Comments: 61
Ilda28399 [2013-06-09 16:26:57 +0000 UTC]
ok, no. i am LOST. who is Tyler's Brother? Azazel? ._. wtf? oh gods i am understanding nothing ;;
plus... gods, is that group of vampires his harem or something? meh ahah
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xXxdevonxxgrlxXx [2012-09-12 17:24:04 +0000 UTC]
I'm in love with your writing. c:
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sheep2-0 [2012-08-24 20:26:14 +0000 UTC]
there will be more right?
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Silvereyedfreak01 [2012-04-29 01:39:55 +0000 UTC]
Silvers cute!!¡¡ So is Silas!!¡¡
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Strifey21 [2012-01-17 17:46:21 +0000 UTC]
pleas finish it!!!it grtting goood so far!
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MayaHime [2011-12-21 20:03:26 +0000 UTC]
wow hun im loving all of it n love the plot n most of all all the details heheh >///< but u have improved with your story n there wherent meany mistakes in it n loved how it all flowed dont know u but loves u's for your stories XD yayayay 4 yaoi heheh >///<
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lestatluva [2011-11-05 06:02:27 +0000 UTC]
Sunofa--
I finally find a good story, and its not updated?
I am begging you. UPDATE.
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Melara100 [2011-05-05 16:03:58 +0000 UTC]
So ive been reading this story for a good hour or so. and i finally reach 10 to see that it was posted in 2009... that makes me so sad! I loved this story!! Zephyr makes me wanna shoot em. though i feel compassion for him.. for some odd reason because i feel like he has some good in him and isint always a creeper. Ide never want Tyler to leave Azazel!! There such a great match. and when he said " i can never reach you in time." it makes me wonder how long he had been waiting for him, how long he had been wishing that Tyler was his. (or then Cort) But GAH!!! Is there any way you would continue this story? it seems like such a terrible waste to just drop it! PLEASE do conciser writing it? i loved it so much... <3
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narutosuperfan456 [2011-01-04 22:54:11 +0000 UTC]
wow zephry and tyler wow just wow on the bright side silver and silias are there to check up on him
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Musicgirl00356 [2010-10-22 23:32:04 +0000 UTC]
you have to keep writing more
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Nora-Girl [2010-07-20 23:34:25 +0000 UTC]
more more more more
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SingUchiha [2010-07-11 04:08:29 +0000 UTC]
OMG O.o NEED THE NEXT PART!! THIS IS ADDICTING!! YOU'RE AWESOME
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Cut-Me-Up-Love In reply to hyugayume [2010-04-27 22:36:39 +0000 UTC]
"Brother" Probably refers to Azazel... Who's not really Tyler's brother.
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xxXSunnyXxx [2010-04-20 19:45:10 +0000 UTC]
This is like the fifth time i've re-read the story and verytime i'm loving it even more~!!!!!!! More please iLOATHEusernames~! ;3
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domoness [2010-04-12 20:50:21 +0000 UTC]
Please continue!!!!!!!!!!! I really like it...
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Fallen-Angel22 [2010-03-05 04:39:08 +0000 UTC]
plz plz plz rite sum mooor!!!!!!!
*one less lonly girl* c(=
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backoncemore [2010-02-02 01:33:59 +0000 UTC]
need more!!!!!!!
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sasunaruyaoiluvr4eva [2009-12-22 23:00:21 +0000 UTC]
YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
if you dont im just gonna have to hunt you down and hit you with a golfclub.
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caitalonni94 [2009-12-11 22:07:58 +0000 UTC]
shhiittt! MOOOOOREEE PELASE!!
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Ttear8starR [2009-10-30 22:58:17 +0000 UTC]
wow i didnt see either of those things coming!! damn...twist much?
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KatluvsNutellaXD [2009-10-20 05:22:29 +0000 UTC]
I was doing so well and then, I hit a brick wall. I'm pretty sure you haven't lost your touch if you've come this far.
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RageAgainstHomofobiA [2009-09-06 21:48:10 +0000 UTC]
ahhhh another awesome chapter!!!i loooove the twinz!!!cant wait for the next chapterz!
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jessicajeb [2009-08-30 10:13:06 +0000 UTC]
it cant be over keep writing its 3:12 and i need more!
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dragonelldeatheye [2009-08-23 10:53:36 +0000 UTC]
all i can say is wow, from one who loves both vampires and yaoi this is a master peace quite enspiering for myself to continue my own fiction where i lost my touch.
I find reading other fictions of the yaoi type can offten help if i am aproching a wrighters block.
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BadankaJr [2009-08-22 18:20:34 +0000 UTC]
I haven't written comments on the other ones, since I thought it would be better if I wrote something longer. However, I loved every second I used to read these. Sure, first I was kinda confused and had a lot of questions, but now when I'm done reading this they're not as many, so I guess I'll find out when I read some later chapters -nudge, nudge, wink, wink- Know what I mean?
There were some wrong spelling mostly in the earlier chapters (dunno if there is in the later ones, it's not like i've been looking for them), but other than that, your writing style is just amazing! I hope you'll keep writing on this, but if you don't, that's okay, too. Even though I'll be a bit sad. No pressure C:
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LonelyAngel43 [2009-07-13 09:50:24 +0000 UTC]
I loved every bit of it. You should really do another, beside there's too much suspense in this I want to see if Tyler's gonna tell Azazel and what will happen. Or will Zephyr come over to Tyler's house again...JUST DO ANOTHER ONE....PLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEE!!!
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frndshiponfire [2009-07-12 21:42:08 +0000 UTC]
LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!
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cantturnaround [2009-07-12 05:43:30 +0000 UTC]
OMG! i cant beleive i almost forgpt about this story! i had checked back about 20 times but there was no updates and then i forgot to keep checking xP
oh well at least i found it eventually
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animerulez12460 [2009-07-01 03:12:49 +0000 UTC]
WAT?! R U SAYING THAT AZAZEL IS TYLER'S (really Cort) BROTHER? OMFG!!!! U R SUCH A FREAKIN GOOD WRITER!! U CONFUSE THE READERS TO MAKE THEM WONDER EVEN MORE!! U MAKE THEM BEG FOR MORE CHAPTERS TO CONTINUE THE SUSPENSE!!! GENUIS!!!!
just to let u kno, i may seem like a critic but i'm not. i just really think on wat i'm reading.
fantastic job. please continue with this mind-twisting work!
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ItGrievesMyHeart [2009-06-28 17:57:07 +0000 UTC]
this was awesome! Keep on writing this story, pleaaaaseee!!!
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infinatedarkness22 [2009-06-24 02:58:28 +0000 UTC]
Oh my God, I so hope you write more!! This is the only vampire story that i've ever been able to get into!! I love it!!! I started reading today, and I absolutely love it!!!
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