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atsuyuri-sama [2015-09-30 00:03:27 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
All-in-all, this is an astounding piece!
Your attention to detail is evident in the surroundings EXCEPTIONALLY well - the bubbles in the water, the sunlight reflections off the characters, and the dispersion of the blood. That said, consider paying just as much tribute to your characters traits: it's a little jarring, with this complexity of detail elsewhere, that Katara doesn't have overly visible scales, especially when scales and skin reflect light differently.
Your proportions are clean, too! It IS strange that an unconscious, descending body would be able to keep limbs close, as Zuko did his arms, but it still conveys the intent well. Zuko's pose portrays the closed-off nature of his temperament from canon, as well as highlighting how helpless he is as an injured human out of his element.
It's a little harder to see the 'voyage' intent of this piece - that requires looking beyond this single moment, as well as being aware of both the basics of the Little Mermaid tale and AtAL... and the 'voyage' theme still applies more to Zuko than both Zuko AND Katara. But, if the viewer has that background knowledge, this piece can be applied to your theme and Zutara Week without too much straining.
Ultimately, this is a well-thought-out, complex, 'Little Mermaid-esqe' rendition of Zutara!
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JonesyLove [2015-10-28 16:51:44 +0000 UTC]
i really love this AU. the thought behind is great and so is your technique and style. does this mean the airbenders would have wings? that'd be cool, and the earthbenders living underground! this lends so well to imagination! i am so glad you made this.
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Jessiphia In reply to JonesyLove [2015-12-05 12:10:05 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much! I hadn't really thought about the other benders as certain mythical creatures??? But thats a really interesting thought! I bet the air benders would be harpies or something. Earth benders could be centaurs?? mole people?? WHO KNOWS!! haha
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L-MASTER [2015-10-05 06:36:04 +0000 UTC]
Extreme TT^TT
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samanthalane [2015-09-26 06:47:45 +0000 UTC]
i love anything to do with mermaids and this literally made my night ugh this is so beautiful you are amazing!!
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Jessiphia In reply to thalle-my-honey [2015-12-05 12:11:14 +0000 UTC]
thanks! haha, the AU was such a random whimsy for me, I just love drawing mermaids! But Im glad you like it!
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trillean [2015-09-24 02:27:59 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is so beautiful. Your art is always so amazing.
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trillean In reply to Jessiphia [2015-09-26 01:55:40 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!
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Quander [2015-09-24 00:15:38 +0000 UTC]
Great job! It reminds me of one of the Zutara fan fiction stories I wrote.
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Jessiphia In reply to Quander [2015-09-24 10:06:21 +0000 UTC]
oh oh which one!? I might have read it! I mean, I dont remember ever reading a mertara fan fic, but hey, Im always a slut for avatar AUs! glad you like my work!
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Quander In reply to Jessiphia [2015-09-24 12:24:45 +0000 UTC]
It's called “No Ordinary Love” (in honor of that Sade song and music videos wherein she's a mermaid).
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Jessiphia In reply to CaptainElsa [2015-09-24 10:08:14 +0000 UTC]
thanks so much! I notice a few mistake here and there, but overall Im pretty happy with it! Maybe one of these days Ill revisit this idea and do a better job.
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