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Danyram1308 [2022-05-02 21:51:16 +0000 UTC]
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FoxFlameBlade125 [2019-10-04 13:15:17 +0000 UTC]
That last part XD the two mikeys runnin’ from Raphael with the T-Phone
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Fanaticguy1001 [2019-10-03 22:07:02 +0000 UTC]
Awesome. I've been thinking about the CMC's getting trained and an idea I've been having is that they ask April, Karai and Shini for it. While the three don't want to betray AJ's and Rarity's trust, they get talked into it by the CMC when they explain their reason. Later, when they get captured, AJ, Rarity and RD scold them for putting everyone in danger and ask them for why they would do that without telling them. The three younger teens reveal that they are jealous of the Rainbooms and Turtles for being heroes since it makes them feel like they aren't worth much and they thought if they (CMC) saved the day for once instead, the others would realize how they were acting.
I got some ideas for dialogue, here it is:
[The CMC ask April, Karai and Shini]
CMC: Pleeeeaaaaaase.
April, Karai and Shini: No.
Apple Bloom: Why?
April: Because we're here to help the girls deal with the rogue magic. We don't want to tick them off by putting you in danger.
Sweetie Belle: But we can help!
Shini: We know, but you don't know what you're getting into and it's dangerous.
Scootaloo: And how's that any different from you?
Karai: Because we have training.
Apple Bloom: And we want to train to so we can help. April wanted to get on the action too when she was startin' off as a ninja.
Shini: Excuse us for a minute. (the three kunoichis walk a bit) That's a good point.
April: That was different.
Karai: Not that big of a difference. You wanted to help the turtles, these three want to help their sisters. It's pretty similar.
April: Are you two forgetting the girls made us promise not to train them.
Shini: Yeah, but they are pretty persistent.
Karai: Besides, you have to think about the worst case scenario.
April: What's worst than the Rainbooms chewing us out for training the girls?
Karai: These girls have potential, and if we don't help them get it, they'll go looking for it somewhere else. Possibly somewhere worst.
(they walk to the crusaders)
April: Before we tell you our answer, I would like to know one thing: Why do you want to be ninjas in the first place so bad?
Apple Bloom: We want to help our sisters.
Sweetie Belle: And something else.
Shini: What is it? (CMC stay quiet)
Karai: If you don't want to tell u s, it's fine. You can tell us when you feel comfortable.
[CMC come clean with the Rainbooms]
Rainbow: Great! That's just great! We're trapped! No weapons! No medallions! No geodes! And no one knows where we are!
Rarity: And I do believe that it won't change even if you keep complaining like that.
Applejack: (turns to CMC) Why y'all didn't listen to us?! We told you this was too dangerous for you and we told you to stay out of it!
Rarity: Whatever made you do this act of foolishness.
Sweetie Belle: You.
AJ, Rarity, RD: Huh?
Apple Bloom: It's just that, you guys always get to be in the spotlight. You're always in the action and have these crazy awesome adventures all the time.
Scootaloo: You're awesome ninjas. You have magic powers. You've been to space and other dimensions. All we get is to hear what you did, be on the sidelines and not allowed to at least back you up.
Sweetie Belle: So we thought that if we took care of this without you we would get our chance to do stuff like you did on our own. But I guess we were wrong.
Applejack: We're sorry. We didn't think we were making you all feel like that.
Apple Bloom: Would it have mattered in the end? It's not like you need us to save the world or anything.
So that's my little thing. An idea I have for the next story is what the effect of the Rainbooms' actions would impact on others around them. It's something that's never really explored and you have to admit, you would feel that way as well if your older relative did that sort of thing and you didn't. It's also interesting as it gives some emotion into the story. But if you still prefer Mikey and Keno to do it, it's cool. But I have an idea about when the Rainbooms find out: Instead of the Rainbooms grounding the CMC, the three ninja vanish on them and ditch them to go after Fishface on their own. It would make sense, especially in the sense that they are teenagers (which I honestly think doesn't get played with enough).
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jebens1 In reply to Fanaticguy1001 [2019-10-03 23:17:31 +0000 UTC]
I'm still having Mikey and Keno be the ones to train them. But maybe I can use the confession for after they defeat Fishface.
And maybe Karai and Shini could agree that Mikey and Keno training them wasn't such a bad idea.
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Fanaticguy1001 In reply to jebens1 [2019-10-03 23:20:57 +0000 UTC]
True, would show the "rebel" thing of them.
Also, I've been thinking of somethings for your EBG story. Have you read my notes?
