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Published: 2004-06-04 04:29:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 367; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 171
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a building i did for pixelmoon. took about 4 hours. and im glad with the outcomeRelated content
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cool... sweet...nice. youve got some feeling for iso-metric pixelart 
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Pretty nice, it could do with some shadows and smome more detail though.
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Hi jack.
I like the idea, but there are a few things that should be fixed before it will land on the moon.
1. Chemical waste should not be held in an open air basin. You should add a roof maybe with enforced glass panels.
2. The sign is quite bad actually. The words are not isometrically aligned. It doesnt have to be readable, but this looks weird. It also is paper thin and could use a more substancial construction.
3. The building is too square and too small It also needs more details (besides the three pipes on top).
4. The scale is too small for this kind of facility. You could add a construction that shows how the waste is pumped or dumped into the basin. It needs a security perimeter like a fense or shielded zone.
I hope these tips are of any help. Being the owner of Pixelmoon I can tell you it will not be posted in this state 
If you have any questions, I am very willing to help where I can.
Also see this tutorial [link] on shadow and general outlines to give your project more depth.
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thanks for the tips bgr, ill fix it up this weekend.
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You are welcome. Im looking forward to the changes
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that's awesome.....but must get really boring when u r making that lol
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oo nice jack....the crack in the wall is awesome lol
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