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IamUman β Black Heaven - page 3
Published: 2010-12-11 01:32:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 6029; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 197
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Page 3 of my comic/graphic novel.Rendered in Daz Studio and postworked in Photoshop.
Credits:
- City Ruins by Stonemason
- Mood Master 2 by Dreamlight
- V4 by Daz.
- girl morphs and textures by me
- Clothes are a mix from different clothes packs: V4Ranger, Omega Hunter, Kazai, Acasia. I changed all of the textures to make them fit together.
- Breathless Gas Mask by Technophilia
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Comments: 37
Something about the transition between panels 2 and 3 is bugging me, I have no idea what it is though. Love the slightly spooky atmosphere, I'm flly expecting there to be "something" where the camera is in panel3, so it will be terribly funy if there was a rat or nothing 
Keep up the good work
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You're right about panel 3 about it seeming that there is someone/something looking at her. It wasn't my intention though. I think it's because I added a piece of the wall as a frame. shouldn't have done that...
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It looks fine, I think it adds to the creepy atmosphere.
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Yes, but 'creepy' is not really what I was looking for at this point. More 'desolate/depressing', but I guess 'creepy' will have to do
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She looks pretty depressed. And I probably wanted desolate and had to make do with creepy. It's been that kind of last couple of weeks
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I know what you mean... the winter is getting to all of us.
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It's summer here, just been crazybusy with silly season and it's fried my brain
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Everything is so perfect I almost want to cry at the awesomeness of it.... (and that I would never be this good o_o)
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It is my intention, yes.
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you will share "the book" will be free or for sale?
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It's too early to tell... I'm concentrating on getting it finished first
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what your mind tells you?
do you want to share with people for free, by putting all pages of your comic here, or do you sell and make money and put one part of your comic ?
what do you think ?
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It depends... since it seems such a big issue for you, maybe you can help me: what would you do if it was your comic?
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my comic is "kalixia... ce monde est Γ nous"...( Kalixia... this world is our )
Main Character :
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at the beginning, I wanted to share it with people from DA for free...then I put a few pages to show my work
Finally, I did not put all the pages.
I leave it to people wanting to know more about my comic.
if they want to know the story so I could share ... but not for everyone.
I really want to sell my comic books, but I am still thinking
that's why my wife ( mesange-bleue ) has asked
regards
Magneto[1]
if you want to see a few pages from my comic, please let me know
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Now I understand why she was insisting
Yes, I would love to see some pages...
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Here are the first 13 pages ...
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my comic is not as good as yours.
I know... french dialogue... sorry.
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French... no problem, je suis belge.
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Le comic est trΓ¨s cool. J'aime comment tu raconte l'histoire et comment tu 'build up' le suspense. Je trouve Γ§a trΓ¨s difficile moi mΓͺme.
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ah... bin alors je prefere.
lol
y a deux langue en belgique non ?
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Oui, je suis flamand donc ma langue maternelle est néerlandais, mais je parle le français aussi.
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ok parceque une fois je suis tombé sur un belge qui ne parlait pas français.
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How many pages are you planning to produce? I really dig the backgrounds. Character work is really nice too but I think she looks bit too clean. I would add some dirt on her hands and clothing.
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I haven't got a fixed storyboard, only a general idea of the story and I can only look like 2 or 3 pages ahead. I tried making a storyboard but it doesn't seem to work for me. So I don't know how many pages the comic will have finally.
There is already some dirt on the clothes, but it's not so noticable since the clothes are black. I haven't thought of adding dirt to the skin, but I think it's a good idea. So thanks for that!
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you must spend a lot of time setting these scenes up, then rendering... the results are very effective... well done
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In the beginning I thought I would win a lot of time by rendering the same scene from different angles and using them to build a page. It seemed that that would be much quicker than drawing the whole page... but I'm not so sure anymore that I'm actually winning that much time...
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