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Published: 2009-03-22 01:24:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 86; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 5
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Description Envy
Is what
You call
The burning,
Prickling
Feeling
You get
When the man you love
(The man that broke you)
Is staring at
The town slut
With a hungry eye
And a bulge
In his jeans.
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Comments: 7

synconi [2009-04-04 20:11:44 +0000 UTC]

I love how you have really short lines here, it makes it seem as if you're speaking this through gritted teeth, the jealousy tearing at your soul and making you want to scream...

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InsanePandaz In reply to synconi [2009-04-05 01:02:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.
This is the way I wrote it when I scribbled it down (on a whim) into a notebook...
I decided to keep it like this.
Thanks a lot for your input, that's really what I was going for. ♥

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Mibello [2009-04-04 04:05:21 +0000 UTC]

made me feel how i felt... ): ily Jenny.

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InsanePandaz In reply to Mibello [2009-04-05 01:05:27 +0000 UTC]

ILYM.

Glad you like it.

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Mibello In reply to InsanePandaz [2009-04-08 06:54:08 +0000 UTC]

NO. I DO.

your welcome (:

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InsanePandaz In reply to Mibello [2009-04-08 13:00:12 +0000 UTC]

Nu. Me does.

Ty AGAINN.

Btw I'm going to stalk Alessandro and beat him with a cactus. :]

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FantasyFreak1 [2009-03-29 03:27:27 +0000 UTC]

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InsanePandaz In reply to FantasyFreak1 [2009-03-30 01:22:03 +0000 UTC]

o__o

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