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Published: 2013-11-20 23:30:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 5121; Favourites: 174; Downloads: 6
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Wow... I think I'Ve never spent 3 days drawing one picture... This is one of my older HetaOni pictures redrawn, because the old one sucked, but had potential xD (the last panel looks almost the same though, because I kinda liked how it looked) Here's the picture to the old version fav.me/d3eupqd I hope I didn't overdo it with the filters in this one.Β
I used a reference for the mansion, since I didn't exactly know what a mansion looks like.
"Time and time again we fall into the depths of who we are
But you can't keep running away from what youre tryning to find
Well I've seen you and those things you do
And the way you hide that shadow can't be good for you
Your dark defines your light"
Chronic Future - Time and Time Again
Anyways, I hope you like it and comments would make me really happy
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um....I'm a new Hetalia fan,so.............can somebody tell me what is HetaOni?
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Hey. HetaOni is a fanmade "game" (looks like an old rpg-game, but it's actually a video) that tells a fanmade story. It covers the genres horror/mistery/drama and the basic stories is that the Hetalia characters enter a mansion and are unable to escape. As time goes by some of them disappear and encounter foes, but I don't wanna spoiler it in case you wanna watch it.Β
To be honest it took me some time to get into, but the story gets better and the fanworks for HetaOni are incredible too.
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oooh...maybe i look it for myself...thanks ^^
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so this is like Kagerou days
how can i prove
Italy go's back in time but they keep no matter how many times he tried so sad
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not to mention England is also reversing time, like how when one of them dies in kagerou days the other one repeats the day
just as in hetaoni the times repeated
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I haven't watched Kagerou Days (well only one episode), but yeah, it's sad that Italy is so helpless.
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Now tempted to do a HetaOni drawing... ;3; shud i?
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Oh, you most definitely should!
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Yea I will. I have a whole stash of drawings under my bed, waiting eagerly for the day I can somehow get my scanner to work.
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That's good. Keep up your hard work.
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Japan: Oh no, Candy-san is sad! What shourd I do...? *thinking* Oh! I know!
Me: *crying on my bed reading HetaOni UsUk*
Japan: *starts singing May You Smile Today*
Me: *looks up at Japan* Eh...?
Japan: You seemed sad.
Me: *beginning to tear up again*
Japan: *starting to panic* Did I make you even more sad? I'm sorry!Β
Me: *crying*
Japan: *shifting awkwardly on his feet* Candy-san?
Me: *looks up again*
Japan: *opens arms*
Me: *starts to smile*
Japan&Me:Β Β
((I have no clue what this is. It just popped into my head once May You Smile Today started playing))
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Wow..... It shows the whole thing perfectly! I don't really know how to say it....the word "perfect" just isn't good enough....But it is: Beautiful, Sad, And so damn AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β You did great job!
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;____; you have no diea how happy your comment made me!!!!! I'd never go as far as calling this picture perfect, but I'm really glad you like it.
Really, thank you!
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You're welcome! I'm glad i could make you happy!
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Oh, you absolutely did!!
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You know, the one thing that always made me much more... amazed by HetaOni and its fanworks was that they both play on humanity's greatest fears: being alone and the unknown. The way HetaOni shows how Veniciano reacts to both of these in the same breath is so realistic, I now see him in a completely new light.
Another thing about HetaOni that interested me (from the instant I watched KyoKoon's playthrough of the part where Italy reveals his experiences in the mansion) was that it was never said how many loops Veniciano went through, or how long each loop was. It's possible that each loop is several weeks in length, and he's been through it a thousand times, or even more.
So, to sum up my little... whatever you'd call this... This piece reflects everything I think of when I think of HetaOni. It's like an art version of a fanfic that I might have written if I had the time (or inspiration) for it. Thank you for drawing this - it has made the HetaOni fanbase that much better.
(sorry that I haven't commented until now... I was busy making a new game with RPG Maker VX Ace. don't tell anyone, but I'm making a horror game! not Hetalia-related, but still, it's exciting.)
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Yeah, I guess you're right, and also the way in which the fandom pictures the cruel and dark side of humanity. Yep, it just what the original Hetalia show lacks I think. The serious part.
Oh yes, that was the one thing I've wondered about as well. If I'm not mistaken there's a theory in the fandom though I'm just gonna copy-and-paste the comment I got in here:
"About 100 times loops have gone so far, depending on how long each took, he could have been doing that for four or five years...
(someone counted the bloody numbers on the floor, each means a time they got to the room a someone died, there were over 90)"
O.O Thank you so friggin' much for that compliment! Really! I don't think anyone ever took so much time to write a comment on one of my pictures. Oh, but I think you should still write a fanfic for HetaOni. One of my favourite fics is actually a HetaOni fic and I'm sure a lot of people would love to read yours if you wrote it.
(haha it's no problem at all! I'm happy abuot every comment I get. A horror game? sounds interesting! mind telling me what it will be about? Of course only if you want to!)
and thank you again!
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You're welcome for the comment, and I guess I could tell you about my rpg/horror/fantasy game... Geez, when I say it like that the first thing that comes to mind is HetaOni...
