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Yeller7 [2014-06-09 04:27:22 +0000 UTC]
Looks really good...but something about his eyes doesn't look...I don't know, pissed off enough?
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Yeller7 In reply to JauntyEyes [2014-06-10 00:06:01 +0000 UTC]
I looked up pictures of Levi, and I THINK maybe it is that his eyes should be a bit smaller. I am not entirely sure if that is what is different though. You may be able to tell better if you go look.
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JauntyEyes In reply to Yeller7 [2014-06-10 02:19:00 +0000 UTC]
Maybe. I'm barely used to drawing such small pupils for characters so I unconsciously tried to make them bigger. And in a sense, I tried drawing him similarly to how he's drawn in his side story--which is drawn by a different artist than the original. (a.mpcdn.net/manga/p/22932/4820… )
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Yeller7 In reply to JauntyEyes [2014-06-11 01:00:34 +0000 UTC]
His eyes are still much smaller in that side story though.
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Yeller7 In reply to JauntyEyes [2014-06-11 23:13:20 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I know. That's why I try to obviously point out what I like, but do my best to point out issues. It's hard though, because I obviously don't want to sound rude or that I don't like it, but that's where the positive part of my comment helps. Either way, I know that feel of not getting any good constructive criticism. It's what us artists really want.
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Yeller7 In reply to JauntyEyes [2014-06-13 04:56:39 +0000 UTC]
Well you don't need to ask me. I can telepathically KNOW you want feedback, obviously!
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Yeller7 In reply to Yeller7 [2014-06-10 00:10:26 +0000 UTC]
Oh. I think it may also be the angle of the eyes. They seem to point down, and make him look more depressed than pissed. That may contribute more than the size of the eyes.
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JauntyEyes In reply to Yeller7 [2014-06-10 02:21:51 +0000 UTC]
The depressed look was kinda what I was going for. I was all inspired by his experiences prior to his original debut. So he's probably thinking about that in this picture. Glad you caught that.
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