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joeyh3 — Christmas Coco
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Published: 2014-12-25 16:20:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 1392; Favourites: 133; Downloads: 18
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Merry Christmas to all!This one took forever to finish, I think I've been working on it every day for over a week. It also took a lot of help and critique from my friends - Thanks to all of them!
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Comments: 19
Haven't done this in a very long time, but let's do it.
Vision: Well I do like the style that you went with for a pony but the background, even though is not supposed to be main focus of the picture but still needs some improvements. Like the half-transparent mountainse.deviantart.net/emoticons/r/r… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Originality: Just a portrait of a pony.
Technique: Shadows look good, but I'd also like to see some lighting from the other side to give a picture more brighter look (and realistic) specially on the mane, however that is totally optional! And since it's not a vector, you could not use the pen tool for the stroke but a brush tool. A very thin one so when you're doing the outline it will be more thick/thin at some places - giving it a more natural look. Probably more thinner near the corners.
Impact: Can't give much here as I've seen these kind of styles already a lot and well honestly I'm not that... impressed. Sorry.
However! This is one of your first pictures in this particular style so it obviously can't be awesome. It'll take months before the pictures become great and a year or so to perfect the style. Just doodle and stuff as much as you can, cause knowing you... boy it's gonna be a long time before the next one^^
I hope you weren't offended by this review but I'd rather say what I think than not, cause from the past I learned that it's not good to never speak out loud.
*cracks whip* MOAR VECTORS!
P.S. Feel free to decline this and keep it just for yoursel
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I'll disagree with the critique that says the background needs work; I, for one, like its style. Overall, this looks pretty great!
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Hey! - i don't know this pony but it's a solid picture! I wouldn't change a thing.
That critique is... a bit crudd. Happy christmas to you!
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