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Jswrongchoice — Painful Bite
Published: 2008-11-13 16:43:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 98; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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I never could have seen it comingeven if I'd seen it before it came
that one single night was all it took
To realize all the sins I have causes
Too everbody that I love
As I lay here on the cold moist ground I kept
thinking did I really need this punishment
for having some fun in my life?
could it have been for all the times that I lied when I wanted to have some fun?
could it have been when I joked about my belief?
could it have been my fault for my parents seperation?
could it have benn when I walked out that door while leaving yo two behind?
Now looking back I realized that do need to die, I can't even remember any good memorys that I shared with you two. I want to go back to that day when I walked out that door and cry for all the selfish things I did. Now I can''t go back ever again or even say I was sorry for the stuff I said or did. to everybody I'm dead and they will be happy.
I'm so sorry that I lied just to have some fun!
I'm so sorry that I joke about my belief!
I'm so sorry for walking out that door and never seeing you two ever again!
I'm so sorry for all the pain I've caused!
As shocking as it is tonight and all it took was one painful bite and all that I thought I knew was a lie.even though I'm dieing slowly I will only feed upon those who should deserve to die.
After tonight I will be a
creature of the night who can't
love among the living.
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"After tonight I will be a
creature of the night who can't
love among the living. "
i like it..
^^
keep it
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thanks!
I'm not even going to change it.
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Yeesh... There's a lot of dark stuff in there. I do hope this is all story stuff, and not actually your emotions...
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Well part of it is my emotions though... only a two lines i think. I like anything that is really dark.
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Even if you think everything's your fault, it isn't. It can't be. So many things can't be placed upon one person's back. I know there's a lot of things that are my fault and maybe I'm being a hypocrite telling you all this stuff here, but even when I know it's true it's hard for me to sit back and think about it. But this is the way we learn. We make mistakes and hopefully learn from them. It's a good poem though.
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No I don't think its my fault.. I just wrote it cause I was mad with my parents for not letting me go to the drill meet this saturday and all. And your not a hypocrite for telling me this.
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Yeah, I actually have a poem to post that I forgot about till now...I was thinking about it last night and I wrote it in math. If you knew how my mind works and what I'm really like you might see how much of a hypocrite I really am...
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Yeah well my friend Heidi read it and said i should put it up on here so i did and it seems some people like it a lot! and what I can tel you don't seem to be a hypocrite from my pointof veiw you only like to say what your thinking.
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Well it's really good so people should like it! I am a hypocrite. I don't mean to argue, but I don't want you to have a false impression of me.
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Well no I'm not getting the wrong impression I just don't like the word hypocrite thats all
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Okay, sorry. Are you mad at me now? I like the word kind of, except for the fact that it describes me perfectly so it's one of the only words that does. I use it all the time but if you prefer I won't use it when I talk to you.
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its all right you didn't make me mad. its just that I grew up with my cousin and she would tell me that I was an awful writer and she would say something like i'm the bigest meanest hpocrite in all of taunton. its ok its only when you sed it to hurt my feelings and you didn't i was just saying.
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Okay...I can see why you hate it though. I don't think she had a right to say that. There is no way you're the biggest meanest hypocrite anywhere. Your cousin probably was one, though I don't really have the right to say that, now, do I.
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hey you can say what you want I don't care. You have to meet my cousin to understand her problems.
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Yeah, I figured. People with problems tend to either be really nice or kind of mean...But I don't know...
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she's both. its like she satan out to get me or something
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I know people like that...I don't like 'em.
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same here.. I just hate them.
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