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iLOATHEusernames — Vampire Yaoi Part 10
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Description The water was warm when I eased myself into it, the water nearly spilled over when I did. The candles made my little bath all the more soothing and the CD that I had put into the CD player was playing a soft melody from a piano. I smiled to myself and let my mind run wild. It had been quite a rough day. And not rough as in what had happened about two hours before, but rough as in like 600 years ago. I decided that I had to find Essence if she was still alive I had to talk to her. It would not only be absolutely amazing to meet a past mother, but a vicious, beautiful killer…okay I had to admit, I wasn’t too pleased about the killing part. I am not too fond of killing and it seems as though I have never been much of a killer. Sure I had attempted but never actually went through with it. I frowned. I still made an attempt and that angered me a bit, couldn’t I have just counted from ten to one? But then again, I didn’t really remember what it was really like to be an angry vampire. As I closed my eyes to let the water soak away my troubles, I heard the door creak and knew that Azazel had come back in, but when I opened them the beautiful face staring at me was certainly not his.
“Zephyr! What are you doing here?!” I exclaimed quickly pulling my legs up to conceal as much of my body as I could. He just gave me a wickedly chilling, but thrilling smile. I felt like he was letting off an electric charge in my direction. I could practically feel it pulsing.
“I just came to talk to you.” He looked me up and down a moment and grinned a vicious hunter’s grin. Only the type of hunting he was doing was much different than hunting for food, he looked to be hunting something else. At the moment it didn’t hit me.
“While I was in the bath?” I made an angry face which set his red eyes into a smoldering fury.
“Like I knew? I do suppose it was a good thing though.” Giving me another predatory look. Okay, now it hit me. I tightened my arms around my legs and looked down into the water. I didn’t really like the feeling of another man, other than Azazel, talking about me like that. Suddenly my CD player made everything worse by playing a beautiful, sad love song. Zephyr smiled.
“Okay, what do you want?” He grinned and I knew that he knew that him being there was unsettling to me. So making things more awkward he leaned closer and let his electric charge practically pulse through my veins.
“I wanted to know if you remembered what I was to you.” I noticed the emphasis that was on the word I.
“What you were to me?” I put the emphasis on you and watched as him predatory grin suddenly became an angry scowl. I smiled a lovely grin of my own and watched as he had the awkward tables turned onto him.
“You mean that you don’t remember how I came to be this way?” I gave him a confused look. Guessing seemed like a good way to get bit if I answered wrong.
“Hmm, lets see. You came to be, that is the question, am I correct?” He waited with a statue’s patience. “Did you come up from the depths of Hell?” I smiled; he frowned. I opened my mouth to speak, when I suddenly got hit with the answer. I did it; it was I who made him. I felt his electricity go wild around me. Then I realized this was his special ability, electricity; and I was in a bath of water. The expression of shock hit my face.
“What?”
“I made you.” I looked at my knees and shook. “You’re not going to kill me, right? I mean I’m Tyler, not Cort.” But before I could look up I felt his hand on me; fear ran up my spine as I waited for the ‘shock of my life’. But it didn’t come. I just sat there with his hand on my shoulder. I looked up and suddenly his lips were on mine I felt his body pressed between my legs in the water and his hand was wrapped in my hair. I began to protest but felt myself giving up quickly. His lips withdrew and his forehead stayed pressed to mine while our noses touched slightly. I breathed and pulled my hands back. One had been against his chest and the other was in his hair. I felt the force of the kiss, not only on my tingling lips, but my tingling body as well.
“You use electricity.” I whispered, stating it more of as a statement than a question.
“What?” Our heads were still together.
“Your power is electricity isn’t it?” I tried to pull back from him, but my arms were just weak against him. I wasn’t so sure if it was me not being strong enough, or me just not wanting to really let him go. Idiot! Azazel would kill him if he found us like this…butMy thoughts began to twist a bit.
“Tyler, I don’t have any certain power. I’m just the ordinary killer.” I gasped. It wasn’t him? I suddenly put two and two together. He was mine. I wasn’t so sure what I meant by that. Somewhere inside I felt a strong passion to be there in his arms, that’s why I didn’t push him away, and the electricity was merely that fierce passion burning for his lips….Stop being so confused, you love Azazel, not some worthless leech. Even though I thought it, I knew I didn’t mean a word of it. The fire was beginning to burn a bit brighter. I pulled my head away slightly and looked at him. His red eyes were quite watered. Was he crying?
“Why do I feel this way? Why am I burning with this-this-” His lips cut me off. I blushed and pushed him away. Fire or no fire I was going to be faithful; maybe….
“You feel it, the feeling that Azazel feels for you, the feeling that you use to feel for me, the feeling I want you to feel for me.” He sat back and looked at me. I no longer saw a monster, but a broken man hiding under those crimson eyes.
“Zeph-” He put his finger to my lips.
“Please, don’t ruin my moment.” He stood up, soaking wet, and practically disappeared. I was left my bath cold, confused, and highly disturbed; so I got out as quickly and efficiently as possible.
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The sun shone in through the windows. I sighed and leaned back in my desk. The teacher was giving her idea of an interesting talk about a former president who reigned for four terms. I, on the other hand, was reminiscing on my little bout with Zephyr. I blushed as I remembered the chemistry I felt when his forehead was pressed to mine. I shook my head and looked to the front of the class room. The teacher, Mrs. Flitch-an old wind bag that seemed like she was raised even before Cort’s time- had turned around and began putting an assignment up on the board. I opened my book and started flipping to the page when someone knocked on the door to the classroom. I looked up slightly interested.
“Come on in.” Mrs. Flitch stammered in her southern accent. The door opened and the principal stepped in with two boys that looked almost too old to be in my grade, two boys whose faces were too much alike, and too much familiar.
“Mrs. Flitch, you have two new students. Silver and Silias Newwell.” He placed a sticky note on her desk and promptly left the room. My mouth was slightly hanging down as I watched all the girls shift and the boys size them up. I couldn’t believe it. They had enrolled.
“Alright class, settle down.” The girls didn’t cease the giggling but Mrs. Flitch continued anyways. “I’m sorry what were your names again?”
“I’m Silver.”
“I’m Silias.” They’re voices were bell like and just as attractive as their faces, but when they simultaneously smiled I think everyone gasped.
“Alright, well the only seats left are next to Tyler in the back. Make yourselves comfortable.” Both nodded and headed my way. Silias took my left and Silver sat in front of him. I shook my head at them.
“What are you guys doing here?” I whispered just a bit too loudly, I saw the girl’s head in front of me twitch a bit and she leaned a little closer to me,
“Your brother wanted us to spy on you.” Silver winked as my mouth dropped ten inches down and my eyes practically began to come out of their sockets. “Umm, I don’t know maybe to learn. A mind is a terrible thing to waste.”
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Comments: 61

