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Description The Earthling Generals of the Outer Senshi

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I was talking with about the Inner Senshi and their beloved Generals that were corrupted by Beryl and became evil....in my doujin these Generals are like the Zodac Knights, militars that must protect and serve the Goddess and Gods, that were jugded by the Earthling Martial Court and by the Queen Gaia and King Atlas themselves ;they were punished working on the Underground Mines for their own sake and redemption with Earth and Moon. But the Outer Senshi had their Generals too!!
These are their Zodiac Knights:
Stalactite of Scorpio -
The oldest of them he is Setsuna's fiancé that she couldn't stand with....why?Because he's not a sailor and she wanted to have a sailor fiancé as her oldest sister Sailor Charon without being a successor to Charonian crown.She never accepted the fact that she had to serve Princess Selenity on Moon as her vassal,and Beryl like a poisonous snake corrupet her.She didn't got together with Stalactite and the Dead's Gate were open in the time of Beryl's attack against Moon, setting free many Titanic Beasts that destroyed the Moon Kingdom barriers killing Stalactite and Setsuna herself almost at the same time.
Pumice of Aquarius-
The Devas warrior was very strong and wise, and welcomed the shy and insecure Haruka personally...both of them were excited about the engagement even if the progress was something slow because of Haruka's gangling about non- pirate manners and being a real Princess by her first time.....but Beryl poisoned her too through Setsuna's speech about " a Dalit is free and must be free like the wind with no Kshatriya caste warrior by her side like a bird in a cage". She bretrayed him with Michiru and the Higher Barriers from the Moon Kingdom were destroyed , even with Pumice's efforts and Haruka's crying last call for her fiancé before dying claming for forgiviness in her last seconds of life.
Calcarice of Pisces -
Very handsome, very arrogant and a clever Atlantian Warrior, Calcarice and Michiru were trying not to argue and fight all the time, and their troubled romance were poisoned by Beryl through Setsuna's speech again telling that " the mermaids must be the self-owner of their hearts, not a sea horse's puppet ....the mermaid,she must swim free on the ocean and never cede to anyone". Michiru betrayed Calcarice with Haruka just to tease him a little like she always liked to do with him but that time the Sea of Serenity was attacked by the Moon Dark Side Beasts and Calcarice were devoured by the Hydra....desesperated Michiru tryed to save her merman , but the hydra's 5th head was already mouthing her last forgivness cry.
Lazulle of Capricorn - The youngest of all Generals, the shy and cheerful Egyptian warrior welcomed the young and shy Saturnian Princess with joy; their relationship were perfect until Setsuna's desire for freedom just take Hotaru's health with Beryl's poison again.....but there was no speech this time, just a glass of poison. Because of Hotaru's weak heath her right to own the Space/Time Powers were denied by Pharaoh Chronos, and he had to deliver these very powerful powers to the other Egyptian Confederation member from the Moonian Court: Setsuna, the lunar Sailor Pluto.
With "only" the Destruction Powers of Saturn, Hotaru and her young General weren't able to stop the bloody bestial army that obeyed Beryl at the Moon Kingdom Front Gate , and the Egyptian couple died honorably together.

When Sailor Sun recovered his memories about the Moon Kingdom Doom, he searched by these Generals that receieved the right to resurrect on Earth like their fiancées senshi,and a new battle amongst these lost Moonian Court members were just going to start.
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Comments: 10

Inohasha [2011-11-20 04:20:19 +0000 UTC]

just omg i found it.. I love it.. i want the story

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MariaTenebre [2011-10-30 04:10:18 +0000 UTC]

Wow it is cool to see that I am not the only one who made Outer Senshi counterpart Shittenou

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Jabuticaba2008 In reply to MariaTenebre [2011-10-31 00:09:43 +0000 UTC]

Really? Thank you
Do you have any artwork with them? I would like to see

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MariaTenebre In reply to Jabuticaba2008 [2011-10-31 03:03:14 +0000 UTC]

I am going to post some artwork of one of them.

