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Published: 2014-05-17 23:06:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 22361; Favourites: 90; Downloads: 31
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You see it here folks, me and my lovely lady are doing our OWN re-write of Total Drama All-Stars! Featuring: Gwen, Duncan, Heather, Courtney, Lindsay, Alejandro, Sierra, Cameron, Zoey, Mike, Scott, Jo, Lightning.... and welcoming back: Owen, Noah, Dawn, Brick, and Anne Maria! First 4 episodes are done, currently working on episode 5. So if you thought All-Stars was a tad disappointing and you wanna see two true Total Drama fans re-write it.... stay tuuuuuned!DISCLAIMER: I OWN NOTHING!!!
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I hope non of you guys mind if I put a my way here for this cast.
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Episode 1: Chris introduces the 17 All Stars by making Chef throw them off a plane into the water one by one and addressing each one before chef throws them off. Chris says that for the first episode it won't be a challenge or elimination, but teams would be chosen which filled everyone win glee. Chris states that the team are based off Heroes vs Villains. The Heroic Hamsters are: Owen, Courtney, Brick, Sierra, Lindsay, Mike, Cameron, Zoey, and Dawn; The Villains are: Heather, Lightning, Jo, Anne Maria, Duncan, Scott, Noah, and Gwen. Gwen is uninterested and confused as to why she is on the villains, Courtney answers her by saying "You stole my man you gothic twat!". Duncan tries to cheer Gwen up about it. Heather complains that there is only 8 villains while there is 9 heroes, so Chris puts the robot on their team, much to Heather's discomfort. After the teams are confirmed everyone was free to roam the island as the please. Interactions: Heather and Jo feud over who the team captain should be, Scott buds in and tells them to shut up, which eventually ends up with all the villains arguing except Gwen and Duncan, who are walking through the forest with Cameron, Mike, and Zoey having a chill convo about life, friends, the game etc. Back at the hero cabin Courtney wants to plan to get Duncan and Gwen voted out so she goes over and barges in the villains cabin and tells everyone to vote for Duncan and Gwen. They others agree because Courtney reminded them that both have won a season. Sierra and Lindsay bond over a convo about how much they miss their boyfriend/and Cody. Brick feels lonely so he tries to befriend Dawn and Owen, he pretty much fails as his awkwardness bit him in the buns. Heather is sitting on the cabin stairs, wanting to get away from the arguing. The robot comes around and bugs her to the point where she gets water and pours the clear liquid on it. When she did, a massive explosion caused a familiar face to be reveled, Alejandro. Much to everyone's shock Alejandro is now in the game again and gets a Huge target on his back due to season 3. Chris does the outro and ends the episode.
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Episode 2: Chris does a recap on the past occurring events, plays the intro and the scene fades in on Gwen and Duncan sitting on the docks, Duncan has his arm wrapped around her and Gwen is resting her head on Duncan. Courtney is hiding in the bushes secretly hating on the couple. She revels in a confessional that she had depression after world tour because she lost all her friends, her boyfriend, and the money. She plans to get revenge on them both for putting her through all that drama and loss. Gwen revels in a confessional that she still wants to be Courtney's friend, even though Courtney hates her guts, and that she is slowly losing interest in Duncan. Mike, Cameron, and Zoey create an alliance and promise to vote together, which gives Sierra an uneasy feeling. She went ahead and attempted to make an alliance with Brick, Lindsay, Dawn, and Owen; she didn't really go about it so well and now made herself a target. Chris starts the first challenge which is to have 8 jumpers and 1 pusher. The Jumpers will have to jump off the cliff one by one; a hero and a villain, like the First TD challenge ever, then must find one of the many key stored at the bottom of the water, which is filled with man-eating Sharks. The pusher will start pushing their cart with their teammate who has a key to the spa hotel and must push their teammate all the way back to the beach if it's a dud key. The first team to unlock the spa hotel get's a night's stay and immunity for the elimination. That being said, Jo wants to prove that she is a big asset to the team so she volunteers to be the pusher. Lightning wants to be pusher, so to avoid anymore arguing, Jo lies and said she has won the cart pushing event 4 times in the Olympics so Lightning backs off. Courtney wants Owen to do it since she thinks he will most likely fail to keep