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Published: 2012-03-27 08:09:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 428; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 0
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Description I think I don't suit the chibi-anime style. I can't make the characters cute enough for that, haha. Well, I attempted my best. ;; I'm also insanely uncreative when I comes to clothing, I can't imagine a thing. Also hair-styles. :c I hope you like it though. I'm also insanely useless at names too, so she'll be nameless for now.

I'll keep trying I guess. /sobsob

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Comments: 6

Drawfest [2012-03-30 13:06:19 +0000 UTC]

Can't see what's so bad about it. The pose is quite cute, and the way you coloured the hair is interesting. The only thing that looks a little out of place is the mouth, not sure why.

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jayuu In reply to Drawfest [2012-04-01 09:23:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh thanks!! Mm.. Yeah the mouth is a little awkard, haha. ^^

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MsPastel [2012-03-27 23:36:46 +0000 UTC]

Since you're getting crits, I shall do one too!

Good job on the curls! I can never manage to draw those right! >< The eyebrows are kinda too high up to the point where our eyes avert it when we see the artwork. The shading is a bit off, I think you should do less pillow shading and more cell shading with a light source. The hair is okay as it is but you should fix the top part. The waist/hip area is a bit awkward. xD

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jayuu In reply to MsPastel [2012-03-28 01:49:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh thank you! *-* I will keep all this in mind. It's nice to hear other people's views on how I should improve.

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negiixo [2012-03-27 08:41:48 +0000 UTC]

Okay MOAR crit time.
I looove the hair. That hue of pink just hnnggg kills me <3
I hope you don't hate me for this but, I have three complaints ;;
Ok, one, I wish she had more hair! her hair is floofly at the top but then just ends up being two strands of hair and I think a little more would make her look goorrg!
Two, the eye color combination looks a little odd to me, I think you should have blended the purple into the pink to make it look softer... I guess.
And last, the arms look like they're... out of the torso, you know? Gives the illusion (at least to me and my lame anatomy skills) that they're apart from her body... kinda. I hope you know what I mean ;;
Pls this doesn't mean I don't like it
I LOVE IT.
Haairrr.HAAAIRR I WANT HER HAIR.

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jayuu In reply to negiixo [2012-03-27 08:46:48 +0000 UTC]

Yeaaah I should've added more hair down the back at least or made the overall hair poofier. For the eye colour, me and kelly couldn't choose a colour so I was like eennniiee meeenieee miniii moooo. Yeah that's how that went by. Uhm, yeah now that you mention it the arms do look awkward just hanging there looking all detached. huurrr you awesome person <33

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