Comments: 59
JustAnotherTimeLord [2013-11-26 23:33:05 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
It appears we meet once again for my critiques. I shall notify you once again that you still seem to be earning a five-star rating all across the board once again. Truly, you are doing something right.
The vision in this painting is quite clear, and due to the nature of the episode itself, this makes for a far more interesting picture. The use of the vines and or gnarled roots making a barrier around the stain-glass window is very appealing, in a wicked sense. It is interesting how there can be a dichotomy within this picture, as the roots were drawn beautifully, and so was the window, but it is apparent that this is good versus evil.
As I have said before, the fact that you do these title cards makes it original in all possible ways.
The technique used here is rather interesting. Out of all the possible avenues you could have gone down to convey the message of the episode, you chose to draw a stain-glass window with Twilight centered in the middle. I suppose you could call this symbolic, if you watch the second episode, that evil attacks things seen as fragile, but little does evil know that it is far stronger than it had anticipated. I was also drawn to the fact that you made the glass in perfect symmetry, with Celestia's sun on the left and Luna's moon on the right. Though, I get a sense of over-glorification of Twilight in this sense, especially when her cutie mark/Element of Magic symbol is placed in the center of the sun. Of course, this is how the show usually plays out anyway, seeing as she is generally the main character, so this works rather well. Were it not based on the show, I would probably have found it detestable, as I have grown adamant towards the show's ploys at establishing Twilight as a super mare.
The impact is exactly as you wanted it to be, no doubt. The vines or gnarled roots surrounding the picture give a sense of forbearance, almost fear, as you feel constricted and quarantined. Though, the picture is the exact opposite of this. It has a plethora of colours, a rainbow beacon of hope, so to speak. It continues to shine even when the darkness closes in, and this is a major and resounding point through not only this episode, but the entire show.
Once again, all of these additive elements create a true work of art that conveys every possible sense of the first episode. One key point I should point out is that while the stained-glass represents hope, it is only shining on one side, not both. While one could say that that is due to Luna representing the night, does the moon not shine? For this, I could imagine it would be best representative of the two-part premiere, where you find great failure and fear before success and triumph can be achieved.
Thanks for your time, and thanks for the art!
—JustAnotherTimeLord
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seanchow806 [2017-05-17 06:26:07 +0000 UTC]
Where is part 2 of Princess Twilight title card?
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CaldoRosa [2014-11-21 05:10:27 +0000 UTC]
Very impressive
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Kfcnyancat [2014-08-20 22:21:04 +0000 UTC]
Pretty cool even though I HATE this episode.
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Kfcnyancat In reply to ultrablud2 [2015-10-11 21:37:02 +0000 UTC]
The entire episode felt like plot setup for something that was just barely used. It was boring. I generally don't like plot setup episodes.
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POLE7645 [2014-07-06 00:45:17 +0000 UTC]
Am I the only one who's reminded of the Beauty and the Beast stainglass windows (especially the one that show the castle being cursed)?
That would make a wonderful title card.
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Bluemansonic [2014-05-04 04:59:51 +0000 UTC]
where's the part 2 card?
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Dogman15 In reply to Bluemansonic [2015-03-08 10:50:11 +0000 UTC]
He hasn't made it. He might make it in the future.
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Bluemansonic In reply to Dogman15 [2015-03-08 21:48:44 +0000 UTC]
I know, its been over a year
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Yami-Marik93 [2014-01-17 00:52:00 +0000 UTC]
At first. I thought queen chrysalis up to know good again cuz of the leaves on the vines.
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Rainbow2-0 [2013-12-09 23:40:12 +0000 UTC]
"ARE YOU SERIOUS RIGHT NOW?!?!"
(Quote from Roman Pierce in "Fast Five")
THE SEASON 4 IS ALREADY OUT?!?! YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSS!!!!
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EvaDraye [2013-12-02 04:03:18 +0000 UTC]
My favorite from the series. Love how you depicted the impending sense of danger around the edges with the vines. The coloration is great, too.
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NebulaNyx1 [2013-12-01 08:36:41 +0000 UTC]
I wish these were official, they should be there that good.
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idislikecake [2013-12-01 03:29:14 +0000 UTC]
Twilight Sparkle: can't touch dis!
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AVasquezArt [2013-11-30 00:38:48 +0000 UTC]
awesome
capture the whole 2 part.
