Comments: 29
watcher25 [2015-02-19 14:20:00 +0000 UTC]
Too bucking close!
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KiT1212 [2014-11-22 12:23:40 +0000 UTC]
Yup totally making this in SFM!
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t65th556 [2014-05-04 02:05:44 +0000 UTC]
well, it seems that the gun that she has might interest a friend a lot his name is Russian though he may some times replace any s with z just to sound like a English\Russian but still awesome gun
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Aricdabrony [2014-04-23 03:08:47 +0000 UTC]
I was not so lucky when it came to rockets...
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EUNE7 [2014-02-14 03:26:45 +0000 UTC]
dodging the rocket just in time boom
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neobro555 [2014-02-13 01:27:35 +0000 UTC]
the guns handle looks a bit off to me
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CortadoDrip In reply to neobro555 [2014-02-23 20:54:12 +0000 UTC]
That's on purpose. If you've read the early part of the story, it's mentioned that earth ponies fire using their tongues, hence the reason for the sideways handle.
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neobro555 In reply to CortadoDrip [2014-03-31 21:56:19 +0000 UTC]
so they always hold their guns like gangstas
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Bogren [2013-09-24 20:00:39 +0000 UTC]
Saw BrentOGara's version and decided that I had to see the original. Very nicely done! One of the best stories (fanfic or otherwise) I've ever read and it's awesome to see art like this based on it!
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killer-931 [2013-07-15 02:11:47 +0000 UTC]
I have a question: am i able to use this pic for a project i'm doing? i promise to give credit.
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SomberTone [2013-07-11 15:16:50 +0000 UTC]
Excellent work as always. It's nice seeing you do a full-on action scene.
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FuyuStorm [2013-07-11 01:59:43 +0000 UTC]
Can I ask a question?
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JetWave In reply to FuyuStorm [2013-07-11 09:15:10 +0000 UTC]
I suppose.
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Zubias [2013-07-10 06:02:45 +0000 UTC]
Sweet! Looks really good.
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RoyCalbeck [2013-07-10 05:38:23 +0000 UTC]
Nice action piece!
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MasterPotatoe [2013-07-10 05:22:50 +0000 UTC]
point in story, i would either guess just after resetting the power in the stable that had the crusader mainframe or when she's retaking Stable 2
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Sire-Sword [2013-07-10 05:07:32 +0000 UTC]
She looks like shes trying to do ballet. Just saying.
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JetWave In reply to Sire-Sword [2013-07-10 07:19:35 +0000 UTC]
... I feel the same. xD During development, I did ask some friends if they were seeing it as well, but all seemed pretty much clear. I did tilt her a bit on Fuzzy's recommendation though and I believe it helped quite a lot, even if not fully. ^^
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batosan [2013-07-10 02:24:36 +0000 UTC]
Neat work! The battle to stop the Steel Rangers placing the mind of their commander in the stables supercomputer?(it's been so long since I've read FOE the original. I'm just no good with the names and places anymore!)
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BrentOGara [2013-07-10 02:08:49 +0000 UTC]
This looks very good, I like that you used the GECK to create your own reference image to ensure the background was done right. I really like the feeling of motion and activity you have, although I wonder what the weapon behind her (that's causing the red lighting effect) is... I can't decide if it's a shotgun or a laser weapon... but lasers don't leave smoke trails... neither do shotguns, but perhaps it's the mother of all muzzle blasts?
As for the "something missing"... that would be texture and shading. You do have rudimentary forms of both already in the image, as the rough, scattered brush you used to block in the shadows does give it a bit of texture, and there are some rough shadows present... but neither has been brought up to the level of detail that the rest of the composition enjoys.
That's the problem with really nice line art and a buckin' sweet background... you've got to have equally awesome shading to keep up the overall quality of the image... and yours could stand to be at least 20% more awesome. If you don't mind me putting my cyborg paws on your work, I'd be happy to post an example paint-over in my sta.sh (with a link just for you, of course).
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HaveBKYourWay In reply to BrentOGara [2013-07-10 03:07:14 +0000 UTC]
I do not think there is a laser weapon or a shotgun behind Littlepip. I think that is a rocket shooting past her.
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