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Jisow777 [2019-10-03 22:02:11 +0000 UTC]
the 2003 turtle are I'd say on pare with the 2012 turtles if not better as they are older and have hade fought similar and or more dangerous enemies
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TMNTony In reply to Jisow777 [2019-10-03 23:48:13 +0000 UTC]
Perhaps. But you gotta admit. This is funny
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Jisow777 In reply to TMNTony [2019-10-04 05:00:51 +0000 UTC]
I not saying it not funny, it's very funny, and it would be in 2003 raph's character to underestimate kids
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TMNTony In reply to Jisow777 [2019-10-04 05:35:02 +0000 UTC]
I know. I’m just saying.
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Jisow777 In reply to TMNTony [2019-10-04 08:09:19 +0000 UTC]
okay, fair enough
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jebens1 In reply to Jisow777 [2019-10-03 22:57:07 +0000 UTC]
I'm drawing a picture of the two Leos arguing over the way the 2012 Turtles fight. Since they act a little more like ninjas.
Leonardo has a strong sence of honor, and therefore would greatly disapprove of them pulling dirty moves and tricks. And be especially disapproving of the Rainbooms using their powers when they fight.
If you wanna write quotes about it, that's okay.
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calmoose415 In reply to jebens1 [2019-10-04 02:23:16 +0000 UTC]
I'm looking forward to seeing that.
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Jisow777 In reply to jebens1 [2019-10-03 23:33:59 +0000 UTC]
the 2003 turtles used magic the same way the rainbooms use magic on the tengu shredder, and most of the time the 2003 turtles wile honourable, never hesitated to do what was necessary, even some dirty tricks, specifically ninja tricks
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jebens1 In reply to Jisow777 [2019-10-04 00:09:34 +0000 UTC]
I've noticed it too. But do you remember a moment in the episode New Friend Old Enemy? Master Splinter showed Leo to "Seek Victory, Not Fairness". The 2012 Turtles acted more like ninjas.
Also 2003 Leo and Mikey didn't use their powers when they were helping the Justice Force fight Nano.
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Jisow777 In reply to jebens1 [2019-10-04 05:57:10 +0000 UTC]
obviously the idea is not to use it willy nilly, I'd imagen the 2003 turtles would hold their own against the rainbooms with their power and the moment they take the pendants and try again they prove that they've become too reliant on magic, it would make more sense that the two groups would learn from each other not just one learning from the other like the 80s turtles
the fairness thing didn't stop 2012 leo trying to use fairness on dark leo, only for dark leo to hit him in the face in the sombre tunnels, hell some other guy pointed that out and attached that clip to it in the comments
In my 2003/2012 crossover that I'm making (episode 1 almost finish) that's exactly what they do, they learn from each other, I'm not low balling any of them
2012 leo learns how dangerous using gilt and anger made 2003 leo a danger to himself and his family "like youse in
" and 2003 leo learns the true bourdon of been the senci to his brothers and the chance that 2003 splinter might die and learning to cope with that eventuality
2003 mikey learns the responsibility of looking after 2012 mikey and been a big brother and dealing with 2012 mikey's ADHD and 2012 mikey learn not to let been right still means you need proof or wining get to his head like with the battle nexus
2003 raph learns to take his younger counterparts more seriously wile 2012 raph learn to ease up "just a little" when it come to his anger
2003 Donnie gets a good expansion of knowledge when examining kraang tech, but both he and 2003 april help 2012 Donnie and april come to terms with who they are and actually open up about their fillings
2003 casey dose help encourage 2012 casey to take up training with the ninjas in marshal arts to help fight crime better but really the two barely learn anything from this trip
with the help of both the 2003 group and the 2012 group karai also learns to come to terms with who she really is and open up more to her brothers (seriously, hardly anyone acknowledges that 2012 karai and the turtles are essential siblings, in and out of universe) and they all work together to kick 2003 karai's butt in getting her out of this respecting her father when he was a monster (although the cyber shredder may help with that)
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jebens1 In reply to Jisow777 [2019-10-04 07:16:54 +0000 UTC]
Ok, you have a point. Maybe they should learn from one another. But remember this is not your story.
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Jisow777 In reply to jebens1 [2019-10-04 08:08:49 +0000 UTC]
that doesn't mean I can't say what I feel needs to be said, and remember, these aren't our OC's ether, their already existing and well established characters that have had lives long before you or I got into the fanfic weighting biasness, and we can't just make up unnecessary conflicts just to add tension or make them out of character for the sake of the plot (I'm shore that's not your intention but that how it fells sometimes)
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jebens1 In reply to Jisow777 [2019-10-04 23:49:05 +0000 UTC]
After watching a clip of the 2003 Turtles fight the Purple Dragons, I couldn't help but see your point.
