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IamWolfODonnel — Starfox Days Chp. 5
Published: 2008-03-14 23:38:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 2417; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 10
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Description As they walked through the mall, Fox and Krystal looked for Falco and Slippy, but saw no sign of them. Fox didn't want to bother them with the communicator, at least not until they had to leave anyway. He had a more pressing issue on his mind at the moment. He had no idea of where to go next was beyond him, besides, Krystal seemed to stick to him like glue, and she went wherever he wandered. Finally, his stomach gave him an answer.

Its abnormally loud protest drew alarm from some nearby people and completely bewildered Krystal. Of course, once she figured out it's source, she burst out laughing. Her laughter was like music to his ears, but in his current situation he was just embarassed.
"Ohoho, my Gahahahahad!" she said, trying to talk through her laughter, "Fohahaxississ! Wa-wa-was that... yoohoohoou?!"
He scratched the back of his head and blushed, "I... I didn't know my stomach was that loud..." he mumbled, still embarrassed.
Still giggling, she gestured him to follow her, "C-come on... Let's get you some lunch."

Meanwhile……

Falco and Slippy had arrived at the clothing store as well, although they had missed Fox and Krystal by just a few minutes. Although the blue falcon dreaded it, he had to admit, it was necessary and there were some pretty nice threads here.

Slippy came back out of the dressing room with another outfit on. The toad had no sense of style. He was wearing an orange shirt, with red pants and a yellow hat.
“So how do I look this time Falco?” he asked for the billionth time.
“I already told you, Slip. I’m not going to comment on your appearance.”
“Oh come on. Lighten up you feather duster…” Slippy mumbled.
“What was that?!” Falco asked a bit aggressively.
“Nothing.” Slippy replied timidly. “So… really, how do I look?”
Falco sighed, “You look like a nerd, all right?”
Slippy glared at him and went back into the room.
The bird gathered his clothes and got into the room beside Slippy’s where he started to change into his new outfit.
“So… you really think I look like a nerd in this?” Slippy asked from somewhere up above. Falco looked up to see Slippy staring down at him.
The practically naked bird narrowed his eyes and stared at Slippy for a while.
“What?” Slippy asked innocently, either willfully ignoring Falco in his underwear, or somehow unaware of it.
“I’m going to kill you Slippy…”

Fox and Krystal eventually arrived at the food court where Fox eventually decided to get pizza after about 10 minutes while Krystal decided to get a modest salad with some water. As soon as they sat down Fox wolfed down about 4 slices. For almost the entire meal there was an awkward silence that hung over their heads like a suffocating shroud. Fox was leaned back in his chair, not sure of what to do or say, Krystal sat there staring at her salad, eating it slowly. Fox looked around the food court, Falco and Slippy weren't around, and he figured this might be as good a chance as any. He silently took a deep breath trying to summon up his courage. Instead, his heart just beat faster, his palms grew sweaty, and his knees started shaking.
“Hey, uh, Krystal?”
The blue vixen looked up from her salad, relieved that the silence was broken, “Yes Fox?”
“I was wondering, uh, how do I say this? I was wondering if you’d like to… well…”
Could it be? Krystal thought, Is he trying to ask me out?
“Would you like to-?”
“Hey Fox!” a familiar voice called out.

The mood was immediately shattered like brittle glass for both the foxes. Krystal was obviously depressed, while Fox at this point was ticked off. Fox turned and looked for who had called him. Bill was hurrying towards them, with a tray of food.
“Hey Bill.” Fox answered, faking cheerfulness.
“You don’t mind if I sit with you guys right?”
“Not at all.”
The dog sat down with his ears flopping, while Fox held back a very strong urge to throttle him. He sat still for a moment, looking between the two foxes and then asked, “Am I interrupting something?”
“No, not at all.” Krystal answered quickly.
“Yeah, it’s okay.” Fox said right after Krystal.

