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Published: 2011-12-13 23:32:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 252; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 3
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Description Still here together, but at the very edge
Only one more step will take us over the ledge
We can never go back, but we can't move ahead

Not even if we want to
Not even if we beg

Still here together, though we're standing apart
Feeling every little thing as it's piercing my heart
I want to go back, but I can't get out of the dark

Not even if I want to
It's just way too damn hard

Still here together, but I've been feeling so alone
I feel you slipping away, I'm losing all that I've known
I never wanted you to leave, I'm screaming out 'No!'

Can you even hear me?
Please...
You don't have to go...
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Comments: 20

perfectlyimperfect19 [2012-06-16 21:26:42 +0000 UTC]

my favorite part that i really relate with is "we can never go back, but we cant move ahead". a guy iused to know and love recently disappeared from my life.. Ill say again you are so very talented! Your writing is so easy to relate to..

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Invoking In reply to perfectlyimperfect19 [2012-06-17 01:34:54 +0000 UTC]

D'aw... You make me blush o3o
Thank you very much for the compliments, and it flatters me you hold me with such high regard ^///^ thank you very much for your support, my good person <3 It's very much appreciated.

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perfectlyimperfect19 In reply to Invoking [2012-06-17 02:02:26 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome and you certainly deserve it i really relate to some of your writing since i have been battling with difficult things in life recently.

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tamiea [2011-12-14 03:54:06 +0000 UTC]

I love it. There is sadness and plea in it. Nice combination of feelings
I like it that there are spaces It feels airy .
lol lots of room to take a breath
It also feels like you ponder each verse

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Invoking In reply to tamiea [2011-12-14 04:07:19 +0000 UTC]

I swear, it's like you know exactly what I do whenever I write something. I did put a lot of thought into each verse, not only for the rhyme, but also the correct feelings..

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tamiea In reply to Invoking [2011-12-14 04:17:05 +0000 UTC]

LOL I can read minds O.o .... or not... hehe I am studding English lit. so I kind of analyze yours same way

And also I write to.. so it help to understand where are you going from.

And I love your poems because there is lots of emotions in it not just flat mechanics...

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Invoking In reply to tamiea [2011-12-14 04:34:35 +0000 UTC]

I see...well, glad I could help, i guess :3

I figured as much..

And I'm always glad to recieve your comments <3 thank you.

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tamiea In reply to Invoking [2011-12-14 11:57:19 +0000 UTC]

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KristinaStoud [2011-12-14 02:16:33 +0000 UTC]

;n; This feels so lost and alone

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Invoking In reply to KristinaStoud [2011-12-14 02:38:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you <3 that is how I felt when i wrote it..

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KristinaStoud In reply to Invoking [2011-12-14 02:45:53 +0000 UTC]

Sad poetry seems to be the most beautiful to me. The emotions are so much more intense.

Are you still feeling that way?

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Invoking In reply to KristinaStoud [2011-12-14 02:52:36 +0000 UTC]

Sad poetry is all I can ever seem to write..

No, I'm feeling much better now, thanks to Oreo <3 Thank you for asking though..

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KristinaStoud In reply to Invoking [2011-12-14 03:16:53 +0000 UTC]

That's not necessarily a bad thing. At least you're expressing your emotions instead of bottling them up.

That's good. I'm glad

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Invoking In reply to KristinaStoud [2011-12-14 03:28:45 +0000 UTC]

That is very true, indeed.

Thank you <3

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KristinaStoud In reply to Invoking [2011-12-14 03:35:07 +0000 UTC]

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Invoking In reply to KristinaStoud [2011-12-14 03:38:12 +0000 UTC]

Lol adorable! x3

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KristinaStoud In reply to Invoking [2011-12-14 03:47:06 +0000 UTC]


I love this series of plz accounts >w<

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Invoking In reply to KristinaStoud [2011-12-14 03:55:40 +0000 UTC]

Lol it is pretty funny x3

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ShadesOfRage [2011-12-13 23:56:22 +0000 UTC]

I like this. I can relate.

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Invoking In reply to ShadesOfRage [2011-12-13 23:58:55 +0000 UTC]

Yeah...you have my empathy..

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