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Pirate-Assassin [2011-02-01 13:38:19 +0000 UTC]

The colouring in this is really well done! Especially in the hair. And I love the eyes in the bottom right

While the anatomy here is generally pretty good, I hope you dont mind me giving you some constuctive crit. Her left leg (our right) looks a little bendy. For how she's standing, I'd say that the inside line would have to be straight, or even curved out a tiny bit. Also, watch her hip line. It should follow where the leg is going, not where the clothes are flowing (A little rhyme there ) And conversely, the clothes should fall where the curves are, rather than the curves being dictated by the clothes. Do you know what I mean? So even if tHe blue bit of her skirty thing if billowing out, I would suggest the belt bit come in a bit, otherwise the top of her leg looks a bit lost! Her features on her face are well done, but her eye could perhaps be a little bit more central, rather than at the side? And her mouth a bit further up. Generally theres about a nose length from the chin to the bottom lip, but yeah.

I like how you've done her torso, and her arms, and the clothes are drawn well, especially the sleeves! I suck at clothes, so I envy you that! You've clearly got a lot of talent and ability. Keep at it!

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Mintiff [2011-02-01 00:57:20 +0000 UTC]

Very pleasing colors

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RobotNinjaHero [2011-01-30 22:10:26 +0000 UTC]

Good work.

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pennydox [2011-01-30 02:34:33 +0000 UTC]

love the skin tones. What colors did you use for it? I am working with this kid about drawing manga and stuff, and I was thinking of a cheap alternative to coloring, and I thought color pencils might be a great idea. Was it easy for you to learn?

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Axel-luvs-cookies [2011-01-30 01:58:52 +0000 UTC]

looks amazing!

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