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Description Rejected Page for Gregori Project: Acclaimed Pub
Pencils by me
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Comments: 3

Dualmask [2008-07-28 14:18:58 +0000 UTC]

The pencil work is tight, but I can kind of see why it was rejected...a lot of forward facing shots, little variety...if one or two panels had been viewed from behind the characters or pulled away to give a sense of place, it may have fared better. It's not your best...but it still looks better than any comic page I've ever done.

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johnbecaro In reply to Dualmask [2008-09-04 07:49:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks bro! You are correct actually, I just did in just a couple of hours. This was rejected because I mislook the script .lol.

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VivaLaGorilla [2008-07-27 02:22:00 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done.

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