Bill looked rather hesitant, but eventually settled down and the three of them had a pleasant chat. Since Krystal didn’t know Bill that well, she listened for most of the time. She ran out of water and went to get more after a while.
The two men watched her go.
“She’s a great girl isn’t she?” Bill asked.
“Yep. Hell of a pilot and a fighter too.” Fox answered still staring in Krystal’s direction.
“I’m actually surprised you haven’t asked her out yet. I mean, she’s not exactly my species, but I’d love to have a nice woman with a body like that.”
“Bill, I was just about to ask her out when you shouted my name.”
Bill’s smile faded a bit. “Oh.” He looked a bit nervous, “Sorry ‘bout that Fox. But seriously, what’s taking you so long, bud?”
“Ah, I don’t know Bill.” Fox sighed miserably, slumping over the table. “I just don’t know how she would react if I asked. I mean we’re obviously interested in each other, but it’s just that when I go to ask… I just kinda… break down.”
“Been there.” Bill said, “If there’s one piece of advice I have, it’s this: Don’t wait too long Fox. Eventually, someone else is going to do it before you and then she’s gone.”
“Thanks Bill.”
“No problem.”
“Hey Bill?”
“Yeah?”
“When you sat down with us, I had a very strong urge to throttle you.”
“Shit man, I said I was sorry.”
“I know.”

Krystal came back and they continued their chat for a few more minutes until Fox’s communicator came on. Falco’s voice came through and his face appeared on the screen.
“Yo Fox! You guys ready to head home or what?”
“Yeah, be there in a sec.”
“What cha been doin’? It’s 4 o’clock.”
Fox blinked, they had been here for that long?
“We’ll be there soon, don’t get your feathers in a ruffle.”
“Ha, ha, ha, very funny.”
Fox looked back up to Bill, “Sorry pal, bird brain here’s getting impatient.”
“Hey! I resent that!” Falco’s voice squawked through the communicator.
Fox looked back at the communicator in surprise and hit the end transmission button.
Bill chuckled, “Don’t worry about it, just don’t be a stranger so much.”
“Gotcha.”

The pair left Bill heading towards the car on the other side of the mall. Along the way Krystal kept sneaking glances at Fox and eventually summoned up enough courage to ask.
“Hey Fox?”
“Yeah, Krys?” he glanced her way then just barely avoided another person on a collision course.
She giggled a bit at his frantic action, “Earlier, were you trying to-?”
“Uh… I can explain! Well I-I… I’m kinda, well…”

Krystal seized him by the back of the head and dragged Fox’s face forward so she could kiss him, but immediately let go of him with a squeak when Falco’s face appeared from around the corner. Fox on the other hand hit the ground face-first with a thwump. Falco followed Fox’s downward fall with an expression that showed clear embarrassment. There was a long awkward silence with Krystal blushing and worried over Fox, Fox continuing to lie face down with feelings of confusion and Falco sweatdropping.

“Uh….” Falco started off, “Am I… interrupting something?”
Krystal stammered a bit, “Uh, erm, ah… Fox, you really should watch out for those people throwing stones.”
Fox was silent for a minute and gave a muffled answer still face down on the ground, “Yeah, fshure. Fanks, Rys…”
“I’ll go and try to find those guys throwing rocks at ya Fox.” Falco said taking off from the awkward scene. He was a bit curious about what really happened. All he saw coming around the corner was Krystal dragging Fox towards her and him falling to the ground. He would just have to believe their story for now.

