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Published: 2013-05-02 21:58:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 654; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 4
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There are plenty of flaws, but it was fun to make and good for practice.EDIT: I've changed the coloring to make it brighter, the original can be found at: [link]
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I really like this but I think it could use some simple color correction. It's way too dark & slightly desaturated and doesn't seem to have enough contrast. I would add some highlights on the clothes and then take it into a program and up both the brightness and the contrast. Maybe increase the color intensity on the brighter colors as well. This work should be bright and cheery since it's such a cute little animation and the dull colors really hurt an otherwise great piece.
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Thank you so much for the feedback, you're absolutely right. I thought that it might be a little too dark, but I wasn't sure if it was just my monitor. I've changed the coloring to make it brighter and more saturated, and I might add more highlights when I have time. Hopefully it's better now.
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I like it, I feel like that's definitely an improvement
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Stance is there, fairy is there, looks like you got all the major stuff!
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