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Published: 2007-02-13 11:44:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 5508; Favourites: 117; Downloads: 91
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Picture belonging in the same shoot as my first Picture.Hope you like it.
the flapper was short-haired, modern and outrages--
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Fantastic job! You really captured the essence of an era.
I just had to use this pic for a short story post on my blog. I'm doing a new series of posts centered on a Private Detective named Dan Swagger staged in the 1920's.
Here is the link to the post: [link]
Of course I gave you credit and linked back to your site and the original.
If you get a chance, I'd love to get your feedback on the story.
Michael A. Walker
Defying Procrastination
www.want2bwriter.com
Facebook/DefyingProcrastination
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Oh My god! I havent been active in here in years I just accidentally read "deviant" and I was like: deviant? deviant? where have I heard that word before?! Soo nice to log in and read beautiful comments! thank you, thank you very much
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You are most welcome. You have a gift, hopefully you still have been using in your absence from Deviant.
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This looks wonderful! I actually drew this during my senior year in high school for an art project. I had no clue it was on DeviantArt! I love it!
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Wow this is a beautiful exposure. I love the angle and the vintage feel.
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Ser at du prøver deg på før-krigs looken og av de to bildene er det desidert denne du klarer det best med. Vår nesten Marlene Dietrich-vibber av dette! Hunu holder røyken på rett måte, men det burde vært en sånn lengre(med hvitt filter) satt i sånn svart-røykholde-dings. Men makeupen og stilen generelt er ellers rett på. Komposjonen funker bra. Blikket kunne vært litt mer ... hvordan skal jeg beskrive dette, aggressivt på en feminin måte. (Igjen se på gamle bilder av Marlene Dietrich, eller dagens svar på henne: Dita Von These) Ordet "sultry" som leaf-lover nevner treffer spikeren..
Veldig bra, men noen småting(røyken og at det er litt utydelig noen steder) som hindrer den fra å bli virkelig fantastis
Hå
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Both of the flapper pictures are great! I really love the profile view, though. The way she's holding the cigarette is just perfect! And I love her expression...
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this one is just wonderfull,it's going on my fav list ^^
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thank you, I appreciate it!
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While the overall image is technically very sound and the clarity is good, I feel that the expression of the model could be worked upon. Here, she looks a little... Well to be honest it's hard to determine quite how she feels. A little more of a sultry look would give this piece a great sense of atmosphere that would fit well with the style.
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thank you a lot for critisism! I dont understand what the word "sultry" means 
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Sultry means slighty seductive. Sort of sexy without being over the top and horrible. It allows the model to look and feel sexy but doesn't make them look dirty.
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In short what I think of this photograph
Exposure : good.
Colors : dramatic and vintage
Focus : fine
Composition : good but can improve
Subject interest : Nice model with lovely eyes. I like ur focus. Its very sharp and correct.
Things to improve : Maybe the possition of the hand. The fingers are not quite clearly visible.
This comment is solely on my viewpoint of this photo so if you wish to correct me kindly do so. Kindly note that I’m not trying to judge your work in any manner 
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You've done fantastic work, here. I love this.
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thank you 
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Dont like commenting my own picture, but I´m just wondering if I´ve done something wrong here
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