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Juandiego1993 — Sprinkle To Rain(Gift for Jade)
Published: 2012-11-15 05:58:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 313; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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First of all happy birthday Jade!!!may you have more!!ok..so I made this drawing For Jade A friend of mine(see her deviants [link]
) as a birthday present(which is a bit pass, but oh well...) so I hop you like it!!this is a combination of a persenal comment she gave me about a song calld Sprinkle To Rain and one of her Deviantarts! ([link] ) in which I see a person jumping(another friend saw a wolf?!!) and thought that it whold be realy cool to make it seem like it's me jumping into her would of emotions and amazing feeling!!!
hope for you the best Jade!! happy birthday!!!
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Sorry for taking forever to respond to this. I was taking a few day break from dA again. But I'm back. Alright I'll try to critique this. I don't typically do that, but I will try my best.
Besides the background, the first thing I noticed was the legs. The legs turned out pretty good, I really like that it begins to disappear when they begin to go higher up on the body, until it is just simply an outline of the torso. I really like how you did that.
The bottom of the pants could be a little more flared. I only say this because I keep mistaking the pants for socks. But the bottom of the pants can vary depending on what type of pants you are drawing. It's not that big of a deal, but I felt like pointing it out for you.
Now for the shoes, that is a bit harder for me to critique cause I'm not good at feet at all. But something about the shape seems a bit off. Example one of the shoes have a bit of a curve while the other one seems to do a hill like curve.
The effect of the body, arms and head is a really good effect. It's like electricity, it make me feel energized when I look at it. It's like showing the energy inside this person, and I enjoy that feeling when I look at it.
Finally I absolutely love the background, the dark background and the lighter effects contrast nicely with each other making the background wonderful to look at. The background also goes well with the electric like body.
So in general I like this picture. I like to be able to look at it, it is very appealing to the eye.
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thank you vety much Jade!!
your quite good to make honest criticism...
because I know what's right or wrong with this drawing and you described it all very well!!!
I'm quite relieved you have noticed all of the details
(but Im still in a bit of a doubt, whether if you know what the drawing means?..)
but o well, thanks again for your honest criticism!!!
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(In your artist description you mentioned that its supposed to be like you, jumping into my world of color. Which I thought was pretty epic. I don't exactly have perfect shapes like perfect squares or hearts or music notes. But the blobs are definitely pretty close along with a few of the other blurred background. But either way I still thought that was pretty cool.) You're welcome. I'm glad you took the critique well. Haha, I don't typically critique things so I'm glad to hear I did a pretty good job on it.
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I'll Be honist, I know the music notes where never mention but it's supposed to be a small conection of the music so...(yeah.. I thought of the other viewer for a bit XD!!XD!..)
It's kinda cool to know that you don't see exact shapes but the blrury ones so..It makes it that cooler now Lol..
and I know you don't typically critique but what I do know it that you do expres yourself very well and..your critique was the pruf(f?) so yeah XD...
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(Proof I think is the word your looking for :3) I figured it was a nice way to connect to music. and I loved the connection. I'm glad you find the blurs cool. I enjoy them when I see them and seeing something that looked familiar was very nice for my eyes. Well you are very welcome. I'm sure if I'm feeling up to it, I'll probably be able to critique more things you upload later on. As long as I'm feeling up to it of course, cause as of lately I'm going to be under a bit of stress. But yeah I might be able to do that for you if you like?
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you know what!..that sound awesome!!!
(and yeah...that's the one...)
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your welcome!..
im glad you like'd it
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