Ilda28399 [2013-06-09 16:26:57 +0000 UTC]

ok, no. i am LOST. who is Tyler's Brother? Azazel? ._. wtf? oh gods i am understanding nothing ;;

plus... gods, is that group of vampires his harem or something? meh ahah

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xXxdevonxxgrlxXx [2012-09-12 17:24:04 +0000 UTC]

I'm in love with your writing. c:

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sheep2-0 [2012-08-24 20:26:14 +0000 UTC]

there will be more right?

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Silvereyedfreak01 [2012-04-29 01:39:55 +0000 UTC]

Silvers cute!!¡¡ So is Silas!!¡¡

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Strifey21 [2012-01-17 17:46:21 +0000 UTC]

pleas finish it!!!it grtting goood so far!

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KarlFei-OngIsMine [2011-12-30 04:33:22 +0000 UTC]

[link]

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KarlFei-OngIsMine [2011-12-30 04:32:56 +0000 UTC]

So beautiful!!!

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MayaHime [2011-12-21 20:03:26 +0000 UTC]

wow hun im loving all of it n love the plot n most of all all the details heheh >///< but u have improved with your story n there wherent meany mistakes in it n loved how it all flowed dont know u but loves u's for your stories XD yayayay 4 yaoi heheh >///<

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lestatluva [2011-11-05 06:02:27 +0000 UTC]

Sunofa--

I finally find a good story, and its not updated?


I am begging you. UPDATE.

