uzushio [2009-01-07 17:30:57 +0000 UTC]
Wow! I can see the improvement from one side of the page to the other. Nice work!
I would say the ones on the left have too little line, and the ones on the right go a little line-heavy. A bit of broken line can help outline a figure, but tone itself can pop the figure from the background.
These are looking good!
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