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IsisOfTheTormented — x:.Fear over Him.:x
Published: 2006-02-15 21:27:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 81; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Your kissturns black
against my lips
I hide from your attack
Your touch
Turns red
upon my chest
And inside I am dead
Your hand
turns blue
around my waist
I am still, silent, subdue
Your words
dissappear
I don't need you
Why, for so many years, was I in fear?
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Comments: 6
I love this poem....I think its amazing poetry!
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all though this poem is not very long or good i can still relate to what it's saying and that's really important when reading anything
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Erm...thank you?
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i wasn't meant to write that but i wrote it at skool and we ran out of time and i accidently subbmitted it
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Wow. That was ... it lacked everything that makes a good peom, except rhythm...
All the technicalities, the poetic devices, not one.
And yet, that was amazing. It's in the meaning, thankyou for writing this.
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Thank you for the comments. I am not as good as you, I must admit that.
Yes, I hate writing traditional styles of poetry, I don't know why. 
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