Krystal waited until Falco was out of sight and then dropped quickly down to Fox’s level.
“Are you all right Fox?!”
Fox finally decided to uproot himself and spit out some dirt. “Yeah, I’m all right.”
“I’m so sorry Fox. Really, are you all right?”
He dragged her down to the ground and hugged her tight. “I’m fine Krystal. I’m gonna be all right.”
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Comments: 40

KrystalFoxLove [2011-01-07 07:28:51 +0000 UTC]

Wow its like every moment Fox or Krystal asked each other for a date someone ruins the moment
AND THE FUCKING MUSIC BEHIND IS SO AWKWARD IS A MARRYING MUSIC

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StormTheDragon [2010-04-10 16:37:32 +0000 UTC]

Fox's friends sure do pick the perfect time to intterupt him and Krystal lol

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Masterwolfhunter [2008-11-01 22:24:05 +0000 UTC]

again, when is six coming out ( =

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IamWolfODonnel In reply to Masterwolfhunter [2008-11-03 14:49:53 +0000 UTC]

Internet's been down for a while where I am. So far the only place I've been able to get access is college and I'm not wasting time here of all places.

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Masterwolfhunter In reply to IamWolfODonnel [2008-11-03 22:27:15 +0000 UTC]

oh, got it

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IamWolfODonnel In reply to Masterwolfhunter [2008-11-03 22:47:47 +0000 UTC]

Sorry. That and my dad did something weird to the computer so our used-to-be-high-speed-internet has slowed to a crawl. I swear it takes a half hour to click on something. >.>

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Masterwolfhunter In reply to IamWolfODonnel [2008-11-03 23:08:28 +0000 UTC]

haha, thats funny

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wolfhuntermaster [2008-10-27 07:45:19 +0000 UTC]

hey when is six coming out

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IamWolfODonnel In reply to wolfhuntermaster [2008-10-27 12:54:57 +0000 UTC]

O.o I completely forgot about that. *headdesk headdesk headdesk headdesk headdesk headdesk* I apologize I'll have it up soon.

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wolfhuntermaster In reply to IamWolfODonnel [2008-10-28 01:26:47 +0000 UTC]

u do not know i am a new deviant so i dont know what ur talking when u put*headdesk headdesk headdesk headdesk headdesk headdesk* ok dude

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IamWolfODonnel In reply to wolfhuntermaster [2008-10-28 12:08:53 +0000 UTC]

Sorry. I forgot that not everyone's a anime nerd like me. headdesk is basically me just slamming my head off a desk... really fast.

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wolfhuntermaster In reply to IamWolfODonnel [2008-10-28 22:14:48 +0000 UTC]

u r an anime nerd, well im kinda one

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neosin117 [2008-09-25 00:41:37 +0000 UTC]

good job man.big im a big starfox fan so i hope you get over that writer's block soon.

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IamWolfODonnel In reply to neosin117 [2008-09-25 13:46:40 +0000 UTC]

Eh heh...

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neosin117 In reply to IamWolfODonnel [2008-09-26 03:55:39 +0000 UTC]

yeah.i mean i can never right because i know i always screw it up.but i do have alot of ideas.just cant process any of em.heh,good work man.

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IamWolfODonnel In reply to neosin117 [2008-09-27 04:27:52 +0000 UTC]

Well writing is a bit hard just keep at it. My advice to good writing: detail, detail, detail. Just keep practicing, post 'em up and listen to people's criticism, it helps a lot. Thanks.

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neosin117 In reply to IamWolfODonnel [2008-09-27 04:40:06 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the advice.ive never try'd to write anything about starfox for fear of screwing it up.i guess i might give it a try sometime..

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IamWolfODonnel In reply to neosin117 [2008-09-27 16:05:39 +0000 UTC]

Do it. How do you think I feel? There's only a limited amount of info on their backstories so I'm just shooting in the dark here.

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neosin117 In reply to IamWolfODonnel [2008-09-28 02:08:42 +0000 UTC]

oh.well i guess that mean's i should give it a try sooner or later.it'll probably take longer with me though since i havent try'd to write anything before.thanks for the advice.

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IamWolfODonnel In reply to neosin117 [2008-09-29 00:23:32 +0000 UTC]

No prob. The only reason I can write so well is because I read so much. I guess I paid attention to other authors writing styles or something. Anyways, good luck!

