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JigokuHana — Pondera - Prologue Pg8
Published: 2011-08-23 21:33:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 2771; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 0
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Sorry for the Tuesday update, guys.I had a bunch of stuff to do last week, so I didn't really have much time to work on this page. Family stuff. You understand.
Anyways! Just one more page of the prologue & then chapter 1 can officially begin.
And the illness that the Followers dealt with was a form of altitude sickness. Which can form into something fatal I read. (Read on wikipedia though, so if my logic is flawed I apologize.) I mean really. Did you honestly expect me to launch these people into the sky without some side-effects?
And here we get the first glimpse of Maly's older brother~! Even he's shocked at how clumsy Maly can be. Honestly girl, look were you're goin'!!
And btw....drawing houses is a PAIN IN THE ASS! (And my wrist.) I can lay them out all blueprint-like from an above shot no problem. But normally? Pfft. It's murder on my brain.
Enjoy.
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Comments: 18
Hey, I didn't know she had an older brother. That's actually kind of rare in fiction. lol This is really interesting, but it might have been nice to see some of the altitude sickness that you mentioned. Gotta be careful with over narration, though I do get the you're trying to get through the prologue and to the actual story. The house looks GREAT, by the way. Your work payed off.
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huh. yeah i guess you're right. XD
The altitude sickness thing will come into play later on, and sorry about any over-narration that may occur. (Gotta keep myself in check with that.)
Thanks....I kinda wanna live in that house.
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It's cool. Don't wanna over criticize, just trying to help, as usual. lol
I don't blame you. It's a cool-ass house.
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Criticism is always helpful, even if it's about the little things.
I love any houses with stonework in them. ^_^ Lends a bit of character to it.
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I love this so far x3 And also, on panel 4, wouldn't the inside of his left cheek not be visible due to the angle he's looking? O.o
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You're right. >_< But I think I just had one of my anime anatomy moments there.
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lol it's fine, not really noticable anyways 
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Keeps getting more and more interesting
This could also be a social critique about religion, pop stars and everything people wordship without a second thought. n_N
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Still only in the prologue and the poor girl already fell twice? I feel like by the end of the story she'll be in a body cast
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lol She learns to look where she's going as she gets older.
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