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RainbowWolfXD [2011-09-21 18:55:03 +0000 UTC]

damn my writting seems so lame now lol *bows* still AWSOME XD

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Melara100 [2011-05-05 16:03:58 +0000 UTC]

So ive been reading this story for a good hour or so. and i finally reach 10 to see that it was posted in 2009... that makes me so sad! I loved this story!! Zephyr makes me wanna shoot em. though i feel compassion for him.. for some odd reason because i feel like he has some good in him and isint always a creeper. Ide never want Tyler to leave Azazel!! There such a great match. and when he said " i can never reach you in time." it makes me wonder how long he had been waiting for him, how long he had been wishing that Tyler was his. (or then Cort) But GAH!!! Is there any way you would continue this story? it seems like such a terrible waste to just drop it! PLEASE do conciser writing it? i loved it so much... <3

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narutosuperfan456 [2011-01-04 22:54:11 +0000 UTC]

wow zephry and tyler wow just wow on the bright side silver and silias are there to check up on him

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Musicgirl00356 [2010-10-22 23:32:04 +0000 UTC]

you have to keep writing more

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Mangacrazy21 [2010-09-14 23:47:15 +0000 UTC]

More??

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Nora-Girl [2010-07-20 23:34:25 +0000 UTC]

more more more more

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SingUchiha [2010-07-11 04:08:29 +0000 UTC]

OMG O.o NEED THE NEXT PART!! THIS IS ADDICTING!! YOU'RE AWESOME

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hyugayume [2010-04-23 00:38:37 +0000 UTC]

whoa...i did not see that coming....wtf is with zephyr anyway.little creeper making out with a boy in the bath anyway and who is his brother!!!??? write more!!!

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Cut-Me-Up-Love In reply to hyugayume [2010-04-27 22:36:39 +0000 UTC]

"Brother" Probably refers to Azazel... Who's not really Tyler's brother.

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hyugayume In reply to Cut-Me-Up-Love [2010-04-28 01:08:16 +0000 UTC]

well idk...that would be creepy though or is there a new character involved?

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xxXSunnyXxx [2010-04-20 19:45:10 +0000 UTC]

This is like the fifth time i've re-read the story and verytime i'm loving it even more~!!!!!!! More please iLOATHEusernames~! ;3

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domoness [2010-04-12 20:50:21 +0000 UTC]

Please continue!!!!!!!!!!! I really like it...

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belovedbluerose [2010-03-07 08:31:46 +0000 UTC]

more please

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Fallen-Angel22 [2010-03-05 04:39:08 +0000 UTC]

plz plz plz rite sum mooor!!!!!!!









*one less lonly girl* c(=

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wolfgirlwarrior254 [2010-02-22 01:01:26 +0000 UTC]

that is so cool you gotta put up more!!! its so smexy!!!!!

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wolfgirlwarrior254 [2010-02-22 01:01:26 +0000 UTC]

that is so cool you gotta put up more!!! its so smexy!!!!!

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backoncemore [2010-02-02 01:33:59 +0000 UTC]

need more!!!!!!!

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sasunaruyaoiluvr4eva [2009-12-22 23:00:21 +0000 UTC]

YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
if you dont im just gonna have to hunt you down and hit you with a golfclub.

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caitalonni94 [2009-12-11 22:07:58 +0000 UTC]

shhiittt! MOOOOOREEE PELASE!!

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YuKi-LeMo-mEmO [2009-11-30 17:34:41 +0000 UTC]

I just love the story...1 question:When r u gonna write the next chapter??? i neeeeeeed it....anw Keep up the good work x3::

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Ttear8starR [2009-10-30 22:58:17 +0000 UTC]

wow i didnt see either of those things coming!! damn...twist much?

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KatluvsNutellaXD [2009-10-20 05:22:29 +0000 UTC]

I was doing so well and then, I hit a brick wall. I'm pretty sure you haven't lost your touch if you've come this far.

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HellsLuv [2009-10-04 02:44:35 +0000 UTC]

OHHHH please don't stop writing your short storys are so fricken addicting

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LovexDeath [2009-10-01 03:24:53 +0000 UTC]

oF Course your not losing your touch. But you must finsih the story off.

P.S love it!!!

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AlealiaKitsune [2009-09-21 14:47:40 +0000 UTC]

YES write another

I read the 1st chapter and i was like ... must find rest

I was so happy when i found out there were this many and its still going!!!!

