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Oemich [2011-07-29 16:50:40 +0000 UTC]
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Again a stunning photo, the colors are mysterious and makes the picture become mysterious and fairytale like.
only thing I cant figure out about this picture is where to actually look , the main focused object is way out of my eye sight , and I cant seem to get my eyes focused on it , this you might want to keep in mind when taking photographs ; what do you want the viewer to see ? what do you wanna tell.
and in this picture Im not understanding if its the foreground or the blurred background I'm supposed to see , A gentle cropping to get the foreground flower in focus might be ideal , or just moving it , if its possible. I love the blurred background and the sharp flower in the front , but unluckily the sharp flower is way off the background , so they don't come together as a wholeness.
Other wise the bokeh is great , the colors a in a fairytale symphony and generally speaking you're technique is good , but you gotta watch what you wanna show the viewer of the photo , how to make a strong impact.
Think about this and you'll make pictures everyone wants to buy , because you have the basics of it , just needs a little touching up.
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Oemich In reply to ifsantag [2011-07-30 16:01:47 +0000 UTC]
ah! I can see that , but yet again those comments I made , I think they will make that emotion even stronger.
If you get that little lonely flower more infocus , It'll give more contrast and make it feel more lonely, atleast Thats what I would feel , dont you think ?
I can totally see where you're going though , but I think my comments will make this message of this lonely flower even stronger ^^
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ifsantag In reply to Oemich [2011-07-31 13:29:12 +0000 UTC]
Yes, for the focus you are totally right!
I'm astigmatic, so sometime I can't see if the subject is totally in focus... For this shot I used a softner filter (that takes away a little the sharpness) and the manual-focus (having a wrong focus setting -spot- I know)! I think next time I'll use a different setting!
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Oemich In reply to ifsantag [2011-07-31 21:49:07 +0000 UTC]
Wish you luck<3
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ifsantag In reply to matthey [2011-07-27 21:17:16 +0000 UTC]
Many thanks! (:
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