. The composition is a little weak. Perhaps the use of loose strands of clothing to complete the triangle. I use the triangle rule which was used by the masters and which I judge a pictureβs composition by, well that and creativity. The rule follow that you have 3 parts, figures, objects, or elements that create more or less a right or isometric triangle. This triangle can be repeated many time over and over again for increasing complex pictures but with a strong composition. Other triangles can be used but cause a weaker composition.
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Thanks for the crit. ill take it all in and try to work on the triangles in my next peice.
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