But, there's still a difference. the 2003 Turtles usually hit them once or twice and the dragons would be out, and their reflexes were a little slower, at least in Fast Forward and Back to the Sewers. The 2012 Turtles hit their Purple Dragons more then once, since that series had more choreographed fighting and faster relexes, even when they were 2d.
Which is what I'm going to play off in my next drawing.
As for the two Leos, from what I could research, Leonardo has a strong sense of honor while Leo is just honorable. I know that doesn't really mean anything. But I just really think the 2012 Turtles and Leo act more like Ninjas. And Bushido was never mentioned in that show.
But if you know any differences between the two Leos, that doesn't involve behaviors or maturity or experience, let me know. Because I honestly don't.
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Jisow777 In reply to jebens1 [2019-10-05 00:00:52 +0000 UTC]
to truly understand them you have to embrace all aspects of the 2003 turtles not just FF and BTTS, to me they seemed just as acrobatic and sharp as they ever were and it was the purple dragons who were getting better due to better training and tech in the 2003 wile in the 2012 and even the fic their still just run of the mill street thugs
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jebens1 In reply to Jisow777 [2019-10-05 00:42:30 +0000 UTC]
Okay, I admit defeat. There's absolutely no different between the two Turtles! Or the two Leos!
THERE BOTH THE SAME!
It's just that people said Leo was being hypocritical about telling Dark Leo that he was being dishonorable. And the shown clip of Seek Victory Not Fairness. It made me think I was comparing him too much to 2003 Leo.
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Jisow777 In reply to jebens1 [2019-10-05 05:23:44 +0000 UTC]
I was not trying to defeat you, I want to help you, there are differences but it's mostly on how they conduct themselves, 2003 leo is more a natural leader, he is more serious but he's will to listen, like the time he believed 2003 mikey about letherhead and he "usually" is more cactuses about the lone wolf thing wile 2012 Leo doesn't quite come into his own until after 2012 splinter gave him that lecture on been a leader is not about been respected, and his lone wolf stuff is when he gets emotional or thinking keeping secrets will protect his family when all the time they blow up in his face and someone gets hurt
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jebens1 In reply to Jisow777 [2019-10-05 06:34:36 +0000 UTC]
Well, I reread the comment that said Leo was being hypocritical and it said this: "To which I would argue that Leo should know the difference between honor and fairness, so calling out his clone is just hypocritical, and where is the honor in being a hypocrite?"
So maybe that's another difference: 2012 Leo knows the difference. I don't think 2003 Leonardo quite understands that. And after trying to research the difference between honor and fairness and finding nothing, I would think that would make sense. At least that's what I think.
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Jisow777 In reply to jebens1 [2019-10-05 08:56:20 +0000 UTC]
hum, maybe
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DarkMagicianmon [2019-10-03 20:42:19 +0000 UTC]
That's so funny watching Raphael get that kind of beating
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jebens1 In reply to DarkMagicianmon [2019-11-03 08:29:54 +0000 UTC]
Here's something I came up with while reading chapter 2:
Applejack: We're real proud of you, sugarcubes. But how in tarnation do you three know those moves?
Rarity: We surely didn't teach you any of them.
Apple Bloom: While y'all were fightin' this world's Purple Dragons, we decided to do some extra trainin'.
Sweetie Belle: As for how we learned those moves, we learned by watching you guys.
Scootaloo: Of course, we had a little help.
(All point behind the group and they turn to see a smug-looking Splinter)
Ninjas and Rainbooms: Master Splinter?!
Michealanglo: No wonder you three licked Raph so easily.
Splinter: Yes. They are quite the quick studdies.
O'neil: (chuckles) Master Splinter said they learned faster than you guys did.
Donatello: For real?
Apple Bloom: We're a movie club.
Sweetie Belle: We know how to notice some details.
Scootaloo: It's kind of what we do.
Splinter: Yes, young ones. As I said, if you practice and be patient, you will one day show them what you are truly capable of.
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Mekarm [2019-10-03 20:27:38 +0000 UTC]
They will never let him hear the end of it at all. XD
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TMNTony [2019-10-03 17:44:41 +0000 UTC]
Now that’s funny
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missymandy2 [2019-10-03 17:26:34 +0000 UTC]
Poor Raph.
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Retsnom45 [2019-10-03 16:57:34 +0000 UTC]
Right in Raphael's self esteem
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calmoose415 [2019-10-03 16:53:26 +0000 UTC]
Why do I get the feeling that die-hard fans of the 2003 show will hate this?
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Perithefox10 [2019-10-03 16:13:55 +0000 UTC]
Big fight their
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