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Published: 2008-02-02 05:54:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 172; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description It's not alright,
and I'm not okay.
I want your help,
but I'm fine on my own.
Things aren't the way I'd like them;
it was never perfect and it never will be.

You'll be happy to know
that I'm glad your around.
As long as your here
these things don't matter.
I can look past them
and maybe just for a moment
I can smile.
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Comments: 4

Anarkei [2010-01-18 22:33:53 +0000 UTC]

This is a sweet poem, but it all comes crashing down when you realize you were using the wrong "your".

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BayEagle2007 [2008-02-06 02:59:11 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, I like it. It flows really well.

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Jabul In reply to BayEagle2007 [2008-02-07 02:20:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, looking back it sort of worries me. But I'm glad to know that it flows, its something I tend to obsess over.

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BayEagle2007 In reply to Jabul [2008-02-08 02:11:32 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, same here. Thats the one thing that I have trouble when writing poems. Most of the time it comes out well even though I didn't plan it.

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