Comments: 18
portaljumper339 [2012-07-09 17:26:11 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Let me first answer your question by saying YES, definitely vector this up. Now let me tell you why;
Vision: This brought a smile to my face as soon as I saw it, because I haven't seen a good CMC picture in quite some time. Normally they're either in an alt. universe setting or all grown up, so it's nice to see these three precocious, fun-loving fillies again.
Originality: Now let me just say that I am in no way objecting to the content at all. I love these three to death, and this only makes my love only grow. The reason I dinged you here is that the scene seems just a little too idyllic for me. If what they've done in the show is any indication of their day to day activities when they get together, then normally we should be seeing them covered in scrapes, bandages, and tree sap. I like the idea of the three of them just sharing a scooter ride, but a little more action would have been nice.
Technique: All around excellent, and I especially like how you made their facial expressions. The one nit I could pick here is that Apple Blooms muzzle seems a little to short, and it makes her face appear fatter than it should. Also, I'm not seeing Scootaloo's wings, and I know that she uses those as a propeller for the scooter. Maybe when you vector this, you could add them in poking off to the sides, like they do in the show.
Impact: This picture really hit home for me, mainly because of the reasons I mentioned in Vision. I rarely see the three of them having a nice day out, so this is a breath of fresh air.
Overall: I liked this pictue, and I can't wait to see how you vector it up. Their were only a few little nits as far as content and design were concerned, and I do hope that you'll take those into account when you vector it.
Keep up the good work, and it's nice to know that the move went successfully!
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portaljumper339 In reply to portaljumper339 [2012-07-09 18:19:41 +0000 UTC]
Saw the source music, and you can nix the not enough action part, cause I now understand that you were going for an accurate representation of the animation.
+.5 stars to Originality
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I-TwistedFury-I In reply to MillenniumFalsehood [2012-07-09 19:34:55 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! your the first one to notice! ill be uploading a colored version of this shortly! you wont want to miss it!
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DarthWill3 [2012-07-09 17:46:53 +0000 UTC]
Cute!
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Makri14 [2012-07-09 14:13:07 +0000 UTC]
Oh. And you forgot scootaloo's wings
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I-TwistedFury-I In reply to Makri14 [2012-07-09 18:27:54 +0000 UTC]
I used a HP printer/scanner and also no I didn't forget the wings I just chose a frame when they where fully back.. it wasn't on purpose but that's that...
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Makri14 [2012-07-09 14:12:08 +0000 UTC]
I see that you did a hand drawing. What did you use to get it in to the computer? I've already know cause I did it myself. Just check out my gallery Plz.
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