HOME | DD

Jackadi — Ziggurat-request

Published: 2010-05-09 17:20:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 740; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 18
Redirect to original
Description For adverbial-spectra. It was wonderful to draw it !!
Related content
Comments: 8

CowgirlTivio [2010-06-28 01:06:47 +0000 UTC]

Prepare for a long comment!
First off, the finished product of this is very nice. It captures the moment in time with feeling, presence and a put together ambiance.
The muscle definition and shadowing are very prominent and done quite well in the chest and groin area, and a bit in the neck also, but the rest is hardly. More all over would make it seem more balanced.
The head is well done, i am impressed, the eye seems submissive.
The front left hoof's position seems out of place a bit. If the joint of it were more bend so the hoof were downward pointing, it would make it more realistic.
As a whole, the anatomy is almost perfect, except the point i made about the hoof.
The mane and tail are not quite flowing enough to portray the gait this horse is moving, if they were more free-flowing, this would make the drawing have more feeling. And on a minor note, for the mane to run a bit farther on the whithers.
The markings on the horse are quite realistic, other than a few places (Middle underbelly, right front leg white/color transition) which could be smoother.
The work is nice in general, it looks as though you have a grasp on equine anatomy and such.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Jackadi In reply to CowgirlTivio [2010-07-01 15:42:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for taking the time to post such a long comment ^^
I'm very happy to see this drawing caught your attention and be sure I'll take your critics in consideration for my next drawings !!
Thanks again

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

CowgirlTivio In reply to Jackadi [2010-07-02 22:57:15 +0000 UTC]

Haha no problems!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

LissyH [2010-06-03 20:02:21 +0000 UTC]

fatastic drawing when you have fun came and enjoin my group

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Jackadi In reply to LissyH [2010-06-03 20:03:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, I'm gonna check out your group ^^

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

LissyH In reply to Jackadi [2010-06-03 20:04:54 +0000 UTC]

thanks have a nice weekend

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

adverbial-spectra [2010-05-23 05:54:45 +0000 UTC]

Featured it in my journal. Thanks again! [link]

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

adverbial-spectra [2010-05-09 21:01:23 +0000 UTC]

I love it! The hair and the shadows are especially lovely.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0