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RageAgainstHomofobiA [2009-09-06 21:48:10 +0000 UTC]

ahhhh another awesome chapter!!!i loooove the twinz!!!cant wait for the next chapterz!

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Cut-Me-Up-Love [2009-09-01 04:53:02 +0000 UTC]

Yay Silver and Silias! I love those two! And wow, that whole thing with Zephyr. Didn't see that coming

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jessicajeb [2009-08-30 10:13:06 +0000 UTC]

it cant be over keep writing its 3:12 and i need more!

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YoSome1stoleMyName [2009-08-29 23:37:54 +0000 UTC]

Don't stop must read more....

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dragonelldeatheye [2009-08-23 10:53:36 +0000 UTC]

all i can say is wow, from one who loves both vampires and yaoi this is a master peace quite enspiering for myself to continue my own fiction where i lost my touch.

I find reading other fictions of the yaoi type can offten help if i am aproching a wrighters block.

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BadankaJr [2009-08-22 18:20:34 +0000 UTC]

I haven't written comments on the other ones, since I thought it would be better if I wrote something longer. However, I loved every second I used to read these. Sure, first I was kinda confused and had a lot of questions, but now when I'm done reading this they're not as many, so I guess I'll find out when I read some later chapters -nudge, nudge, wink, wink- Know what I mean?
There were some wrong spelling mostly in the earlier chapters (dunno if there is in the later ones, it's not like i've been looking for them), but other than that, your writing style is just amazing! I hope you'll keep writing on this, but if you don't, that's okay, too. Even though I'll be a bit sad. No pressure C:

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God-of-anarchy [2009-08-14 00:50:46 +0000 UTC]

OMG MOAR PLEASE i love the story line, your writing is AWSOME

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LonelyAngel43 [2009-07-13 09:50:24 +0000 UTC]

I loved every bit of it. You should really do another, beside there's too much suspense in this I want to see if Tyler's gonna tell Azazel and what will happen. Or will Zephyr come over to Tyler's house again...JUST DO ANOTHER ONE....PLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEE!!!

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frndshiponfire [2009-07-12 21:42:08 +0000 UTC]

LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!

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cantturnaround [2009-07-12 05:43:30 +0000 UTC]

OMG! i cant beleive i almost forgpt about this story! i had checked back about 20 times but there was no updates and then i forgot to keep checking xP
oh well at least i found it eventually

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animerulez12460 [2009-07-01 03:12:49 +0000 UTC]

WAT?! R U SAYING THAT AZAZEL IS TYLER'S (really Cort) BROTHER? OMFG!!!! U R SUCH A FREAKIN GOOD WRITER!! U CONFUSE THE READERS TO MAKE THEM WONDER EVEN MORE!! U MAKE THEM BEG FOR MORE CHAPTERS TO CONTINUE THE SUSPENSE!!! GENUIS!!!!
just to let u kno, i may seem like a critic but i'm not. i just really think on wat i'm reading.
fantastic job. please continue with this mind-twisting work!

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ItGrievesMyHeart [2009-06-28 17:57:07 +0000 UTC]

this was awesome! Keep on writing this story, pleaaaaseee!!!

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babablaqsheep [2009-06-28 17:32:36 +0000 UTC]

if you want an objective view and need to talk about story direction, i'd be glad to help out. or give you someone's name who's never read this.



funny! i imagined this scene soo many times while i was bored in physics or chem class. two twins walked in (vamps that i knew) - with the principal!!! wow, it's weird that detail is the same. but my fantasy went on with the twins killing the class room and turning me into a vamp with my first meal being my teacher. my physics teacher was cute.

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iLOATHEusernames In reply to babablaqsheep [2009-07-29 22:15:05 +0000 UTC]

ahahaha. omg i love you. youre so funny. i think it's kinda weird when i drift into new ideas for this story in class, it always makes me blush.
thanks.

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babablaqsheep In reply to iLOATHEusernames [2009-08-20 01:29:50 +0000 UTC]

blush away!!!

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infinatedarkness22 [2009-06-24 02:58:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh my God, I so hope you write more!! This is the only vampire story that i've ever been able to get into!! I love it!!! I started reading today, and I absolutely love it!!!

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