HOME | DD

Jazzi-Crystol β€” I walk alone

#alien #blue #evil #kild #zugis
Published: 2015-08-12 03:20:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 343; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 1
Redirect to original
Description please comment, i love them sooo much more then faves

this is strangely somewhat the scene that came to mind when listening to greenday- i walk alone~

and if you'd like to see exactly what i mean, watch the speedpaint! www.youtube.com/watch?v=7LGw_l…
i did a LOT of experimenting on this piece... im not a very big fan of the lighting effects on this one though >.> ..... ah well, nice disturbing evil~ and no the walls of the city are not really cracked on nor written all over. evil has a very interesting imagination tahts all~ it think i got his nose too big omg WHYYYYY xD ah wells... i hope you like! enjoy~!!
--------

(c) Shadow-Crystol
Related content
Comments: 17

eliariellis [2015-08-12 03:45:31 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


although the idea is really cool, perhaps you could've used more contrasting colors. the usage of blue/cool colors is a good idea, but in practice it is used to much to the point where the subject can be almost barely be differentiated from the rest of the picture, if this is what the artist was going for then A+! but other than that it would have been great to see the artist use different colors to bring out the image:
such as warm colors seeing that the image needs more contrast. the details are what make the image very good! although i'd suggest using less blurs so that we can see the image clearly (sometimes using blurs in the background CAN improve the subjects focus, that is not the case here). the expression on the face cleary shows the viewer their feelings which i really like e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/> the shading is awesome and i'd really recommend giving this artist feedback aswell!
(this is my first critique so bare with me)
overall score: 9/10!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Jazzi-Crystol In reply to eliariellis [2015-08-12 04:53:07 +0000 UTC]

haha, thank you so much for your critique! as i .. think i said in the discription, i wasnt too found of all the darn colors i added in this, i feel like it stole away from teh emotion i was trying to present- but it was kind of an attempt to throw it into evil's dark yet strange imagination- so its wasnt very good for the colors... as for the background... i was completely expirementing xD so i can understand if all that bluring took away from the vision x'D (needs to work on backgrounds ;n; )

but again thank you so much for your critique, i will try and see to doing better next time ^_^

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

eliariellis In reply to Jazzi-Crystol [2015-08-12 04:56:40 +0000 UTC]

ah well, overal you did pretty darn well for experimenting!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Jazzi-Crystol In reply to eliariellis [2015-08-12 05:51:51 +0000 UTC]

fankies, the critique was really helpful for desisions on weather or not i should have added all that crazeh colors xD

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

eliariellis In reply to Jazzi-Crystol [2015-08-12 05:56:54 +0000 UTC]

hey, sometimes crazy is good! XDD

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

eliariellis [2015-08-12 03:45:31 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


although the idea is really cool, perhaps you could've used more contrasting colors. the usage of blue/cool colors is a good idea, but in practice it is used to much to the point where the subject can be almost barely be differentiated from the rest of the picture, if this is what the artist was going for then A+! but other than that it would have been great to see the artist use different colors to bring out the image:
such as warm colors seeing that the image needs more contrast. the details are what make the image very good! although i'd suggest using less blurs so that we can see the image clearly (sometimes using blurs in the background CAN improve the subjects focus, that is not the case here). the expression on the face cleary shows the viewer their feelings which i really like e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/> the shading is awesome and i'd really recommend giving this artist feedback aswell!
(this is my first critique so bare with me)
overall score: 9/10!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Roses-Of-Ruby [2015-08-13 00:11:22 +0000 UTC]

OOO A NEW FAVORITE!

I love that song from green day! The actual name of the song is boulevard of broken dreams, btw, not i walk alone XDD

I love the blue and how the red stands out, and them gorgeous eyes! Beautiful!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Jazzi-Crystol In reply to Roses-Of-Ruby [2015-08-13 00:25:49 +0000 UTC]

pfff- i searched it on youtube and found it named i walk alone omg... my bad! x'D ah well, on the bright side we all get it~
omgeez im glad you like it tho! his eyes just tease us all~

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Cachicabra [2015-08-12 22:18:25 +0000 UTC]

I think the lighting effects looks great! Very gritty ^.^

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

HigekiHigure [2015-08-12 14:53:20 +0000 UTC]

hnnng the hair~
Also his eats~
I love the glowing green and red too ^^

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Jazzi-Crystol In reply to HigekiHigure [2015-08-12 17:32:38 +0000 UTC]

thankies~ i knuuu his hair so so fabuloussss

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Pigeon-Butt [2015-08-12 03:49:13 +0000 UTC]

I love the colors you used for this, they go very well together

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Jazzi-Crystol In reply to Pigeon-Butt [2015-08-12 04:50:42 +0000 UTC]

thankies so much ;u;

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Pigeon-Butt In reply to Jazzi-Crystol [2015-08-13 01:47:08 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! uvu

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Xocotzin-R [2015-08-12 03:38:22 +0000 UTC]

The lights and shadows are amazing!!!!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Jazzi-Crystol In reply to Xocotzin-R [2015-08-12 03:39:35 +0000 UTC]

thankies so muchy

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Xocotzin-R In reply to Jazzi-Crystol [2015-08-12 03:40:36 +0000 UTC]

youΒ΄re welcome ^^

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0