It's called The Seven Fables: Fragmented Penumbras. The story takes place in a made-up world, and each fable tells more about the world and its history. I'll type the drive-thru (fast food... get it? ... nevermind...)version instead of the full one (if you want the full one, I can PM it to you.):
Three princes, all supposed to have virtuous qualities, have twisted their lessons to fit their own goals. The eldest brother becomes avaricious, the middle brother becomes vain, and the youngest brother becomes wrathful. They each steal a piece of a very valuable gem vital to their land's safety and form their own kingdoms. When the princes' parents pass on, the three kingdoms force people to migrate to them. The princes end up kidnapping maidens as their wives, and are rewarded with children, whom they promptly raise to have the same moral compasses as themselves.
The princes' great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-grandchildren are in power,Β and eventually, the three kingdoms go to war, but end up declaring a ceasefire due to an all-around shortage of soldiers.
The main character is a victim of the issues in one of the kingdoms (the player can choose which one at the start). Since children are short in the kingdoms due to the war, each king has decreed that marrying and mating animals is necessary for their survival. The citizens do not argue, as nobody remembers a time when the brothers weren't in power. Therefore, there are children who look like half-human, half-animal experiments that escaped from a laboratory.
The king (of the player's choice) is trying to recruit the main character into his army. The story can take two paths: join the army and fight, or run from the army and fight. In this land, fighting happens, no matter where you go. (Ooh, sounds like something I'd put on a movie poster - better reserve that for the trailer... 
What do you think?
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I honestly think it's an amazing concept. It can be a bit confusing at first, but I think that if you accompany the story with pictures there should be no problems. The basic story is quite intriguing and macabre at the same time. In my opinion it fits the genre relaively well, but as of now it sounds more like a dark fantasy game, not so much a horror game. What I think though is that it will be rather hard to make two story paths, meaning it will be a lot of work. I just made a simple game once with an acquaintance, but that was already a lot of work.
And well, I get the background of the story, but what's the main goal? To unify the kingdoms and get rid of the vicious kings or just trying to survive?
Anyways, if you can pull it off I'm sure that there would be a lot of people who would enjoy that game, me included.^^
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It's actually relatively easy to make two story paths in RPGMVXA. I just use 'events' and stuff like that so that, if they choose one thing, certain things happen, and if they choose something else, different things happen. This way, if someone restarts with a new game, it can be completely different from the first game, and it'll be more fun to replay it over and over.
The story is revealed in the beginning as scrolling text. And yes, it's still in development, so it isn't horror yet. But it will be. (I hope...)
I'm also having a friend of mine (in real life) make music for my games. Turns out they've always wanted to make music for video games, so it's a win-win.
However, I do need someone to help me with sprites. Know anyone who can help me?
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I see. Well, I have no idea about those things. Makes sense though.
Hmmm, I'd still try to put some pictures in there. There are people that need to see something to understand it better. I see. Well, I guess that was just the beginning of the story/game you told me of.Β
That's pretty awesome. You're lucky that you've got a friend like that.Β
Hmmmm, no I don't think I know anyone who does sprites. I'd help out but I'm bad at making them, so it wouldn't help. Sorry.
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Yep. You could look it up on Google, Bing, YouTube... Pretty much anything except for Wikipedia.
The rest of the game is video. The story is text that scrolls by in the beginning cutscene.
Yep. They've already sent me a whopping 1 song!
It's okay. I suck at sprites too - why do you think I'm asking for help? I was just asking if you knew anyone, since I don't.
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Wikipedia is usually a good start though. Well anyways, making games is not my cup of tea I guess.^^
I see. That's probably a dood idea.
And it makes it easier and the process faster as well, right?^^
Nah, sorry, can't help you with that.Β
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At my school, all the teachers say that wiki is a bad place to start, so the students adopted that attitude. Also, in Axis Powers, the Japanese creature Britain meets says "You could always check Wiki! I'm sure they've nailed it!" To which the three of them promptly laughed.
Seem to work in my game, so I'll use it!
Yep! Otherwise I'd never finish my games! ... like, ever...
I know, and it's okay. I just wanted to know.
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I see, so I assume you're form the US? I've heard that wikipedia is considered bad in America^^. While I was in school the teachers just said we shouldn't use it, because it would make everything too easy xD (In university we aren't allowed to use it either though) Hahaha I don't even remember that episode/strip.Β
That's good then^^
Haha sounds like somethign that would happen to me.
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Thank you! I'm glad you like it!
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Thank you! I appreciate it! :]
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Lovely art style; I especially love the shading. I also think it was brilliant how you showed the four different expressions on Italy as he goes through more and more time loops. The way you showed that things were getting worse and worse for him by changing the season was really just...an inspired idea, I think. And that last panel, with the items associated with the countries, with the broken glasses, was just the final touch to a perfect peice.
I think that the only problem is how these just sort of step all over me and make we want to
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Wow... This has to be one of the nicest comments I ever received! I'm glad you liked the shading, since I tried out something new and wasn't really sure about it.Β
Awwwww~ here you can have a cookie to make you feel better.
Anyways the only thing left for me to say is: THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOUU SO MUCH!
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Daww, thanks for the cookie. I feel better already.
And really, it was no trouble. I love giving feedback on great pieces of art like this one!!
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Yaaaaay~ I'm glad to hear it!Β
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And you're very welcome again!!! 
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This is fantastic! Excellent work on all the details and the colouring.
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.////. Thank you so much!
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Thank you! I'm glad you like it.
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