up with Jo. She is also planning his elimination because she realizes how much of a threat he is. At the cliff Chris happily announces that Fang is back this season, much to Scott's horror. Chris is all "It's time for you bozos to start jumpin'!" Courtney goes first and jumps along with Noah. Courtney: Dud, Noah: Dud. Brick and Duncan are next. Duncan winks at Gwen, who sighs and looks down at the ground which puts off Duncan. Brick: Dud, Duncan: Dud. Next up is Scott and Dawn. The two out of nowhere get into an argument and the two get pushed off by Chris. Dawn: Dud, Scott: Dud. Owen is getting tired while Jo isn't. Heather and Sierra are next, they girl exchange glares and jump. Sierra lands right on a Shark and starts fighting them all. Heather confesses that Sierra needs to go for reminding her of Eva from season 1. Heather: Dud, Sierra: Dud. It's Anne Maria and Zoey's turn; the two do exactly what Sierra and Heather did before and exchanged glares. They started to brawl and feel over the cliff into the water. Anne Maria got her key and left Zoey to deal with the sharks. Anne Maria: Dud, Zoey: Dud. Owen is exhausted and can't push anymore so Zoey had to run to the hotel. Lindsay and Alejandro are next. Gwen confesses she will try to make it up to Courtney. Alejandro: Winner! Lindsay: Didn't make it in time. The villains are the winners and immediately rush to the hotel, except for Gwen who goes over to wish Courtney luck in the elimination. Courtney dismissed Gwen's kindness and told her to beat it, much to Gwen's disappointment. At elimination the bottom three are Sierra: For what she did earlier, Courtney: For making Owen push, and Owen: For also being the reason that the team lost. Owen was eliminated with Mike, Zoey, Cameron, Courtney, and Sierra voting against him. Chris does the outro and ends the episode.
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I can see why you would rewrite this season though I actually thought All Stars was funny.
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My overall rrview is a 7/10. You portrayed this season very well, and you made each episode special and unique in its own way.
The Gwen and Duncan romance was a favorite of mine, and you guys made me like it even more. It was fun to see Owen and Noah team up woth Dawn, and even the relationship Dawn and Noah share is just one of the better changes of the show. Having Brick around was nice too, and it's unfortunate that he was SUPPOSED to be in All Stars, but they swapped him out with Sam. Alejandro and Heather clearing the air with each other is a great change, even if everyone still hates them (or more specifically, Heather and Alejandro hate each other) Zoey Mike and Cameron are usually characters I'd ignore, and even if I don't like the whole Mal thing, you actually made him as bad as Duncan said he was, all we got in the show were some cliche tatics and overused cheating methods. Anne Maria was somewhat respectable, even if she was a complete filler of a character, especially when she burns Jo. Speaking of, Jo and Lightning are unlikable, which you aimed for us to feel. Courtney was as diva and sadistic as usual and Geoff and Bridgettes wedding was the best way to say goodbye to the old cast. Also, Lindsay and (somehow) Scott were very forgetable (sometimes i forget that they were even on the show) but I'll let that pass over my head.
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you guys are the best! you really should send this to the producers of Total Drama and see if they'll do it!
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This was a pretty good rewrite, a hell of a lot better than the original All Stars.
All except for that weird Nawn romance. I'll forever be in the minority of the fanbase who dislikes that couple.
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Soo much better than the original! I like how Owen and Brick are here, who really deserved to be in the original All Stars.
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This is going to be way better tan the original All-Stars.
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I thought there weren't enough charecters they should have added owen and leshawna on the heroic hamsters and justin and eva on the villianous vultures
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Hmmm. Lot of people... myself included... were pretty angry about how Courtney and Gwen were used. I see them both there; I'd be curious as to how you'll use them.
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If we knew how then we would. But no this is just going to be a written thing.
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Sorry didn't meant mean to get you angry.
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I'm not angry. I apologize if it seemed like I was.
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