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Jomina — Waiting
Published: 2004-01-22 08:37:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 300; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 100
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Clock, clock, ticks and tocksThe mask it wears truly mocks
The fact that I remain hidden
I'll be true
The fact that I remain here
Waiting for you...
Tick and tock, I wish I could block
The sound of this taunting clock
Stuff some fingers into my ears
Damn you, I've been here for years
I'll close my eyes and take stock
Of my heart; hurry up and unlock
This endless moment of my pain
Damn you, I've waited in vain
Clock, clock, ticks and tocks
The mask it wears truly mocks
The fact that I remain bidden
To wait here
By your command, beck and call
Waiting for you...
Model : Jolene
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Comments: 35
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That's beautiful, definitly my favorite picture of yours so far, a sure
I love the colours, the dark greens and black work beautifully with the white skin and light reflections.
The only thing I might change if it were mine is the bit of floral pattern on the chair which is showing...
-Jez
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I love her porcelain skin...geez this is gorgeous!!! Fabulous...This looks like a painting...Oh my just absolutely beautiful...
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Very nice deviation. The model kicks ass too ! she'z beautiful!
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wooooooooooooooooowwwww
so expressive and deep!!!
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is that really jolene???? geez how different...sorry..didnt recognise her.
obviously, im not commenting on the actual piece..... 
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these pics are brilliant - you gotta tell me what equipment you use - and you are a master of lighting - supreme.
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damn man, this is superb! The light reflecting off the chair against all that darkness is perfect! Really beautiful shot!
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wowh this model looks so different everytime, but always gorg...specially here
perhaps a little too dark in the right corner but damn good anyho
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wow..i really like this..lighting is awesome, and i love how you can only see her hand and face. like the rest of her body just disappeared..lol 
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I love the poem! She looks so peaceful and beautiful!
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Great pose, and contrasting effect. It truly is an amazing piece.
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that's BEAUTIFUL .. god.. i admire your works so much.. 
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One of these days, I WILL be able to use the emoticons without having to check them out first. I meant:
Sorry abou that.
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Jolene looks awesome in this one....kind of like a very pretty Mona Lisa! I love the moody colors and the poetry as well!
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this one i love!! her expression is priceless, like she knows a secre,t well done!!
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Wonderful shot. I love this. I didn't even realize it was Jolene, she looks so different.
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definately one of the advantages of working with her.. she can get these great expressions, that, depending on where i put the lights, makes her into like 5 different people lol i love that its a 5fer!
And thank you! I am definately glad you liked this one, i do believe its my personal favorite of my own goodies lol
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Love the photo in this one especially. Very taunting somehow. Good job.
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oooh jolene looks very different here, is it the makeup? she looks very seductive.
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i really love her expression and the light coming off the chair. What i love the most about this picture is the way her hair blends in with the shadows
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oh look at this
colour!!!!
very vivid colour at that
great balance between the darkness and that lovely vivid green
a nice poem, not as cliched as usual
one of these days......... I'm going to write a poem for one of your photos!!
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I said not *as* cliched as usual
All I'm doing in commenting on your poetry, is encouraging you to push yourself
Because I know that you can do even better
Already your photography blows me away, and you know that 
If you could do that with your writing, that would be awesome
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not as cliched as usual
:eek: Im cliche?
hehe and thank ya i am really glad you liked this one.. it took a looooong while to get done.
And it'd be welcome!
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*grumbles* I need models damnit! Love this pic, alot, excellent pose, excellent lighting and colours, great composition, great poem, love it all.
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