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CHOCOCHIYOKO [2010-08-09 23:14:00 +0000 UTC]

Hah its time I give YOU some feedback!! Wahoo! I like this piece, the mood and tone and composition are nice, as is the background.....er, but what exactly is he sitting on o_0. Also I think you like kinda forgot the rest of the body her body lol
Now onto the actual people: the clothes and shading are osm...oh and the hair is okay....its just not like great...im not sure I can explain it .....It just looks like in the middle of realistic and anime and it looks kinda strange....
However I think the girl's nose is a little too wide and her hands are too big (they make her look a little masculin cuz they are as big as his....) Both of their lips are also pretty high and the guy's is aligned a little strangely.... You also need to work a bit on your hands...then again most people dooo.
Anyways hope this helps

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mizz-izzy [2010-08-09 03:48:44 +0000 UTC]

I like the concept of this piece. You did a nice job with the hair- it looks great. I also think that you did a nice job with Minato's hands and nose. The coloring on his clothing is also done very nicely.

I think though that Kushina's hands could use more work. First, they look about the same size as Minato's- but woman's hands tend to be smaller. Also her left hand doesn't look like the shading is right. You have the darkest part as the tip of the finger- but I think that the darkest parts are usually the knuckles and joints. Kushina's nose is the right shape, but I also think it looks a little large for a woman's face. It's also weird how you can't see the rest of her body.

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blunote18-mezmorized [2010-08-08 17:19:20 +0000 UTC]

the moon looks really nice, the way you made it shine is very convincing and the the craters look good. I think kushina's face should be a little bit darker because it seems like the light source is coming straight from the left, but the moon is more behind them than to the side of them. her nose seems a bit too flat, and minato's looks out of position, It looks like it was turned a little clockwise out of place, and I think it would be more realistic if they had fingernails. also, some parts look too 2-dish, like kushina's hands and arms and minato's clothes and the outer layer of the clouds. The shading of Minato's face looks nice and i like the way you mad the clouds in behind the front layer. The anatomy looks good, though it seems like minato's right shoulder is too small, and I like how you drew kushin's eye.

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pheonixrise1313 [2010-08-08 12:29:21 +0000 UTC]

The hands are good with the exception of Kushia's hand that is down Minato's chest (I am just using the names for sake of explaining). You have her knuckles dark and with the hand flat they are normally not dark at all (and I can't tell which side has the thumb and which side has the pinky) . I like the hair, but in the future remember your light sources. Where you shade and highlight is very dependent on where your light source is. Minato's ear is a tad off (It may stick out too much or is to short) and the only thing that really needs work are the eyes. The eyes you chose were a little too anime for the rest of the picture. On a positive note, I really love the concept and I hope you will take my advice and produce some amazing.

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