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Animewolfgamer [2013-11-28 23:36:01 +0000 UTC]
Wow that is awesome!
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JamesRye [2013-11-28 22:51:48 +0000 UTC]
Lemme guess: Part two gonna have black vines, right? XD
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RainbowDashie41 [2013-11-27 17:25:17 +0000 UTC]
OMG that is brilliant
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Macbow333 [2013-11-27 04:22:57 +0000 UTC]
It's funny that you should mention the Gak commercials that aired during the S3 Premiere so long after the fact. We all hated them so much, but the marketing team didn't really care if we liked it or hated it, just as long as we didn't forget it. The best way we could've made Gak go away was not by voicing our displeasure, but instead simply saying nothing and letting those commercials fade away to time.
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Ziggie1o1 [2013-11-26 11:02:38 +0000 UTC]
So... I have to ask, why are some of the episodes missing? Do you just not make title cards for the episodes you don't like?
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Awdren In reply to Ziggie1o1 [2013-11-26 13:56:21 +0000 UTC]
I don't know for certain, but I don't think on the day of the premiere of Season 1 Episode 1 he said, "This show needs me to make title cards." I don't even know how long he's been a brony (probably longer than me though). Even then one would have to consider his need for food and sleep, not to mention employment and/or at least the minimal interaction with society to keep his internet connection. And I'm sure like a lot of artists on this site he does commissions, requests, and personal projects which he may or may not post.
What I am for certain is that Jowybean has expressed displeasure in some of 'his' title cards, feeling like they were rushed, sloppy, or not thought out as deeply as others he has made. Whether it be an artist of visuals, words, or both; I can see cause for pride in works of the author who appreciates their own work, and not just doing it to make cash.
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twilicornplz [2013-11-26 09:04:29 +0000 UTC]
In my eternal glory, I shall forever be a visage for all ponykind to see. Forever they shall experience the excitement* of having me as their most beloved princess. Well done, my loyal subject, well done.
* Excitement may be due to sheer fear and terror of their power hungry, blood thirsty, ruler.
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DeJiKo07 [2013-11-26 07:10:03 +0000 UTC]
Awesome!
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LuRose98 [2013-11-26 04:04:02 +0000 UTC]
Wow! This has to be by far one of the best title cards you've done.
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templar127 [2013-11-26 03:43:50 +0000 UTC]
YUS!!!!
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HurricaneY [2013-11-25 22:49:05 +0000 UTC]
Yooooooooo. This is absolutely fantastic!
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britpony [2013-11-25 22:42:12 +0000 UTC]
bucking awesome
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Jakeneutron [2013-11-25 20:35:06 +0000 UTC]
Love it... Where's her horn?
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mattstorm360 In reply to Jakeneutron [2013-11-25 22:43:41 +0000 UTC]
Look closely at her crown and you will find it.
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A-hardie [2013-11-25 16:20:56 +0000 UTC]
Ok, nice colour, the slight wash out definitley makes me think of a stained glass window. However, my only slight criticism is I might suggest making the 'barriers' between the glass segments a little thicker and further shaded to give a sense of metal. Other than that, the edges are good, really feel like glass. The vines have an interesting feel, looking rather etheral, whether or not is intentional i'm not sure but it fits the 'seeds of discord' feel
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jupotmachine35 [2013-11-25 15:06:15 +0000 UTC]
This. This is art in all its holiness....
I greatly envy you, sir...
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Twylite-Sparkle [2013-11-25 13:25:26 +0000 UTC]
Awesome as usual! I like how S4 is already revitalizing the artistic juices of fellow artists, & this time I get to be a witness bs it's happening.
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werecass [2013-11-25 11:53:59 +0000 UTC]
Awesome.
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PegasusMeteor [2013-11-25 10:03:13 +0000 UTC]
Impressive and mysterious.
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AppleCider1412 [2013-11-25 05:40:21 +0000 UTC]
lol if you drew this title card for the premeire! and JUST episode one. can't wait to see what you draw after you see episodes 4 and 5.
(i know what's gonna happen in the first 10 episodes but i've been sworn by friends to a pinkie promise of no spoilers to people who don't want them. i can't tell if you don't want to know)
4 being a great episode together and 5 being my fav and one i know you'll love.
but i can't wait to see more title cards from you
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SwordSparks [2013-11-25 04:49:15 +0000 UTC]
Amazing!
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Dragaun [2013-11-25 04:29:56 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful work as always
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