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neosin117 In reply to IamWolfODonnel [2008-09-29 01:15:30 +0000 UTC]

thank you!i used to hate reading when i was little but then about 6 months ago i started to read a book based on a game i used to like,now i cant get enough of it.i like to read more than playing video games now even though it used to be the opposite,i spend most of my time gameing wayyy to much lol.

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IamWolfODonnel In reply to neosin117 [2008-09-30 13:48:58 +0000 UTC]

Same here. XD

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Dalmatiansrule [2008-09-24 02:34:20 +0000 UTC]

This is the onlyone I've found that I like, plus it has had Bill in it! -huge Bill Grey fan- So, when you start writing this one again I'll be so uber happy, that 'throwing the rocks' thing was amazingly funny. x3

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IamWolfODonnel In reply to Dalmatiansrule [2008-09-24 22:10:32 +0000 UTC]

I try. I try. XD Anyways, this may take a while, you know... college and all... DX Anyways, I'd hate to ignore my numerous fans so I'm getting started on it.

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Dalmatiansrule In reply to IamWolfODonnel [2008-09-26 20:25:44 +0000 UTC]

Yay, and yes, college is tough, my parents both go, but they're not full time, but they always have alot of work. Luckily I have a few years until I have to worry about college. xD

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IamWolfODonnel In reply to Dalmatiansrule [2008-09-27 04:28:42 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I'm like almost dead-broke. If not for free housing by my parents I would be living out of my car by now.

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iamfalco [2008-06-23 03:09:34 +0000 UTC]

hey i like this one this is the best starfox fan fiction out there thust me i read them all so keep it up

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IamWolfODonnel In reply to iamfalco [2008-06-24 19:30:52 +0000 UTC]

Well I hate to brag but... XD Jk. Thanks. I will

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iamfalco In reply to IamWolfODonnel [2008-06-25 00:58:09 +0000 UTC]

id love to read it

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jb098767 [2008-05-17 11:54:31 +0000 UTC]

when does 6 come out?

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IamWolfODonnel In reply to jb098767 [2008-05-19 01:35:29 +0000 UTC]

You'll have to wait. I'm in the middle of a writer's block. Sorry, but I'll try to work on it and try to get over it.

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jb098767 [2008-05-15 11:58:00 +0000 UTC]

dude this is an awesome series- keep it up

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IamWolfODonnel In reply to jb098767 [2008-05-16 22:32:34 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Thanks so much. I didn't think this would be such a popular series. I guess I kinda stumbled into something pretty good. I'm also thinking of another series from the StarWolf point of view.

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elvelaced [2008-04-22 04:07:44 +0000 UTC]

man dont stop writing these ur the best sf fanfic riter that ive seen!!!! id keep it peaceful 2 tho
PLZ DONT STOP UR STUFF ROX
this is me when i read ur stuff

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IamWolfODonnel In reply to elvelaced [2008-04-23 01:34:45 +0000 UTC]

Wow.... I have an enthusiastic fan.... Cool!

XD Anyways, thanks for your comments.

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IamWolfODonnel [2008-03-17 21:30:48 +0000 UTC]

I'm just making a story that happens between the Assault and Command games. Otherwise... no.

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Foxoftruth [2008-03-17 21:23:15 +0000 UTC]

I truly believe that you have done an excellent job capturing their personalities. Not very many people concentrate on that. Most concentrate more on the plot then on the personalities and dialogue of the characters.

Are you planning to progress this story anywhere?

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IamWolfODonnel In reply to Foxoftruth [2008-03-17 21:31:01 +0000 UTC]

I'm just making a story that happens between the Assault and Command games. Otherwise... no.

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Foxoftruth In reply to IamWolfODonnel [2008-03-17 21:37:06 +0000 UTC]

Ah, is there going to be some sort of climax or war? Or is this simply a calm and peaceful story?

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IamWolfODonnel In reply to Foxoftruth [2008-03-17 21:44:38 +0000 UTC]

I may throw in a battle in the near future... Who knows?

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