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Published: 2014-12-10 02:59:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 775; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 5
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Red sky at night, sailor's delight,Red sky at morning, sailor's warning.
~~ So this adopt came from a highly advanced laboratory, unfortunately the lab was burned to the ground some time ago. I found his robotic lion in the rubble and was able to repair him. Meanwhile, it was deduced that someone had purposely burnt the laboratory as it's facilities were too high tech for an accident. This has led many to believe something sinister went on there and is connected to this creation.
The lion, while highly intelligent and capable of understanding humans, seems unable to communicate it'self. I've tried to communicate with it and ask it what happened at the lab, but it seems there is a block wired into it's mind. It seems to anticipate a great danger yet whenever it tries to tell me, it's body begins to convulse and this goes on for several minutes. I've tried to repair the glitch however it's wired too deeply into it's mind.
I'm hoping someone will allow him to show them the danger before it's too late.
So! This is the guy I've been working on for about a week now and am super proud of it. I've tried out a new shading style and am very happy with it. Since I've fallen so in love with this guy he will be more expensive than the others. You don't need to keep the back story I've written up if you don't want to.
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XD He's still available for that amount if you're interested
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Ok I'll do it! Can you help me with character development?
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Just send over the points and he's all yours!
And of course! I adore character development so I'd be happy to ^u^
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Done!
ok while I love the story you have for him and the danger sensor is a great touch I wanna keep that trait I was wondering if he could be a transformer. What do you think?
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He's all yours!
Of course! He belongs to you now so you can do whatever you want with him! The damage and the danger he senses could perhaps be the result of battle damage to his mind. Or perhaps he got too close to the Allspark and as a reaction it did that to him?
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Thanks!
Oh! Who ever found him could be your character! Like in the description it says that some one found him and its like a partner relationship! Oh oh! I have half the back story! Ok when the lab burned down the person found him and repaired him but the glitch to sence danger stayed and soon they got used to eachother to the point where the lion (which I need to make a name for) what's to protect his partner. Then after a while the lion could have ran into a AllSpark fragment and it fused into him creating him a cybertroian! And gave him the ability to transform into a bot and another animal transformation! Like a lepored seal that swims or another creature that swims there arnt enough of swimming transformers D:
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Hmmmm.. I'm not sure I have a character that would quite fit...
The story certainly sounds very interesting so far though! You could always make him a beast-former to begin with though, he could still be in the lab and whatnot but perhaps he gets 'stuck' in his lion form and only later on the glitch gets repaired?
Though the Leopard Seal sounds awesome, there's got to be a reason for it. Evolution and Natural selection would apply somewhat to Cybertronians too so everything has to have a reason. What legitimate reason would there be to give him an extra transformation? And bots with more than two forms are considered quite rare already so just keep that in mind, you could always make another bot for the seal?
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Good point so let me change it up a bit,
Flinch (is now the lions name) could have been a beast-Former which had crashed on earth and the lab found him and gave him a home, he was damaged in the crash and it kept him in his beast mode sense it is more stronger than his robot form. Then the fire came and burnt down his home and that's when the person found him and fixed him up and the glitch was from the fire burning important circuitry and left him with the danger glitch.
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Sounds awesome!
I'm really liking that story, it's very solid and interesting!
Now you've just got to figure out his personality and his history on Cybertron. If you're interested I can show you how to write the same full-length balanced personalities I've got for my babs on the website?
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Thank you ^^
ok sure that's sounds like a good idea! Also can I ask a favor 
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I'll note you in a sec with the personality stuff
And it's not too hard, all you have to do is copy and paste one of the forms that's already been written up. Perhaps use SeamRippers one since there's not too much info there yet. Then just replace each section with stuff about your bot. 
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No I meant could you create Flinches bot mode,
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I'm just starting back at Uni tomorrow so I'm not sure I'll have the time to do a full design and reference but if you'd like I might be able to do a sketch or something when I've got the time?
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Sure that's sounds just fine ^^
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I wish I had the points for this guy, I would take him in a heart beat.
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Well going with the track record so far, he'll probably still be here when you do XD
Thanks though, I really appreciate the interest
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ooooo i love this guy!!!! will def offer once another commission has been accepted. I need to see how much I have after it.
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Fantastic, I look forward to it
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Or if you are also accepting charries I have some here
sta.sh/220wxwlhmka1
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They're very nice and a few are quite tempting however at the moment I'm just looking for points as I'm saving to extend my premium membership.
Thanks for the offer though!
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dang, the commission is actually going to take all my points
I will def keep an eye out and see if he is still there when i get more points.
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Sorry about that, I want to get this membership quickly so that I can start earning points to order my own commissions. My poor charries have been going without for a while
He'll most likely still be here, he has been for a long while and I will be waiting to see how many offers I get before I choose one.
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No problem. It is understandable. I hope you can get the points your looking for!
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Cheers! Good luck getting that commission!
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