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Published: 2011-11-16 09:46:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1481; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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First completed page of a short story I'm doing withNext
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You're backgrounds and line work are outstanding. I think you're going too crazy with the shading, though.
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Thanks, but could you explain what you mean by "too crazy"?
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Thanks, I think. Too crazy? Elaborate.
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The shading looks fine to me! 
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Thanks bro. I was hoping she'd explain what she meant. I'm happy with it myself but I'm curious how she thinks I went overboard.
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No prob. I can't really knock her eye...if it's off to her, then it's off to her. But I agree with you...a little bit of elaboration of why it's too much would've been nice.
That's kinda how this whole constructive criticism thing works...that would be like me going to someone who just dropped a drink on the floor and saying "You dropped your drink" without telling them where the mop and/or paper towels are to clean it up.
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Oh well, maybe it's karma. I do stuff like that sometimes just to be amusing by stating the obvious.
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Perhaps it is karma indeed!
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Wow man...I can definitely see the improvement in your style! Nice layout thus far!
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Really? Thanks! I'm so rusty... still kinda feel like I'm getting it back but I'm liking how this story looks.
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Just read this again. Thanks again, sometimes it's hard to see your own improvement. I know you feel that way yourself. We just have to keep practicing.
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You're welcome man...I definitely know the feeling of it being hard to see your own improvement!
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