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jam2599 — Open Your Eyes 1.16
Published: 2007-08-30 13:57:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 8412; Favourites: 58; Downloads: 46
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Chapter One, Page Sixteen, of Open Your Eyes.Please read from left to right.
(EDIT) Commentary: I personally like the first two panels the most. They're really the only panels I like. I do prefer the whole page artistically to the previous page, but the lower panels are still disappointing after the first two.
I had to change Naruto's dad's/Yondaime's name. I heard an internet rumor that it was Kazama Arashi (or something like that) but it was revealed a manga chapter or two ago that his name is Namikaze Minato. Naruto got his last name from his mother.
Feel free to guess what Minato is going to ask Hinata.
Prologue:
Cover: [link]
Page One: [link]
Page Two: [link]
Page Three: [link]
Page Four: [link]
Page Five: [link]
Page Six: [link]
Page Seven: [link]
Page Eight: [link]
Page Nine: [link]
Chapter One:
Cover: [link]
Page One: [link]
Page Two: [link]
Page Three: [link]
Page Four: [link]
Page Five: [link]
Page Six: [link]
Page Seven: [link]
Page Eight: [link]
Page Nine: [link]
Page Ten: [link]
Page Eleven: [link]
Page Twelve: [link]
Page Thirteen: [link]
Page Fourteen: [link]
Page Fifteen: [link]
Page Seventeen: [link]
Insert Pages:
Inoichi: [link]
Rock Lee: [link]
Chouji: [link]
"Fun" pages:
Confusion: [link]
Yamanaka Ino, "Sai", Akimichi Chouji, Nara Shikamaru, Haruno Sakura, Rock Lee, Danzou, ???, Hyuuga Hinata, Ichiraku, Hayate, Shiranui Genma, Aburame Shino, Inuzuka Kiba, the Fourth Hokage, and the original Yamanaka Flower Shop are from NARUTO by Kishimoto Masashi
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Comments: 53
I'm always worried about that...but I'm glad you think I did okay.
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Wow, I just discovered your comic and I have to say that so far, this is awsome. Though, I admit, I'm confused by the name comment that Hinata is thinking and I couldn't possibly guess what Minato is going to ask her...I can only hope it has something to do with them dating. Is there going to be any NaruHina action in this comic?
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They're father and son but their last names don't match, so Naruto was probably born out of wedlock (he's an illegitimate child), and that subject is probably embarrasing for both Naruto and his father.
As for "NaruHina action"...I've made a point of not announcing pairings so far, but for the Naruto/Hinata pairing I think I can freely say, yes, something will happen between Naruto and Hinata. I will not say who ends up with and has beautiful children with whom, though. But yes, something will happen and I will not specify anything else.
I could also tell you that I hate love triangles and avoid them at all costs. I hope that answers your question a little.
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Yes, it does. I won't pry too much, I know some spoilers can be a bad thing and I usually try and respect the author's/artist's wishes. When people started putting up the last two chapters of the last Harry Potter book before the book's release date, I didn't go near. I wanted to know what happened, but I wanted to know what happened from reading the whole book, not cheating.
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Heh heh...that depends on my schedule.
I have the lineart done but coloring will take a while.
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oooh, i wonder what he will ask hinata? cant wait for the next page~
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gah cliffhanger -_-' lol but really nice other wise
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The perspective was a great dramatic effect. ^^ I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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I'm so glad someone noticed the perspective! I was afraid his arm and hand just look deformed.
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Nah, I noticed it right off the bat. You did a good job conveying it. ^^
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YAYS!!!! -glomplicks- I have been hungering for another chapter to reveal itself! I love you Jam-sama!
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Heh heh, glad you like it. I know this one took a while. Thanks for the love!
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You'll always get love from me.... -blinks- Uhhh... that didn't come out right.... -shifty eyes- LOOK! A DEAD BIRD! -points at the sky and runs away-
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The bird is dead and it's still in the sky? Then it's a ZOMBIE BIRD!
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-nods from behind the tree- We should eat it's grains before it eats our brains!!!
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NOOOO JAM-SAMA!!! -eats zombie bird-
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Awesome so far! I love the whole 'saiino' and 'naruhina' pairings, along with all the modern-day characters 
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I'm glad you like it! I try to update as often as possible, but I have several things to work on for other people and I like to draw "fun stuff" as well--besides my real-life obligations.
Also, I haven't declared any pairings yet.
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omgosh
im getting a little excited
i'm wondering what happened with the family
but, i might have to wait for that now wont i
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Yes. I hope the answer isn't too predictable.
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i it isn't too
because im clueless at the moment
and it would ruin my train of thought D:
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nice use of manga info! ^_^ i wonder about the names too!
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Thanks! It's odd that around the time that I gave Minato a name (the last page) Kishimoto revealed what his name was. I'd guessed wrong, if you remember.
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hehe J/K
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Now that would be something.
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Thanks! Though I had to change the story a little because of the names.
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a cliffhanger?!
nooooooo!!!
LoL XD
hmmmm... Shikamaru USED to date Ino riiiiiiiight? ... ... ... ShikaTema!! XD
I'm not making a request, I'm just in my own little world right now
unless... nah... I might ruin an idea you got in your head already >.<
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Each page is sort of a cliffhanger because it takes so long for me to get them out...but yes, this was actually intended to be a bit of a cliffhanger.
Yes, Shikamaru used to date Ino. All I can say about Temari is that it'll be a long time before she enters the story.
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ok then, good luck on your next one!! XD
Nooo!!! that long?! ... meanie ... T_T
LoL
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