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Jabuticaba2008 In reply to MariaTenebre [2011-10-31 04:42:25 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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TheDemonDM22 [2011-08-06 12:39:50 +0000 UTC]

I love their stories! Their designs are also quite unique!
I love Scipio and Capricorn It seems there will be a lot of drama centered around them!

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Jabuticaba2008 In reply to TheDemonDM22 [2011-08-07 01:48:16 +0000 UTC]

thank you dear
Yes, for sure ! Specialy Haru and Michi: they lost their memories and when their Generals give them their transformations pens, they'll recover it and a lot of sopa-opera confusion are going to happen with these "mean to be" exchanged couples

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TheDemonDM22 In reply to Jabuticaba2008 [2011-08-07 01:51:07 +0000 UTC]

Ho it should be good! I always enjoy drama of course you could tell that by now XD
Oh not to go away from the topic but I've recently drawn a sketch of Kitse's final release:
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anemoneploy [2011-08-06 06:20:21 +0000 UTC]

Wow! The story looks good. I do not feel right in the original sailor or write to fanfiction. I know to write a story for the romantic drama. I never thought I would write home about fanfiction of Shitennou Inner senshi in the Victorian romantic.

But this time I worked on school official documents. And I'm tired of writing it = = ". Now I can focus on drawing. So I stopped writing fanfiction here.

I appreciate your diligence and character design. This is a task that requires very of energy. ^ ^ b

But I think there are only two generals for Pluto and Saturn. Because of Uranus and Neptune are lesbians. They would not be interested in other men. ^ - ^ By Neptune. I think that no man would dare to love her. He had to fight with Uranus.

I add this pic to the my FAV.

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Jabuticaba2008 In reply to anemoneploy [2011-08-07 01:44:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your support dear

I see just studing all the time is stressing
Hope you have inspirational for writing this romantic fanfic someday it would be lovely to read

Naoko shows Haruka only lesbian, and Michiru shows apparent bisexuality teasing Seiya on the 5th season, but these four Generals are from a doujin made by a fan and here everything is possible
I'm very sorry for this big explanation but I think it's really important to understand my needs to have created these 4 and not only 2 Outer Generals.

I created this doujin based on the Yin/Yang nature of the Universe, and wanted to give men a place in this story where they never had: the sailor senshi place. I just thought if women are Moon's daughters and fight in the name of Gods so I want my boys be Sun's sons and fight in the name of the Gods too, I want harmony and completeness that I never had reading the official story so I created Sailor Sun and his squad.
To have this with the all Silver Millenium senshi I wanted to give them their Generals too, 'cause in my story ALL Silver Millenium Princesses must to make the Yin/Yang tantra together with their consorts to give stability and strenght to the Silver Millenium High Lunar Magic;without the couples union (love) everything ruins and everything fades....it's like real life but it's worse at the same time because here the disharmony between the coulples since Endymion and Selenity to Stalactite and Setsuna was the Silver Millenium doom...there was no stability and the High Magic was very thin and weak because of the lack of love, tantric union between the members of the court.To achieve this goal with this High Magic tantric rules I needed all Princesses being able to marry with men, and so I did.


My Sailor Uranus is bissexual and she's a redeemed Space Pirate that had an affair with Sailor Sun when they were about 14....she abduced him
After defeating her he advised her to subscribe as Sailor Uranus on his aunt Selenity's Youth Court, for her daughter Princess Selenity. She liked the idea of having a new life like a reconigzed Princess, something she wanted the most - she is a Dalit and because of that she became a space pirate- and after arriving on the Silver Millenium she met Pulmice and fell in love with him, but she felt physical atraction for Michiru too

Pulmice makes Haru-chan shakes with emotion and she is very shy with him....she can't fight with him at all even with her bad-temper and rebel nature....he makes her feel....free of pressure, free like a bird on the sky with no need for violence, like the Hindu Devas teach.

Michi-chan is really bissexual in my doujin and she is always teasing Calcarice...she loves it and she loves him very much even if she doesn't tell him; Calcarice is very passionate about her but he likes to tease her too ( reminds Mamoru with Usagi sometimes ) although his arrogance if something happens with Michi he is the first to be desperate to solve her probem or save his mermaid if is necessary.

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